Editing Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 7 Chapter 3

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The girl looked the same age as me. She was talking seriously to the kitten, trying to convince it. She had a well-proportioned face and long black hair. Dressed in a chic and black one-piece dress... She was neither a girl I had met before nor a student at the same school as me.
 
The girl looked the same age as me. She was talking seriously to the kitten, trying to convince it. She had a well-proportioned face and long black hair. Dressed in a chic and black one-piece dress... She was neither a girl I had met before nor a student at the same school as me.
   
"You'd better leave this town instead of begging food from me if you want to live. Otherwise—"
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"You'd better leave this town instead of begging food from me if you want to leave. Otherwise—"
   
 
The girl continued to persuade the kitten seriously, but she stopped talking as soon as she noticed my gaze.
 
The girl continued to persuade the kitten seriously, but she stopped talking as soon as she noticed my gaze.

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