Editing Zero no Tsukaima:Volume10 Chapter6

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Upon which, Louise gazed at Saito with a solemn look.
 
Upon which, Louise gazed at Saito with a solemn look.
   
“Saito. That is wrong. Precisely because we are trying to save someone, we must go through the proper procedures.”
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“Saito. That is wrong. Precisely because we are trying to save someone, we must go through the proper proceedures.”
   
 
“Why!?”
 
“Why!?”
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“You're thinking that the enemy would believe us? Quitting being a knight alone is not enough! At least until you become a wanted person, then only you can be said to have cut all connections!”
 
“You're thinking that the enemy would believe us? Quitting being a knight alone is not enough! At least until you become a wanted person, then only you can be said to have cut all connections!”
   
“But can you actually stop being a noble? At least until you are the same as me, your cheekiness...”
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“But can you actually stop being a noble? At least until your are the same as me, your cheekiness...”
   
 
At that point, Saito noticed Louise's appearance for the first time. Because she was uneasy, he didn't know, but...
 
At that point, Saito noticed Louise's appearance for the first time. Because she was uneasy, he didn't know, but...
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“Returned... you...”
 
“Returned... you...”
   
“Shaddap! With this, I'm just the normal Louise! Same as you, a commoner! Com-mon-er! Thank you very much! I have thrown away both my family name and my pride! So don't just show off like that!”
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“Shaddap! With this, I'm just the normal Louise! Same as you, a commoner! Com-mon-er! Thank you very much! I have thrown away both my family name and my pride! So don't just showing off like that!”
   
 
Saito was very touched, more than he had ever been ever since meeting Louise.
 
Saito was very touched, more than he had ever been ever since meeting Louise.
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''This pink-haired female magic user whose pride was supposed to be so high; my master... She had been so obsessive over the “noble” title, and now she had thrown it away easily.''
 
''This pink-haired female magic user whose pride was supposed to be so high; my master... She had been so obsessive over the “noble” title, and now she had thrown it away easily.''
   
''For a girl like Louise, that was probably something which needed a huge amount of courage.''
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''For a girl like Louise, that was probably something which needed a huge a mount of courage.''
   
 
''If she hadn’t the determination to throw away the life she had built up until now, she could not have done such a thing. That's because, as far as Louise was concerned, her status as a noble was her everything.''
 
''If she hadn’t the determination to throw away the life she had built up until now, she could not have done such a thing. That's because, as far as Louise was concerned, her status as a noble was her everything.''
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“............”
 
“............”
   
Putting that on, she checked her body. She could not feel anything strange at all. Looking around, just like the bed and the accessories, the furniture around her was luxurious as well. It was the furniture of the previous Capet dynasty. The generation during which Gallia had thoroughly achieved the artistic, military, greatest splendor.
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Putting that on, she checked her body. She could not feel anything strange at all. Looking around, just like the bed and the accessories, the furniture around her were luxurious as well. It was the furniture of the previous Capet dynasty. The generation during which Gallia had thoroughly achieved the artistic, military, greatest splendor.
   
 
“Have you woken up?”
 
“Have you woken up?”
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“If you are bored, read a book. I have brought a few here.”
 
“If you are bored, read a book. I have brought a few here.”
   
Bidashal pointed at the few books stacked in a row, which was apparently brought from the mansion of Orleans.
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Bidashal pointed at the few books stacked in a tow, which was apparently brought from the mansion of Orleans.
   
 
“This ''The Hero of Ivaldi'' book is really of great interest.”
 
“This ''The Hero of Ivaldi'' book is really of great interest.”

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