Editing Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 1 Chapter 3

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Iris was asking with a displeased look.
 
Iris was asking with a displeased look.
   
"It's not a matter of whether I want to see or not. What I mean is you shouldn't do something like that so lightly. Man are far more dangerous creatures than you can imagine, Iris."
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"It's not a matter of whether I want to see or not. What I mean is you shouldn't do something like that so lightly. Man are far dangerous creatures than you can imagine, Iris."
   
 
"...I am not doing this lightly. I had to gather a lot of courage to speak my mind."
 
"...I am not doing this lightly. I had to gather a lot of courage to speak my mind."
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This was originally the first floor of the school building, but since it was now underground, all the windows were covered by metal shutters.
 
This was originally the first floor of the school building, but since it was now underground, all the windows were covered by metal shutters.
   
Because I had nothing to do, I generated some dark matter and practiced altering it's form to pass time.
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Because I had nothing to do, I generated some dark matter and practiced altering its form to pass time.
   
 
"I knew it, I'm still not used to guns weighing this light..."
 
"I knew it, I'm still not used to guns weighing this light..."
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"...You look very exhausted. Are you doing okay?"
 
"...You look very exhausted. Are you doing okay?"
   
"Y-Yeah, I'm fine. It's just that the testing dragged on for too long, I'm hungry."
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"Y-Yeah, I"m fine. It's just that the testing dragged on for too long, I'm hungry."
   
 
Iris answered with a nervous expression. She was probably unused to being treated so gently.
 
Iris answered with a nervous expression. She was probably unused to being treated so gently.

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