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Hello! Hello~~ Umm... I've actually noticed some very basic mistakes in the editing from the DanMachi series, but I'm not pointing that out to insult your work. The editing errors actually very simple; nonparallel(problem between time tenses [past, present and future]) sentences [and there are a lot of these], that makes it feel a little awkward to read. There's also an additional problem with English grammar, a lot of commas are put in unnecessary situations; for example putting a comma before 'that' makes the reading less fluid. You can fix it on your own terms but I'd actually like to offer my own editing help since my current project(OreShura) is a little inactive at the moment. Just use my talk page if you're interested. I'll probably read the novels before I help out if you accept my offer. [[User:OhHaiTHar|OhHaiThar]] ([[User talk:OhHaiThar|talk]]) |
Hello! Hello~~ Umm... I've actually noticed some very basic mistakes in the editing from the DanMachi series, but I'm not pointing that out to insult your work. The editing errors actually very simple; nonparallel(problem between time tenses [past, present and future]) sentences [and there are a lot of these], that makes it feel a little awkward to read. There's also an additional problem with English grammar, a lot of commas are put in unnecessary situations; for example putting a comma before 'that' makes the reading less fluid. You can fix it on your own terms but I'd actually like to offer my own editing help since my current project(OreShura) is a little inactive at the moment. Just use my talk page if you're interested. I'll probably read the novels before I help out if you accept my offer. [[User:OhHaiTHar|OhHaiThar]] ([[User talk:OhHaiThar|talk]]) |
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+ | == hagure yuusha no aesthetica Volumes == |
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+ | I appreciate the TL of the volumes. I wonder though it’s been years if anyone is feeling finishing the rest I really enjoy the novel and it would be very much appreciated |