Editing Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 6 Chapter 4
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The final treatment probably ended in an instant—Kili did not stop me. After she put down her raised hand, Tia immediately collapsed on her knees. |
The final treatment probably ended in an instant—Kili did not stop me. After she put down her raised hand, Tia immediately collapsed on her knees. |
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− | As though sliding, I caught Tia's petite body, feeble and drained of |
+ | As though sliding, I caught Tia's petite body, feeble and drained of strenght. |
"Stay with me! Tia!" |
"Stay with me! Tia!" |