Editing Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 2 Chapter 3

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I frantically asked her but Lisa shook her head in denial.
 
I frantically asked her but Lisa shook her head in denial.
   
"No, I am not angry at all. However... Punishment is necessary for those seeking atonement. Before she gets consumed by guilt, her wrongdoing must be settled first."
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"No, I am not angry at all. However... Punishment is necessary for those seeking atonement. Before she gets consumed by guilt, her crimes must be settled first."
   
 
For some reason, Lisa glanced at Mitsuki momentarily before answering in a calm voice.
 
For some reason, Lisa glanced at Mitsuki momentarily before answering in a calm voice.
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Tia was rubbing her head where Lisa's fist had struck her. Tearfully, she looked at Lisa.
 
Tia was rubbing her head where Lisa's fist had struck her. Tearfully, she looked at Lisa.
   
"That goes without saying. Punishments are meant to hurt in the first place. But with this, Tia-san, you have atoned for your mistakes. You don't need to feel guilty anymore for what happened. Whether myself or everyone else, we are all fine with it. Am I right?"
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"That goes without saying. Punishments are meant to hurt in the first place. But with this, Tia-san, you have atoned for your mistakes. You don't need to feel sorry for what happened any longer. Whether myself or everyone else, we are all fine with it. Am I right?"
   
 
Lisa sought agreement from the group. Everyone nodded in response.
 
Lisa sought agreement from the group. Everyone nodded in response.

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