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Then Agnes took one step forth and blocked the knight’s path. The lower half of his face, under the knight's hat decorated with shuttlecock, was covered with an iron mask. Feeling intense pressure for the moment, Agnes grasped the handle of her sword.
 
Then Agnes took one step forth and blocked the knight’s path. The lower half of his face, under the knight's hat decorated with shuttlecock, was covered with an iron mask. Feeling intense pressure for the moment, Agnes grasped the handle of her sword.
   
“Are you a friend of Duke of La Valliere? To go out to meet Her Majesty like this - it’s too much even for a prank. Introduce yourself.”
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“Are you a friend of Duke de La Valliere? To go out to meet Her Majesty like this - it’s too much even for a prank. Introduce yourself.”
   
 
However, the knight ignored Agnes's words, and knelt down on one knee in respect.
 
However, the knight ignored Agnes's words, and knelt down on one knee in respect.
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“Then, this…”
 
“Then, this…”
   
“In other words, I am the Duchess of La Vallière – the mother of Louise…”
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“In other words, I am the Duchess de La Vallière – the mother of Louise…”
   
 
“I took the opportunity to marry and took off my armor. But it is a long story since that time, so please pardon me.”
 
“I took the opportunity to marry and took off my armor. But it is a long story since that time, so please pardon me.”

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