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Though Saito was soaking with blood, he did not move an inch.
 
Though Saito was soaking with blood, he did not move an inch.
   
Confused and paralyzed with fear, Louise’s eyes caught the sight of the wounded Saito. In an instant, her mind, dyed with the pure white of fear a few moments before, now blazed with anger like a raging fire.
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Confused and paralyzed with fear, Louise’s eyes caught the sight of the the wounded Saito. In an instant, her mind, dyed with the pure white of fear a few moments before, now blazed with anger like a raging fire.
   
 
Normally, Louise would never rebel against her mother. She grew up disciplined like that.
 
Normally, Louise would never rebel against her mother. She grew up disciplined like that.

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