Editing Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 5 Chapter 2

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The first to finish eating my bread, I was looking up at the blue sky. Then I looked at Iris.
 
The first to finish eating my bread, I was looking up at the blue sky. Then I looked at Iris.
   
"Yeah, because Lisa-chan is in trouble, Mononobe, you must help her."
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"Yeah, because Lisa is in trouble, Mononobe, you must help her."
   
 
"...Got it."
 
"...Got it."
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Lisa spoke sharply then pulled my arm forcefully.
 
Lisa spoke sharply then pulled my arm forcefully.
   
"G-Go this way, I shall take you to my specially treasured location. It is a place where virtually no student in the Academy knows of."
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"G-Go this way, I shall take to my specially treasured location. It is a place where virtually no student in the Academy knows of."
   
 
"A special secret place? I'm looking forward to it."
 
"A special secret place? I'm looking forward to it."

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