Editing User talk:KuroInfinity


== Tate no Yuusha no Nariagari ==

I know that you did it. I just didn't feel like naming any names. I know how the recent changes page works, as well as the history pages. It is a lot easier to keep track of what is happening in this project and other projects that way. Anyway, I took care of the situation for you by talking with Alpaca about it. Alpaca seemed fine with it so we went ahead and changed the rest of the instances of the name that you had missed. Anyway, I'm sure you'll get the hang of things eventually, and nobody is angry with you either. Oh man.. I'm bad at trying to give off the right kind of tone. I had to add some things and rewrite this message a bit. [[User:Reiji|Reiji]] ([[User talk:Reiji|talk]]) 19:50, 27 August 2014 (CDT)

Hey there Kuro. Welcome to the team. I'll be needing helps with the grammar and awkward sentencing stuff(usually taken care of by Reiji). Hope we'll get along, Yoroshiku. PS: Reiji sounds a bit mean but he's a good guy Xd. PSS: Feel free to add yourself in the editor list. - [[User:Alpaca|Alpaca]] ([[User talk:Alpaca|talk]]) 20:18, 27 August 2014 (CDT)

Welcome to the team! :D Lol don't mind Reiji, he's a tsundere (but he's actually all dere dere on the inside) XD If you need help with anything feel free to ask [[User:DarkeKyuubi|DarkeKyuubi]] ([[User talk:DarkeKyuubi|talk]]) 21:29, 27 August 2014 (CDT)

An Impromptu Grammar Nazi Meeting! XD <br>
Just a friendly reminder, most stories (well this one anyways) should be written in past tense. There are a few exceptions to this rule (well there are always exceptions to the rules XD) such as speech, which will be written in present tense but for the most part the story will remain in past tense even if it's the main character's thoughts. On another note the use of - 's - on things such as - name - does not actually equate to - name is - (Name's does not equal name is). This rule only applies to words such as it's, what's, he's. When adding - 's - to other words, it indicates possesion. For example if I were to add - 's - to DarkeKyuubi, I would be making DarkeKyuubi possessive of something. Ex: DarkeKyuubi's tanuki loli equals the tanuki loli belongs to DarkeKyuubi<br>
Phew... that was a lot to write and think about, lol. Not something I like doing late at night. Hopefully you find this helpful and also explains why I reverted some of your edits to chapter 2. [[User:DarkeKyuubi|DarkeKyuubi]] ([[User talk:DarkeKyuubi|talk]]) 23:14, 27 August 2014 (CDT)

Lol, please not DK... It makes me think of Donkey Kong and that is definitely not the image I want to have for myself >___< How about calling me senpai (lol, don't actually. Too many weird things will happen if you do). Dark or Darke will work just fine, thanks [[User:DarkeKyuubi|DarkeKyuubi]] ([[User talk:DarkeKyuubi|talk]]) 09:29, 28 August 2014 (CDT)

its ISBN is 978-4040669967 (look at the link address), and fyi, filo is still a loli(bottom left corner). Tempted to preorder it over o3o. - [[User:Alpaca|Alpaca]] ([[User talk:Alpaca|talk]]) 23:03, 28 August 2014 (CDT)

Sigh... I thought that she grew up because half of her body is covered... -_- Oh yeah are we going to change the name page from Firo -> Filo? --[[User:KuroInfinity|Kuro]] ([[User talk:KuroInfinity#top|talk]]) 23:19, 28 August 2014 (CDT)

Nice editing on chapter 3. I went over it for you. Just be careful when altering some things as although they may both be grammatically correct the style in which it's written can alter the situation. Take for example in chapter 3 the previous line: Your loser occupation will never be able reach a high Level. And the change you made to that line: Your a loser occupation that will never be able to reach a high Level. <br>
There is a grammar error with the missing "to" which you correctly added (yay!) but the context changes slightly with your edit. In the first line the actual class is being regarded as a horrible "loser occupation." However when you changed it to "you're a loser occupation" (yes, I added the you're since it would be grammatically correct) the insult is directed more towards Naofumi, which is something you have to be careful of since they were just saying that shield classes were horrible in all of their previous games.<br>
Other than that, great job on all the editing you've done so far! [[User:DarkeKyuubi|DarkeKyuubi]] ([[User talk:DarkeKyuubi|talk]]) 00:01, 29 August 2014 (CDT)

Haha, just did XD. I still haven't personally went over that whole entire chapter (I will eventually but I had a surprise party thrown for me today :3) Once again great job, oh just something I noticed. When changing "let us" it's actually suppose to be "let's" instead of "lets" (this is the present tense form, as in, he lets her eat cake). This is one of the exceptions to the general contraction rule where the majority of words such as "it's, that's, what's" all mean "it is, that is, what is." Yeah, English is so confusing but at least it's easier than learning 2,000 some odd kanji.<br>
P.S. If you want to know go visit the dark netherworld that is the internets. Find senpai... he will show you what it means to be his kouhai... actually don't it's scawee >___< [[User:DarkeKyuubi|DarkeKyuubi]] ([[User talk:DarkeKyuubi|talk]]) 00:30, 29 August 2014 (CDT)

I will take a look into it in a bit after I'm done with ch16(about 65-70% atm). And learning kanji...... it's a pain in the ass desu. So many word desu. PS: beware of DarkeKyuubi's 「先輩を呼んでください　－　モード」(please call senpai - mode). guhehe - [[User:Alpaca|Alpaca]] ([[User talk:Alpaca|talk]]) 20:27, 29 August 2014 (CDT)

When Ren said 'yeah I guess', he meant that he can kinda sympathize with Naofumi forgetting charged with rape(not saying that he believed that he didn't rape mein) and get the shitty class(shield). It was kind also to shut Naofumi up by just saying something like "suuuuuure". Btw the spacings are pretty much correct, if there's double spacing between normal lines then it indicates a short 'pause' in his thoughts/speech or whatever (I don't recall remember all of the double spacing so just double check that with my original release(that's full of grammatical errors); the '-'s that are not in speech(or whatever people called the lines within "") are also there for the purpose of indicating a short pause or a muffled word in his thoughts, just watch out for those.<br /> On another note sometimes non-contracted lines will hold more authority than contracted ones in speeches. And the last few things that I saw from the edit(biggest one, I went back to work ch 16 after that): there are some cases where a plural or singular form of a word(?.... told you guys I'm bad at grammar) should not be changed(I editted those out in this case, you should be able to see it). With that said, it was good work over all, keep it up. PS: next time if you have questions, don't put it as a ref(I usually never check the released chapters after a day or so since it saddens me to see how bad I am at grammar >_>) post it as a message on my talk page. - [[User:Alpaca|Alpaca]] ([[User talk:Alpaca|talk]]) 21:46, 29 August 2014 (CDT)

I worded Ch 5's lv line a bit wrong there, thanks for pointing out, it was saying 'improved' his lvl (like 20% 30% 40% 50% etc) - [[User:Alpaca|Alpaca]] ([[User talk:Alpaca|talk]]) 03:19, 30 August 2014 (CDT)

Lol, Alpaca's talk page is essentially the talk page for Tate no Yuusha. And don't hesitate to ask questions/help from others, pretty much everyone here on BT is pretty friendly XD [[User:DarkeKyuubi|DarkeKyuubi]] ([[User talk:DarkeKyuubi|talk]]) 14:31, 30 August 2014 (CDT)

No problemo, Uni just started for me too, everyone is busy this time of the year. (just released ch 19 there) - [[User:Alpaca|Alpaca]] ([[User talk:Alpaca|talk]]) 01:10, 4 September 2014 (CDT)

Hi Kuro, I discussed this with Alpaca a bit earlier and wanted to get your & the other editors' opinion about past/present participles.  In my opinion, I think it's better to stick with present tense throughout since Naofumi's 'inside voice' dips into the narrative and this will keep the whole novel uniformed.  But if you have reasons for preferring to use past tenses then please let me know.  Whatever prior chapter proofing doesn't need to be done right away, but it would help if all of us followed the same mentality while editing for verb tenses from now on.--[[User:Soaya21|Soaya21]] ([[User talk:Soaya21|talk]]) 14:32, 9 September 2014 (CDT)
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	Hi Kuro, I discussed this with Alpaca a bit earlier and wanted to get your & the other editors' opinion about past/present participles. In my opinion, I think it's better to stick with present tense throughout since Naofumi's 'inside voice' dips into the narrative and this will keep the whole novel uniformed. But if you have reasons for preferring to use past tenses then please let me know. Whatever prior chapter proofing doesn't need to be done right away, but it would help if all of us followed the same mentality while editing for verb tenses from now on.--[[User:Soaya21\|Soaya21]] ([[User talk:Soaya21\|talk]]) 14:32, 9 September 2014 (CDT)		Hi Kuro, I discussed this with Alpaca a bit earlier and wanted to get your & the other editors' opinion about past/present participles. In my opinion, I think it's better to stick with present tense throughout since Naofumi's 'inside voice' dips into the narrative and this will keep the whole novel uniformed. But if you have reasons for preferring to use past tenses then please let me know. Whatever prior chapter proofing doesn't need to be done right away, but it would help if all of us followed the same mentality while editing for verb tenses from now on.--[[User:Soaya21\|Soaya21]] ([[User talk:Soaya21\|talk]]) 14:32, 9 September 2014 (CDT)
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−	Okay then, got it. Though I'm not sure if Alpaca's comment about the narrative would sway your opinion, it's still a valid point that you bring up so I won't press the issue. After thinking about it, I'm kinda with Dark's (1) thought about the formatting being not all that important overall & that most won't really care about it. I just wanted to hear the general consensus and see if anyone here feels very strongly about whether we should stick with past tense for this story or visa versa.--[[User:Soaya21\|Soaya21]] ([[User talk:Soaya21\|talk]]) 20:26, 9 September 2014 (CDT)