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Raphtalia groaned, looking unconvinced. Her hands were preciously holding 'ball.'<br> |
Raphtalia groaned, looking unconvinced. Her hands were preciously holding 'ball.'<br> |
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− | I'm a little confused with the wording here for chapter 15. Are you trying to say that the ball is precious to Raphtalia? If you are you could say that she held the ball protectively. Lol, looks like you're gonna have to do some cleaning here again. [[User:DarkeKyuubi|DarkeKyuubi]] ([[User talk: |
+ | I'm a little confused with the wording here for chapter 15. Are you trying to say that the ball is precious to Raphtalia? If you are you could say that she held the ball protectively. Lol, looks like you're gonna have to do some cleaning here again. [[User:DarkeKyuubi|DarkeKyuubi]] ([[User talk:DarkeKyuubi|talk]]) 15:13, 29 August 2014 (CDT) |
Yeah you might want to add your own interpretation then. Although you could just say Raphtalia held the ball that was precious to her or even go with the one that I suggested earlier which would imply that the ball is important to her or something else entirely. I'll leave it to you to decide. [[User:DarkeKyuubi|DarkeKyuubi]] ([[User talk:DarkeKyuubi|talk]]) 19:05, 29 August 2014 (CDT) |
Yeah you might want to add your own interpretation then. Although you could just say Raphtalia held the ball that was precious to her or even go with the one that I suggested earlier which would imply that the ball is important to her or something else entirely. I'll leave it to you to decide. [[User:DarkeKyuubi|DarkeKyuubi]] ([[User talk:DarkeKyuubi|talk]]) 19:05, 29 August 2014 (CDT) |
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Er, no. They are pretty good but the anon said they were machine translated (when I asked him and also when he initially posted the first chapter). He's been posting pretty regularly so you can ask him yourself if you don't believe me. |
Er, no. They are pretty good but the anon said they were machine translated (when I asked him and also when he initially posted the first chapter). He's been posting pretty regularly so you can ask him yourself if you don't believe me. |
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− | Are we talking about the same translator. The one I'm talking about isn't an anon. |
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=== Anon chapters === |
=== Anon chapters === |
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