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===Chapter 8: The Meaning of the Smile===
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===Chapter Eight: The meaning of the Smile===
 
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Saito woke up in Mister Colbert’s room. Lying down on the table, he was covered by a blanket. It seemed that the one who put the blanket on him was Mister Colbert, who was asleep in his bed.
 
Saito woke up in Mister Colbert’s room. Lying down on the table, he was covered by a blanket. It seemed that the one who put the blanket on him was Mister Colbert, who was asleep in his bed.
   
It seemed that Saito had inadvertently fallen asleep. Rays of morning light shone through the window.
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It seems Saito had inadvertently fallen asleep. Rays of morning light shone through the window.
   
 
''Now I remember. I was so tired from crying yesterday that I fell asleep.''
 
''Now I remember. I was so tired from crying yesterday that I fell asleep.''
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What could it be that connected these two worlds together?
 
What could it be that connected these two worlds together?
   
Considering how tanks and aircraft could come to this world, it should also be normal for electromagnetic waves to enter.
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Considering how tanks and aircraft could come to this world, it should also be normal for electro-magnetic waves to enter.
   
 
''Ah, that seems to be the case.'' Saito looked around absent-mindedly as he thought.
 
''Ah, that seems to be the case.'' Saito looked around absent-mindedly as he thought.
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"Louise, forgive me for not coming back yesterday. I was drinking with Mr. Colbert in his room and collapsed..."
 
"Louise, forgive me for not coming back yesterday. I was drinking with Mr. Colbert in his room and collapsed..."
   
Louise was sitting in the chair looking at the mirror. But it seemed that she wasn't going to scold Saito. Instead she smiled back, almost as if a it were a trap.
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Louise was sitting in the chair looking at the mirror. But it seems that she wasn't going to scold Saito. Instead she smiled back, almost as if a it were a trap.
   
 
"Good morning."
 
"Good morning."
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Louise’s sudden smile surprised him.
 
Louise’s sudden smile surprised him.
   
"What the...? What's with your clothes..."
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"What the...? What with your clothes..."
   
 
"Eh, this? I went out to buy this last evening."
 
"Eh, this? I went out to buy this last evening."
   
Louise wasn’t in her usual Tristain Academy uniform, but a cute blouse with a short, deep blue silk skirt and a red ribbon which trailed from the collar.
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Louise wasn’t in her usual Tristain Academy uniform, But a cute blouse with a short, deep blue silk skirt and a red ribbon which trailed from the collar.
   
 
"Why?"
 
"Why?"
   
Saito asked, amazed. ''Of all days, why today?'' No, even if this is a joke in Romalia's great cathedral, Saito still couldn't understand the reason.
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Saito asked, amazed. ''Of all days, why today?'' No, even if is this is a joke in Romalia's great cathedral. Saito still couldn't understand the reason.
   
 
"Oh I understand, it's for tomorrow’s ceremony isn't it? But is it okay to be wearing that?"
 
"Oh I understand, it's for tomorrow’s ceremony isn't it? But is it okay to be wearing that?"
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"Мe, why?"
 
"Мe, why?"
   
"In the town, there is a festival for the celebration of His Holiness the Pope’s third anniversary. In noble society there are festivals; here on the streets it seems like they have festivals too. Now, I want to go to the festival with you."
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"In the town, there is a festival for the celebration of Her Holiness the Pope’s third anniversary. In noble society there are festivals; here in street it seems like they have festivals too. Now, I want to go to the festival with you."
   
"But tomorrow... shouldn't we be using the time we have today to prepare ourselves?"
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"But tomorrow... shouldn't be we use time we have today to prepare ourselves?"
   
"No, it's okay. Practicing right now would not change the result. It would be a pointless effort. Besides, sometimes relaxation is important too."
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"No, it's okay. Practicing right now would not change the result, a pointless effort. Besides, sometimes relaxation is important too."
   
 
Looking innocent, Louise grabbed Saito’s arm.
 
Looking innocent, Louise grabbed Saito’s arm.
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"Huh?"
 
"Huh?"
   
"Really, I'm serious. So don't be reserved, okay?"
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"Really, I'm serious. So don't be polite, okay?"
   
 
Smiling and leaning to him. Saito felt more and more suspicious. For the sake of testing, he said.
 
Smiling and leaning to him. Saito felt more and more suspicious. For the sake of testing, he said.
   
"Then, show me your underwear."
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"Then, show me your underpants."
   
 
He thought he was going to be kicked, so he prepared for that.
 
He thought he was going to be kicked, so he prepared for that.
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"Okay."
 
"Okay."
   
''It's been a while since I last saw Louise's underwear'', he thought.
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''It's been a while since I last saw Louise's underpants'', he thought.
   
 
She didn't seem to be angry.
 
She didn't seem to be angry.
   
Meaning...? “Hey, this is the middle of the street, there are a lot of people here.” Saito said while furiously trying to stop her.
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Meaning...? “Hey, this is the middle of the street, there’re a lot of people here.” Saito said while furiously trying stop her.
   
"Stop, people can see you!"
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"Stop it, People can see that."
   
 
With a smile, Louise returned the skirt to its original position.
 
With a smile, Louise returned the skirt to its original position.
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Is this really the real Louise?
 
Is this really the real Louise?
   
Could it be that someone transformed into her?
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Could it be that someone transformed her?
   
 
Right, Myoznitnirn’s magical tool, for instance...
 
Right, Myoznitnirn’s magical tool, for instance...
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That was an act, Saito thought. The tension began to build with his next words.
 
That was an act, Saito thought. The tension began to build with his next words.
   
"Ah, then, let me touch your breasts."
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"Ah, then, allow me to touch your breasts."
   
 
"Go ahead."
 
"Go ahead."
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Louise nodded almost instantly, with a smiling face.
 
Louise nodded almost instantly, with a smiling face.
   
"Okay, I won't hold back then."
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"Ok, then I will not hold back."
   
Gulp, Saito swallowed his saliva and began to touch her small breast. Mofu, mofu.
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Gulp, Saito swallowed his saliva and began to touch her small breast. Rustle, rustle. (I guess that this is the sound being made, don’t know where to put it)
   
Even with her small breasts, touching her there, Saito’s excitment began to rise.
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Even with her small breasts, touching her there, Saito’s tension began to rise. ( I have no idea what to replace tension with)
   
 
When he looked back at her, she was still smiling brightly. A face with a color of happiness. Prepared for death, Saito started to shake. If this is the real Louise, let's try that. He thought.
 
When he looked back at her, she was still smiling brightly. A face with a color of happiness. Prepared for death, Saito started to shake. If this is the real Louise, let's try that. He thought.
   
"And... you call this a breast?"
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"And..., is this a breast?"
   
"Yes."
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"Yes, that's right."
   
 
she positively nodded with a smile.
 
she positively nodded with a smile.
   
This was absolutely not Louise!
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This was absolutely not Louise! another thing!
   
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"Nah, too small, compared to Tiffania."
"Wahaha! I suggest that you gather Tiffania's sweat and make it into a potion?"
 
   
"No need, I'm fine with what I have."
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"It's okay with me."
   
 
Saito jumped back that instance, taking a stance.
 
Saito jumped back that instance, taking a stance.
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"Why aren't you angry?"
 
"Why aren't you angry?"
   
"Because, I..."
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"Because, that's...."
   
 
She hesitantly said those words, and when she figured out something, she raised her face.
 
She hesitantly said those words, and when she figured out something, she raised her face.
   
"Yes! You see, tomorrow there’s going to be a fierce battle. The enemy seems to be Myoznitnirn, right? So this is some kind of reward! you see?!"
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"Yes! You see, tomorrow there’s going to be a fierce battle. The enemy seems to be Myoznitnirn, right? So this is some kind of reward! yes that's it!"
   
 
Louise said that in what seemed to be a joyful manner.
 
Louise said that in what seemed to be a joyful manner.
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''You would normally, even in a situation such as this, object.''
 
''You would normally, even in a situation such as this, object.''
   
In the end, Louise seemed to have changed her way of thinking. Perhaps it was the noble pride within her. Saito reached understanding. Louise spoke again.
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In the end, Louise seemed to have changed her way of thinking. Perhaps it was the noble pride within her, and the Princess. Saito reached understanding.
   
 
"You want to touch more?"
 
"You want to touch more?"
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"..."
 
"..."
   
"It’s alright! Go ahead! Touch them! Please!"
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"It’s alright! Go ahead! Believe me! Please!"
   
 
"..."
 
"..."
   
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"Thank you."
"Please?"
 
   
For the ninth time, she smiled. 'Oh well, if she is enjoying this then I should too.' Saito thought. This leisurely situation is not a reckless action. Besides, there is the possibility that one of us may be lost tomorrow. Anyhow, however bad the situation turns out to be we will survive.
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For the ninth time, she smiled. O well, if she is enjoying this then I should too. Saito thought. This leisurely situation is not a reckless action. Besides, there is the possibility that one of us may be lost tomorrow. Anyhow, however bad the situation turns out to be we will survive.
   
Tomorrow is the commemoration of the Pope’s coronation and things are busy in this Romalian street. Of course, it shouldn't differ too much from the festivals usually held in Tristania.
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Tomorrow is the commemoration of the Pope’s coronation, things are busy in this Romalian street. Of course, it shouldn't differ too much with the festivals usually held in Tristania.
   
As expected of the street stalls and the performances, the atmosphere here felt busy. Even in Romalia, in every place around here, pilgrims could be seen crowding merchants. The various goods brought by them were put in the front of the stalls.
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As expected of the street stalls and the performances, the atmosphere here feels busy. Even in Romalia, in every place around here, pilgrims can be seen crowding merchants. The various goods brought by them were put in the front of the stall.
   
Louise stood in front of clothes shelves that were displayed in the front of a stall, doing her best to search for something.
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Louise was stood in front of clothes shelves that was showed in the front of a stall. Doing her best to search for something.
   
"What, do you really want a scarf that much?, I will buy it for you, so go ahead to choose something better."
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"What, do you really want scarf that much?, I will buy it for you, so go ahead to choose something better."
   
 
Even with that said, Louise only shook her head. And then determined to choose a plain scarf, she requested this one.
 
Even with that said, Louise only shook her head. And then determined to choose a plain scarf, she requested this one.
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"What, did you buy that for me?"
 
"What, did you buy that for me?"
   
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"Yes"
Louise nodded and smiled sweetly.
 
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Louise smiled sweetly.
   
 
"Could it be that you somehow accidentally drank a love potion again?"
 
"Could it be that you somehow accidentally drank a love potion again?"
   
"That's not it. Like I said, its a reward."
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"That's not it. It's okay don't mind me. Like I said, a reward."
   
"I see, so this is a reward too," Saito murmured.
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I see, so this is a reward too, Saito murmured.
   
 
For the time being for today I will accompany Louise, Saito thought.
 
For the time being for today I will accompany Louise, Saito thought.
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Saito and Louise loitered around the street. Around noon, priests went out too to drink and sing war songs with their comrades-in-arms.
 
Saito and Louise loitered around the street. Around noon, priests went out too to drink and sing war songs with their comrades-in-arms.
   
The impression that I had, when first entering this place, though it's quite strict, it is still not too different with other towns in Halkeginia. In the middle was a dance party provided by a band using a flute and drum to perform.
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The impression that I had, when first entering this place, though it's quite strict, it is still not too different with other town in Halkeginia. In the middle was a dance party provided by a band using of flute and drum to perform.
   
Louise pulled Saito and brought him to the center.
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Louise pulled Saito. Bring him to the center.
   
 
"Let's dance."
 
"Let's dance."
   
With cheerful rhythm accompanying them, Louise and Saito danced. A pleasant waltz. Louise was dancing, and Saito was trying to follow her lead.
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With cheerful rhythm accompanying them, Louise and Saito danced. A pleasant want(waltz). Louise was dancing, and Saito was trying to follow her lead.
   
After they were satisfied they went to the tavern that they had been chased into by the Templar knights.
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After they were satisfied they went to the tavern that they were chased into by the Templar knights.
   
When they entered the tavern, they saw that the table had been replaced by high class looking sparkling one. It seemed that the money Kirche had given as compensation was quite sufficient to repair all the damage. The window and stand counter had been replaced with a glass one.
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When they entered the tavern, the table was replaced by high class looking sparkling one. Seems the money Kirche gave as compensation was quite sufficient to repair all the damage. The window and stand counter had been replaced with a glass one.
   
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This tavern was really different from the previous one. The one that stood right now was a first class tavern.
This entire store became so posh it was like a different establishment altogether.
 
   
The shopkeeper too was wearing first class brand-new polished clothes. Seeing this, Louise and Saito looked at each other and laughed.
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The shopkeeper too was wearing first class brand-new polished clothes. When he saw the two of them, he smiled.
   
When they entered, the shopkeeper recognized Louise and Saito and looked away awkwardly.
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When they entered, the shopkeeper recognized Louise and Saito. And looked awkward.
   
"Sorry for the trouble last time." Saito grinned at the shopkeeper devilishly. And so, the shopkeeper, without a word, started sending plate after plate of food to their table.
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Until this time many trouble has been happened(?). He grinned at Saito and without saying anything the shopkeeper started to send foods one by one to both of them.
   
And then he whispered silently to Saito's ear.
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And then he whispered silently to Saito ear.
   
"I'll be in your care next year too."
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"I will be dependent on you for the next year too."
   
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Meanwhile, Louise was still smiling.
Louise and Saito looked at each other and laughed once more.
 
   
When all the plates had arrived, Louise scooped up some thick broth with a spoon and brought it near Saito's face.
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When the food has been served in the table, Louise offered some soup to Saito.
   
 
"Еh?"
 
"Еh?"
   
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Б, a----a・(?, maybe aah( as in say aah))
"Now, aaaaaahhh--n."
 
   
With Louise started to say that, Saito still felt a little troubled. Even if this was a reward, it was still too much.
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With Louise started to say that, Saito still felt little troubled. Even if this was a reward. It's still too much.
   
"Hey Louise, please tell me the truth. I won't get angry. Did you destroy the zero fighter by accident? So you're trying to get on my good side."
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"Hey Louise, please tell me the truth, I won't get angry. Did you destroy the zero fighter by accident? So you are trying to make me feel better."
   
"That's not it. Today I'm cute, so I want you to see more of my cute side. Please believe me, that’s the only reason."
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"That's not it, for today, I wanted to look cute. I want you to see the cute side of me. Please believe me, that’s the only reason."
   
When he heard that, he was dumbfounded and couldn’t say anything. Looking happy, Louise just smiled.
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When he heard that he was dumbfounded and couldn’t say anything. Looking happy, Louise just smiled.
   
Once again, they walked through town. Louise gazed at Saito, and lightly said, "Let's go over there."
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Once again, they walked through town, Louise gazed at Saito, and lightly said "let's go over there."
   
"Hey, let's kiss," she said.
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"Hey, let's kiss." She said.
   
 
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"Еh? Right here?"
 
"Еh? Right here?"
   
Something outrageous had been said. Even her face looked shy. Is it possible she wants to do that in a place where there are less people? Looking flustered, Louise suddenly started to push Saito into the nearest alley.
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Something outrageous had been said, even her face looked shy. Is it possible she wants to do that in a place where there are less people. Looking flustered, Louise suddenly started to push Saito into the nearest alley.
   
After that, she fixed her gaze on Saito's face, and stood there on her tippy toes. Full of passion the two of them pressed their lips together. It was a deep kiss.
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After, she fixed her gaze on Saito's face, and stood there on her tippy toes. Full of passion the two of them pressed their lips together. It was a deep kiss.
   
For a moment, they pressed each other’s lips together. After satisfying themselves, the two of them separated. Once again, Louise showed him an extraordinary smile.
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For a moment, they pressed each other’s lips together, after satisfying themselves the two of them separated. Once again Louise showed him an extraordinary smile.
   
Saito could not understand the meaning behind her smiles, but Saito too tried to smile back vaguely.
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Saito could not understand the meaning behind her smiles, but Saito too tried to smiles back vaguely.
   
While the two of them were walking, Saito would take a peek at Louise, and when she noticed that, she would return a smile, a very lovely one. In the end, they continued walking. Saito thought, for Louise, he would do anything to protect her.
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while the two of them were walking, Saito would take a peek at Louise, when she would noticed that. She would return a smile, a very lovely one. In the end they continued walking. Saito thought, for Louise, he would do anything to protect her.
   
 
But it couldn't be helped, sometimes he would remember his mother’s face. When that happened his chest would hurt.
 
But it couldn't be helped, sometimes he would remember his mother’s face. When that happened his chest would hurt.
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"Something wrong?"
 
"Something wrong?"
   
"Nothing at all, really."
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"Nothing at all, don't mind me."
   
Every time this happened, Saito would forcefully make a smile and shake his head.
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The instant that happened, Saito forced a smile. Cooling his head.(?)
   
Wholeheartedly, the two of them spent their time together, and when the night drew near they returned to their room. In the end, Saito was with her the whole day. Calmly thinking, from whatever aspect, it was too suspicious.
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Fullheartedly, the two of them spent their time together, when the night drew near they returned to their room. In the end, Saito was with her the whole day. Calmly thinking, from whatever aspect, it was too suspicious.
   
 
"Here, have some water, you must be tired."
 
"Here, have some water, you must be tired."
   
Louise poured water into a cup and gave it to Saito. After taking a breath, he drank it. Saito asked.
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Louise poured water into a cup, and gave it to Saito. After taking a breath he drank it, Saito asked.
   
"Hey Louise."
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"Hey Louise!"
   
 
"Yes"
 
"Yes"
   
"...You, just why did you show me your smile so assertively today?"
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"...You see, I’m still wondering, why are you smiling so much?"
   
 
"Can't I?"
 
"Can't I?"
   
Once more, Louise smiled a sweet smile.
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Once more Louise smiled a sweet smile.
   
"It's very strange you know! As long as I remember, this whole year you've only smiled twice! However, today you smiled 72 times."
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"It's very strange you know!, As long as I remember this whole year you only smiled twice! However, today you smiled 72 times."
   
"So you were counting... I'm so happy, thank you."
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"I'm very happy you counted. Thank you."
   
Once again, she smiled. It was an angelic smile, a lovely smile.
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Once again, she smiled. An angelic smile, a lovely smile.
   
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"That's why I will smile continuously this last minute."
"So, I've smiled my whole life's worth today."
 
   
 
"What?"
 
"What?"
   
"Twice a year, huh. If we always stay together from now on, it will take thirty years, no, forty years I think? If it was fifty years' worth it'd be even better... At that point, you will have seen the number of times I smiled at you today."
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"Оnly twice a year huh. But from now on, the time we could have spent together, twenty years, forty years?, or even fifty years....., I would have smiled whenever I could."
   
 
"What are you talking about?"
 
"What are you talking about?"
   
"You see, I won’t smile again for the rest of my life."
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"You know, I won’t smile again for the rest of my life."
   
 
Even with her smiles still surfacing, tears began to flow down Louise's face.
 
Even with her smiles still surfacing, tears began to flow down Louise's face.
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"Louise?"
 
"Louise?"
   
"I won't love anyone else for the rest of my life. But you must not be like me. No matter who you end up falling in love with, you have to treat her like you do me and protect her well, over in your world..."
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"For the rest of my life I won't be loved by anyone anymore. But you must not be like me, Please love whoever, anyone you love. Just like me, you can watch over that person, from your world."
   
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Tears continued to flow and made lines on her cheeks from her eyes to her chin. That kind of form.(Huh, I don’t get that last part)
Tears joined into a line across Louise's face, and dripped down from her beautiful chin.
 
   
 
"Еh? What?"
 
"Еh? What?"
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Having said that, Saito suddenly became very drowsy.
 
Having said that, Saito suddenly became very drowsy.
   
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"Еh?"
"Strange."
 
   
It was magic. But the moment he noticed that, the magic had already taken effect.
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It was Magic. But the moment he noticed that, the magic had already taken effect.
   
 
"Louise... you... the water before..."
 
"Louise... you... the water before..."
   
Losing strength, Louise hugged Saito, touched his face with her hands, and pressed her lips against his.
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Losing strength, Louise hugged Saito, touched his face with her hands, and Pressed her lips against his.
   
 
Strength completely left Saito’s body.
 
Strength completely left Saito’s body.
   
The water before, just like as Saito said, had a sleeping potion put into it beforehand.
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The water before, just like as Saito said, had a sleeping potion put in beforehand.
   
 
While gently embracing Saito, Louise whispered,
 
While gently embracing Saito, Louise whispered,
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Julio nodded.
 
Julio nodded.
   
"It seems like a saint has been born. Then, let's go immediately. We will explain the modification to our plan for tomorrow, since he won't be here anymore."
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"Seems like a saint has been born. Then, let's go immediately. We will explain the modification to our plan for tomorrow, since he won't be here anymore."
   
 
Just a moment before she left the room, Louise turned her head once more. Endless tears still flowed on her cheeks. Wiping those tears, Louise whispered,
 
Just a moment before she left the room, Louise turned her head once more. Endless tears still flowed on her cheeks. Wiping those tears, Louise whispered,

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