Editing Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 4 Chapter 1

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Kili frowned as though she was hearing the term for the first time.
 
Kili frowned as though she was hearing the term for the first time.
   
"It's the NIFL team that barred your way when they were taking action to get a hold of Tia. Don't you remember?"
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"It's the NIFL team that barred your way when they were taken action to get a hold of Tia. Don't you remember?"
   
 
"Ah, you mean that inexplicably troublesome team. Yes, they are a threat too."
 
"Ah, you mean that inexplicably troublesome team. Yes, they are a threat too."
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"Then you mean there are other enemies?"
 
"Then you mean there are other enemies?"
   
"Yes, of course. However, it'd take forever if I had to list them all out, because I have too many enemies. That is why I have no choice apart from seeking your assistance in order to escape their pursuit and find safety."
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"Yes, of course. However, it'd take forever I had to list them all out, because I have too many enemies. That is why I have no choice apart from seeking your assistance in order to escape their pursuit and find safety."
   
 
Kili looked at each of us then turned her gaze back to Shinomiya-sensei.
 
Kili looked at each of us then turned her gaze back to Shinomiya-sensei.

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