Editing Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 7 Chapter 2

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When her expression and the view of the river at dusk entered my view, another new memory suddenly surfaced.
 
When her expression and the view of the river at dusk entered my view, another new memory suddenly surfaced.
   
'—Please, stop following me.'
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'—Please, don't follow me.'
   
Troubled and agitated, a girl's voice sounded in my mind.
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Troubled and irritated, a girl's voice sounded in my mind.
   
 
It was not Mitsuki's voice. In terms of timber, it resembled Vritra's voice closely.
 
It was not Mitsuki's voice. In terms of timber, it resembled Vritra's voice closely.
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Kili's dragon mark was on the back of her right hand.
 
Kili's dragon mark was on the back of her right hand.
   
The edges of the dragon mark were turning slightly into an ominous purple.
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The edges of the dragon mark was turning slightly into an ominous purple.
   
 
===Part 7===
 
===Part 7===

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