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"Louise, forgive me for not coming back yesterday. I was drinking with Mr. Colbert in his room and collapsed..."
 
"Louise, forgive me for not coming back yesterday. I was drinking with Mr. Colbert in his room and collapsed..."
   
Louise was sitting in the chair looking at the mirror. But it seemed that she wasn't going to scold Saito. Instead she smiled back, almost as if a it were a trap.
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Louise was sitting in the chair looking at the mirror. But it seems that she wasn't going to scold Saito. Instead she smiled back, almost as if a it were a trap.
   
 
"Good morning."
 
"Good morning."
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Louise’s sudden smile surprised him.
 
Louise’s sudden smile surprised him.
   
"What the...? What's with your clothes..."
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"What the...? What with your clothes..."
   
 
"Eh, this? I went out to buy this last evening."
 
"Eh, this? I went out to buy this last evening."
   
Louise wasn’t in her usual Tristain Academy uniform, but a cute blouse with a short, deep blue silk skirt and a red ribbon which trailed from the collar.
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Louise wasn’t in her usual Tristain Academy uniform, But a cute blouse with a short, deep blue silk skirt and a red ribbon which trailed from the collar.
   
 
"Why?"
 
"Why?"
   
Saito asked, amazed. ''Of all days, why today?'' No, even if this is a joke in Romalia's great cathedral, Saito still couldn't understand the reason.
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Saito asked, amazed. ''Of all days, why today?'' No, even if is this is a joke in Romalia's great cathedral. Saito still couldn't understand the reason.
   
 
"Oh I understand, it's for tomorrow’s ceremony isn't it? But is it okay to be wearing that?"
 
"Oh I understand, it's for tomorrow’s ceremony isn't it? But is it okay to be wearing that?"
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"Мe, why?"
 
"Мe, why?"
   
"In the town, there is a festival for the celebration of His Holiness the Pope’s third anniversary. In noble society there are festivals; here on the streets it seems like they have festivals too. Now, I want to go to the festival with you."
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"In the town, there is a festival for the celebration of Her Holiness the Pope’s third anniversary. In noble society there are festivals; here in street it seems like they have festivals too. Now, I want to go to the festival with you."
   
"But tomorrow... shouldn't we be using the time we have today to prepare ourselves?"
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"But tomorrow... shouldn't be we use time we have today to prepare ourselves?"
   
"No, it's okay. Practicing right now would not change the result. It would be a pointless effort. Besides, sometimes relaxation is important too."
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"No, it's okay. Practicing right now would not change the result, a pointless effort. Besides, sometimes relaxation is important too."
   
 
Looking innocent, Louise grabbed Saito’s arm.
 
Looking innocent, Louise grabbed Saito’s arm.

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