Editing Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 2 Prologue

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Then, with broken words, he replied in the language the girl used.
 
Then, with broken words, he replied in the language the girl used.
   
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"You are a, cute, girl."
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"You are a, beautiful, young lady."
   
 
With a comforting smile, in a kind voice, he said.
 
With a comforting smile, in a kind voice, he said.
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The boy asked the dazed girl, enunciating each word slowly.
 
The boy asked the dazed girl, enunciating each word slowly.
   
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"...S-Sure."
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"...n-nn."
   
 
Somehow having a hard time breathing, the girl nodded. Her heart beat like an alarm clock.
 
Somehow having a hard time breathing, the girl nodded. Her heart beat like an alarm clock.
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The witch of disaster who appeared in front of her, having scorched everything, was the one who taught her that.
 
The witch of disaster who appeared in front of her, having scorched everything, was the one who taught her that.
   
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"Tia, you are—a ''dragon''."
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"Tear, you are—a ''dragon''."
   
 
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