Editing User talk:Jn19930

Jump to navigation Jump to search

Warning: You are not logged in. Your IP address will be publicly visible if you make any edits. If you log in or create an account, your edits will be attributed to your username, along with other benefits.

The edit can be undone. Please check the comparison below to verify that this is what you want to do, and then save the changes below to finish undoing the edit.

Latest revision Your text
Line 69: Line 69:
 
At the moment I don't have access to a computer other than a tablet (can't make an account past the cats), but I would be willing to help with this. I don't know Japanese, but I've got a solid 6 years of Mandarin and I'm a native English/Greek speaker. Many of the sentences translate with awkward grammar, and I was wondering if you would be willing to look at some of my suggested edits. I couldn't find the Mandarin TL, however. A link to that would help, so I could try to inform my edits at least one level back. I should be back in front of a real computer on Monday. Thanks for the work so far, ~Volos.
 
At the moment I don't have access to a computer other than a tablet (can't make an account past the cats), but I would be willing to help with this. I don't know Japanese, but I've got a solid 6 years of Mandarin and I'm a native English/Greek speaker. Many of the sentences translate with awkward grammar, and I was wondering if you would be willing to look at some of my suggested edits. I couldn't find the Mandarin TL, however. A link to that would help, so I could try to inform my edits at least one level back. I should be back in front of a real computer on Monday. Thanks for the work so far, ~Volos.
 
: The project is licensed. No work will be allowed in Baka-Tsuki and will be deleted eventually.[[User:Jn19930|Jn19930]] ([[User talk:Jn19930#top|talk]]) 17:18, 3 May 2014 (CDT)
 
: The project is licensed. No work will be allowed in Baka-Tsuki and will be deleted eventually.[[User:Jn19930|Jn19930]] ([[User talk:Jn19930#top|talk]]) 17:18, 3 May 2014 (CDT)
βˆ’  
βˆ’
Hello! Hello~~ Umm... I've actually noticed some very basic mistakes in the editing from the DanMachi series, but I'm not pointing that out to insult your work. The editing errors actually very simple; nonparallel(problem between time tenses [past, present and future]) sentences [and there are a lot of these], that makes it feel a little awkward to read. There's also an additional problem with English grammar, a lot of commas are put in unnecessary situations; for example putting a comma before 'that' makes the reading less fluid. You can fix it on your own terms but I'd actually like to offer my own editing help since my current project(OreShura) is a little inactive at the moment. Just use my talk page if you're interested. I'll probably read the novels before I help out if you accept my offer. [[User:OhHaiTHar|OhHaiThar]] ([[User talk:OhHaiThar|talk]])
 

Please note that all contributions to Baka-Tsuki are considered to be released under the TLG Translation Common Agreement v.0.4.1 (see Baka-Tsuki:Copyrights for details). If you do not want your writing to be edited mercilessly and redistributed at will, then do not submit it here.
You are also promising us that you wrote this yourself, or copied it from a public domain or similar free resource. Do not submit copyrighted work without permission!

To protect the wiki against automated edit spam, we kindly ask you to solve the following CAPTCHA:

Cancel Editing help (opens in new window)