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"I never thought I'd get to eat the Captain's own cooking..."
 
"I never thought I'd get to eat the Captain's own cooking..."
   
John seemed inexplicably touched. Even his eyes were getting moist.
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John seemed inexplicably touched. Even her eyes were getting moist.
   
 
Everyone was at the dining table apart from Mitsuki.
 
Everyone was at the dining table apart from Mitsuki.
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"The Kraken's child was very obedient. Oh, even though we couldn't understand each other in the beginning, throughout the dialogue process, she gradually started to comprehend what I was saying... She's really smart!"
 
"The Kraken's child was very obedient. Oh, even though we couldn't understand each other in the beginning, throughout the dialogue process, she gradually started to comprehend what I was saying... She's really smart!"
   
John looked especially happy while he spoke.
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John looked especially happy while she spoke.
   
 
"Stop acting like an idiot parent showing off her child and get to the point."
 
"Stop acting like an idiot parent showing off her child and get to the point."
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"Yes. Sleipnir launched a sudden attack while we were camping in the mountain. Reacting late because she was obeying me, the Kraken's child was open... I sacrificed myself to block the attack for her."
 
"Yes. Sleipnir launched a sudden attack while we were camping in the mountain. Reacting late because she was obeying me, the Kraken's child was open... I sacrificed myself to block the attack for her."
   
John touched his chest after saying that.
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John touched her chest after saying that.
   
 
"I definitely suffered a mortal wound at the time. In my fading consciousness, I saw the child in anger—I was already on a bed when I woke up. Kili should know better what happened during that time."
 
"I definitely suffered a mortal wound at the time. In my fading consciousness, I saw the child in anger—I was already on a bed when I woke up. Kili should know better what happened during that time."
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"Wait! It's too early to decide that. Just let me meet that child and confirm with her. Before that, I hope you won't jump to conclusions first. That child is no dragon... She's human."
 
"Wait! It's too early to decide that. Just let me meet that child and confirm with her. Before that, I hope you won't jump to conclusions first. That child is no dragon... She's human."
   
John stood up with a screech of his chair, insisting in a strong tone of voice.
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John stood up with a screech of her chair, insisting in a strong tone of voice.
   
 
"—Personally I feel the same. I hope that child... I hope Miyako's daughter is human. However, we cannot release her so simply given how difficult it was to imprison her. Let us add this proposal to one of our countermeasure options when we take action in the future."
 
"—Personally I feel the same. I hope that child... I hope Miyako's daughter is human. However, we cannot release her so simply given how difficult it was to imprison her. Let us add this proposal to one of our countermeasure options when we take action in the future."

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