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And if you are confused, you can easily compare revisions by clicking on the previous one and my latest one. The multiple entries are necessary because I'm editing a lot of the material, and saving it periodically ensures no work is lost. - [[User:Iro Daijoubu|Iro Daijoubu]] ([[User talk:Iro Daijoubu|talk]]) |
And if you are confused, you can easily compare revisions by clicking on the previous one and my latest one. The multiple entries are necessary because I'm editing a lot of the material, and saving it periodically ensures no work is lost. - [[User:Iro Daijoubu|Iro Daijoubu]] ([[User talk:Iro Daijoubu|talk]]) |
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The part that offended me was when you put "Myoznitnirn murmured" and took out "She is Myoznitnirn" two lines later completely changing the translation. It may make a lot more sense but it was not how it was written. As for the used with "... And" would of been most likely a start of a new sentence in the original Japanese version. The same would hold true for other parts too, but not all. |
The part that offended me was when you put "Myoznitnirn murmured" and took out "She is Myoznitnirn" two lines later completely changing the translation. It may make a lot more sense but it was not how it was written. As for the used with "... And" would of been most likely a start of a new sentence in the original Japanese version. The same would hold true for other parts too, but not all. |
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As for the previous chapter changing "He made her become like that" to "It was his fault" would never be right. Also "Having lost her spirit, she stood on the back of the gargoyle, as if entrusting her body completely to it." to "Louise's body was seen, carried on the back of a gargoyle, she seem to have fainted." |
As for the previous chapter changing "He made her become like that" to "It was his fault" would never be right. Also "Having lost her spirit, she stood on the back of the gargoyle, as if entrusting her body completely to it." to "Louise's body was seen, carried on the back of a gargoyle, she seem to have fainted." |
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Well Joe don't be offended. I have the text with me and I can assure you there is no "She is Myoznitnirn" line. Ok? The whole section including "xxx" Myoznitnirn murmured right up to the end about the runes was one big paragraph. The Myoznitnirn name appeared once and that was in relation to what she said. That previous translation was wrong. |
Well Joe don't be offended. I have the text with me and I can assure you there is no "She is Myoznitnirn" line. Ok? The whole section including "xxx" Myoznitnirn murmured right up to the end about the runes was one big paragraph. The Myoznitnirn name appeared once and that was in relation to what she said. That previous translation was wrong. |
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