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“Liar. Then, why is Miss Vallière depressed so much? What did you do to that girl?”
 
“Liar. Then, why is Miss Vallière depressed so much? What did you do to that girl?”
   
“Hey, she was just teaching me how to read.
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“Just what kind of person you think I am?!
   
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“Is it true?”
“Are you really sure it's just that?”
 
   
“Of course! Why shouldn't be it be just that? Louise is depressed about her magic not working. Hey, Louise, stop sulking this instant.”
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“It is. Why would I do such things to Tabitha? Louise is depressed about her magic not working. Hey, Louise, stop sulking this instant.”
   
 
Saito rocked Louise.
 
Saito rocked Louise.
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“Anyway, we need to wake Louise up… Hey Siesta, hold this.”
 
“Anyway, we need to wake Louise up… Hey Siesta, hold this.”
   
Saito and Siesta held the edges of the blanket and pulled. Clinging to the blanket, Louise rolled with it to the floor. She looked strange wearing a long dress along with her singlet. That was because the night was chilly, so Siesta put it on her.
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Saito and Siesta held the edges of the blanket and pulled. Clinging to the blanket, Louise rolled with it to the floor. The baby doll dress from yesterday, somewhat suited to wear as a nightdress. Because it was a chilly night, Siesta put the clothes on.
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“Oi, Louise. Morning.”
 
“Oi, Louise. Morning.”
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Saito decided to ask the sword. Recently Derflinger was neglected on numerous occasions, so he answered in a foul mood.
 
Saito decided to ask the sword. Recently Derflinger was neglected on numerous occasions, so he answered in a foul mood.
   
“What is it? So you call me out when you need an advice, huh. And you pull me out when you need to cut, huh. What if I am tired?”
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“Andayo. So you call me out when you need an advice, huh. And you pull me out when you need to cut, huh. What if I am tired?”
   
 
“Listen up. Louise cannot use ‘Void’ anymore, can you tell us something about it?”
 
“Listen up. Louise cannot use ‘Void’ anymore, can you tell us something about it?”
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“I’ll go.”
 
“I’ll go.”
   
Louise stood up abruptly.
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Thumbing, Louise stood up.
   
 
“Don’t over do it. Your condition is bad right now.”
 
“Don’t over do it. Your condition is bad right now.”
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“Louise, it’s not like that.”
 
“Louise, it’s not like that.”
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Saito called out to Louise, fearing unforeseen retribution from her.
 
Saito called out to Louise, fearing unforeseen retribution from her.
   
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There was one building in the corner of this urban area.
 
There was one building in the corner of this urban area.
   
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It had foundations made of bricks and mortar, hidden by the tree frames and a sail cloth as the roof, pulled over the cut into half column and laid down in its full length.
A building, built with lumber and sail cloth on a foundation of stone and mortar, which looked like a fallen cylindrical column.
 
   
 
The guards were placed in the surroundings to keep the citizens from coming close to the outskirts.
 
The guards were placed in the surroundings to keep the citizens from coming close to the outskirts.
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The mistress dizzily looked up. However, the king didn’t really seem to mind the heat. The man in scholar clothes beside them explained.
 
The mistress dizzily looked up. However, the king didn’t really seem to mind the heat. The man in scholar clothes beside them explained.
   
“I'm terribly sorry for the heat. To prevent air and sound from leaking out, the whole building is covered by sail cloth. The air inside is already extremely hot after being heated by the spring sun. There is also numerous furnaces within the building, so this heat is unavoidable.”
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“It is done with purpose. The whole building is covered with a sail cloth so that no air or sound can escape. Inside the air is heated by the spring sunshine level. It is created by numerous blast-furnaces. It is easier to keep the heat when you prevent its leak.”
   
 
“What did you want me to see then?”
 
“What did you want me to see then?”
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However, Joseph didn't answer.
 
However, Joseph didn't answer.
   
Finally, after some time, they arrived to the central and very spacious portion of the building. Seats reserved for special guests were installed there - Joseph's henchmen were already awaiting his arrival.
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Finally, after some time, they arrived to the central and very spacious portion of the building. Seats reserved for special guests were installed there - his retainer was already prepared for the waited Joseph's arrival.
   
 
“We waited for your command, Joseph-sama.”
 
“We waited for your command, Joseph-sama.”

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