Editing Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 5 Chapter 2

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Her black swimsuit was extremely skimpy. Her voluptuous breasts almost looked like they were going to pop out.
 
Her black swimsuit was extremely skimpy. Her voluptuous breasts almost looked like they were going to pop out.
   
"That swimsuit looks really good on you. I can't describe it very well—Anyway, it's very attractive."
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"That swimsuit looks really good on you. I can't described it very well—Anyway, it's very attractive."
   
 
Before I got reminded this time, I hastily took initiative and stammered in praise of Lisa's swimsuit.
 
Before I got reminded this time, I hastily took initiative and stammered in praise of Lisa's swimsuit.

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