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The ceiling had a chandelier as one would expect. The bed in the room was also especially huge. I opened the closet standing on the side of the wall and saw a large amount of menswear made with top-quality fabric and designs.
 
The ceiling had a chandelier as one would expect. The bed in the room was also especially huge. I opened the closet standing on the side of the wall and saw a large amount of menswear made with top-quality fabric and designs.
   
The windows seemed to open up to a balcony. I tried to open the windows gently and cold wind immediately blew into the room. Although it felt a bit cold since I had not changed yet, I still tried walking in the balcony.
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The windows seemed to open up to a terrace. I tried to open the windows gently and cold wind immediately blew into the room. Although it felt a bit cold since I had not changed yet, I still tried walking in the terrace.
   
 
The sun had completely set by now. The stars were twinkling in the sky. Perhaps due to the altitude, the stars looked nearer than usual.
 
The sun had completely set by now. The stars were twinkling in the sky. Perhaps due to the altitude, the stars looked nearer than usual.
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I heard someone open a window. Since Tia and Lisa were rooming together, the room on my right was empty while the left one was Iris', which meant that—
 
I heard someone open a window. Since Tia and Lisa were rooming together, the room on my right was empty while the left one was Iris', which meant that—
   
I spun left to have a look and instantly met eyes with Iris on the adjacent balcony. Our balconies were not connected. Although there was a gap separating them, there was no partition to block our view.
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I spun left to have a look and instantly met eyes with Iris on the adjacent terrace. Our terraces were not connected. Although there was a gap separating them, there was no partition to block our view.
   
 
"Oh..."
 
"Oh..."
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"We think alike, Mononobe."
 
"We think alike, Mononobe."
   
Iris smiled happily. Leaning out from her balcony, Iris extended her hand towards me.
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Iris smiled happily. Leaning out from her terrace, Iris extended her hand towards me.
   
 
"H-Hey, that's dangerous, you know?"
 
"H-Hey, that's dangerous, you know?"

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