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Across the river of Lelion flowing north of Carcassonne, the Romalian and Gallian Armies had been at a stalemate since the last 3 days. In that period of time, flying across the banks of that narrow river reaching less that 200 metres, were not flying arrows or bullets, nor was it magic spells, but "words".
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Across the river of Lelion flowing north of Carcassonne, the Romalian and Gallian Armies had been at a stalemate for the last 3 days. In this period of time, flying across the banks of this narrow river reaching less that 200 metres, are not flying arrows or bullets, nor is it magic spells, but "words".
   
 
"Hey, Gallian suckers, convey a message to your damned old man!?"
 
"Hey, Gallian suckers, convey a message to your damned old man!?"
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"How would any stinking disciple know taste! Just wait here a while, I'll make you full from eating lead cannonballs!"
 
"How would any stinking disciple know taste! Just wait here a while, I'll make you full from eating lead cannonballs!"
   
"Hey, what is a person afraid of even crossing a river talking about?"
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"Hey, what is that person afraid of even crossing a river talking about?"
   
 
"Does no one on your side know how to swim? Go back to your home and come back after you learn how to splash in water!"
 
"Does no one on your side know how to swim? Go back to your home and come back after you learn how to splash in water!"
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Endless cries of both sides swearing at each other, occasionally one or two hot-headed noble would wade into the center of the river and chop at each other on an small rock.
 
Endless cries of both sides swearing at each other, occasionally one or two hot-headed noble would wade into the center of the river and chop at each other on an small rock.
   
The winner would always wave his army's flag around, enjoying his faction's cheers, boosting morale. The loser would hang their head in shame, until another unsatisfied challenger came forth..... and the loop went on again and again.
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The winner would always wave his army's flag around, enjoying his faction's cheers, boosting morale. The loser would hang their head in shame, until another unsatisfied challenger came forth..... and the loop goes on again and again.
   
Whenever a noble was wounded, or even killed in the challenge, two small boats, one from each faction would go and take them back. A unanimous rule of "allowing to attack that boat," was currently getting knights of both factions excited.
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Whenever a noble is wounded, or even dead in the challenge, two small boats, one from each faction will go and take them back. A unanimous rule of "allowing to attack that boat," is currently getting knights of both factions excited.
   
There, waving in the winds on the island, was the flag of the Gallian army. The cheering Gallian army sent out cries of provocation. In the middle of the Romalian army, viewing the other side of the bank, Gimili said without thinking,
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Right now, waving in the winds on the island, is the flag of the Gallian army. The cheering Gallian army sent out cries of provocation. In the middle of the Romalian army, viewing the other side of the bank, Gimili said without thinking
   
 
"What, compared to when we were on Albion's island, this is more relaxing."
 
"What, compared to when we were on Albion's island, this is more relaxing."
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"The strength is always highest at the start."
 
"The strength is always highest at the start."
   
Malicorne concluded as if understanding philosophy.
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Malicorne concluded as if understanding philosophical.
   
Hearing him say so, Reinard said,
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Hearing him say so, Reinard said
   
 
"It must be because everyone felt a hint of guilt."
 
"It must be because everyone felt a hint of guilt."
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"Therefore, this awkward stalemate continues. God, if this war ends here right now then it would be the dumbest decision ever, not a single one of the dead soldiers will be able to rest in peace."
 
"Therefore, this awkward stalemate continues. God, if this war ends here right now then it would be the dumbest decision ever, not a single one of the dead soldiers will be able to rest in peace."
   
After Saito pointed out his own views, Reinard revealed a stern face and corrected,
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After Saito has pointed out his own views, Reinard revealed a stern face and corrected
   
 
"No, the longer this is, the worse it will be for us. We are, after all, inside enemy territory. Suppose the Gallian Southern Vassals on our side right now find themselves at a disadvantage. If they turn against us, it would be troublesome."
 
"No, the longer this is, the worse it will be for us. We are, after all, inside enemy territory. Suppose the Gallian Southern Vassals on our side right now find themselves at a disadvantage. If they turn against us, it would be troublesome."
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"You don't mean trouble, but destroyed, right?"
 
"You don't mean trouble, but destroyed, right?"
   
"My points exactly."
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"My points exactly"
   
 
As straightforward as possible, Reinard answered.
 
As straightforward as possible, Reinard answered.
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The energetic Panzer which defeated the Golomontas in battle was left behind in the streets of Aquileia.
 
The energetic Panzer which defeated the Golomontas in battle was left behind in the streets of Aquileia.
   
But then again, even if he had insisted, things wouldn't have gone his way either. Just moving that tank was a task difficult enough. If forcefully driven, some parts might have actually gone haywire.
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But then again, even if he had insisted, things won't go his way either. Just moving that Tank is a task difficult enough. If forcefully driven, some parts might actually go haywire.
   
If that tank fried up, then it was done for. There was no backup support, making a temporary one using Alchemy would take too much time.
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If this fries up, then it's done for. There's no backup support, making a temporary one using Alchemy would take too much time.
   
Even under the help of that world's best mechanic -- genius engineer Colbert, driving the Panzer from Romalian borders, to 800 miles there was impossible. There was not enough fuel, not to mention that you would have to be extremely lucky to prevent damage to the parts.
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Even under the help of this world's best mechanic -- genius engineer Colbert, driving the Panzer from Romalia borders 800 miles to here is impossible. There would not be enough fuel, not to mention that you have to be extremely lucky to prevent damage to the parts.
   
Transporting it with the "Orient" was also out of the question. Every time the battlefield changed, repeatedly "Loading and Unloading" would spend more energy than it was worth.
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Transporting it with the "Orient" is also out of the question. Every time the battlefield changes, repeatedly "Loading and Unloading" will spend more energy than it's worth.
   
Just by having the tank in its hanger, the consumption of Wind rocks would increase exponentially. Also there was need of 20 experienced wind mages. All of that trouble for only a small Knight's branch. Being at a disadvantage themselves already, to spend too much time and energy would not be the best solution. Therefore, Saito eventually had to agree to leave it there.
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Just by having the tank in its hanger, the consumption of Wind rocks will increase exponentially. Also remember that there would need to be 20 experienced wind mages. All of that trouble for only a small Knight's branch. Being at a disadvantage themselves already, to spend too much time and energy would not be the best solution. Therefore, Saito eventually had to agree to leave it there.
   
Different from airplanes, in the world without roads or rails, to transport a tank without it being bashed up was a daunting challenge indeed. Well, the challenge there was currently taken up by Colbert, thinking like hell in the company of the Orient in the streets of Aquileia.
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Different from airplanes, in this world without roads or rails, to transport a tank without it being bashed up is a daunting challenge indeed. Well, the challenge here is currently taken up by Colbert, thinking like hell in the company of the Orient in the streets of Aquileia.
   
Because of the short notice, there was not enough time to ask Colbert the overall idea on how to prepare that. Even for a person like Colbert, an effective method to transport a tank, wasn't really some idea one could easily grasp hold of.
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Because of the short notice, there was not enough time to ask Colbert the overall idea on how to prepare this. Even for a person like Colbert, an effective method to transport a tank, isn't really some idea one can easily grasp hold of.
   
Then again, if the tank was magically in front of Saito right now, facing an army of 10,000, what on earth did you think a tank can do?
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Then again, if the tank is magically in front of Saito right now, facing an army of 10,000, what on earth do you think a tank can do?
   
 
Moreover....., even towards the enemy, Saito did not want to point those large guns at somebody made out of blood and flesh.
 
Moreover....., even towards the enemy, Saito did not want to point those large guns at somebody made out of blood and flesh.
   
The only thing he could rely on right now, was Henrietta. She had sworn to stop this war as she was about to begin her journey back to Tristain.
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The only thing he can rely on right now, is Henrietta. She had sworn to stop this war as she was about to begin her journey back to Tristain
   
 
"Please do not do anything rash. Stall as much as possible."
 
"Please do not do anything rash. Stall as much as possible."
   
And so, Saito and the others, sitting in the middle of the Romalian camps, were electrocuting their gray matter right then, trying desperately to buy time....
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And so, Saito and the others, sitting in the middle of the Romalian camps, are electrocuting their gray matter right now, trying desperately to buy time....
   
 
''What if another horde of Golomontas appeared again?''
 
''What if another horde of Golomontas appeared again?''
   
''--Then we might as well flee. It's worth a try using the AK-47 or Derflinger, I guess.'' Saito suddenly felt a shiver down his spine.
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''--Then we might as well flee. It's worth a try using the AK-47 or Derflinger, I guess.'' Saito suddenly felt a shiver sent down his spine.
   
 
"So the is the tremor of excitement from the legendary warrior when preparing a battle?"
 
"So the is the tremor of excitement from the legendary warrior when preparing a battle?"
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Malicorne extended out his finger.
 
Malicorne extended out his finger.
   
Tracing the direction of his grubby finger, Guiche was inside a dinghy rowing to the small island, carrying a face smiling like a kid. The Romalian army released ground-breaking cheers and applause.
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Tracing the direction of his grubby finger, Guiche was inside a dinghy rowing to the small island, carrying a face smiling like a kid's. The Romalian army released ground-breaking cheers and applause.
   
 
"That idiot!"
 
"That idiot!"
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"Oh, Saito. Here to cheer for me?"
 
"Oh, Saito. Here to cheer for me?"
   
There was no need to say more, Guiche was dead drunk. His red face could be seen regardless of the layers of make up one could apply. Another obvious hint was the wine bottle in his left hand.
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There was no need to say more, Guiche is dead drunk. His red face can be seen regardless of the layers of make up one can apply on him. Another obvious hint is the wine bottle in his left hand.
   
 
"What are you doing! 'You must control yourselves when I'm away', didn't the Queen advise us before she left!"
 
"What are you doing! 'You must control yourselves when I'm away', didn't the Queen advise us before she left!"
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"Hmm. Well, you're here as well. Things won't turn out so bad."
 
"Hmm. Well, you're here as well. Things won't turn out so bad."
   
Saito cowered his head in anguish. He thought that guy had changed to some extent, but now it looked like that he was the same Guiche down to his roots. Always wanting to show off and brag, that guy would probably never change for the rest of his life.
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Saito cowered his head in anguish. He thought this guy have changed to some extent, but now it looks like that he is the same Guiche down to his roots. Always wanting to show off and brag, this guy will probably never change for the rest of his life.
   
That scene on the dinghy was observed by the bald enemy. Yells of curses began to ring again.
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This scene on the dinghy was observed by the bald enemy. Yells of curses began to rang again
   
 
"What, expecting defeat so you want to fight two on one? As expected of the cowardly Romalia!"
 
"What, expecting defeat so you want to fight two on one? As expected of the cowardly Romalia!"
   
Guiche put on a fearless smile and yelled back,
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Guiche put on a fearless smile and yelled back
   
 
"We are from Tristain, and are here to teach you ruthless Gallian about etiquette!"
 
"We are from Tristain, and are here to teach you ruthless Gallian about etiquette!"
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"That thought never came across me."
 
"That thought never came across me."
   
Saito mumbled. Of course, his voices of complaints were covered by the shouts of provocation on both sides.
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Saito mumbled. Of course, his voices of complaint were covered by the shouts of provocation on both sides.
   
 
"Tristain? Good, dogs of Romalia, show me everything you've got! Knight of the Gallian Flower Beds <!--yes, this sounds ridiculous. I'm sorry I can't think of a better word!-->, Piero '''Flanders (弗蘭馬玖•頓•索瓦鬆)'''' awaits you here! Who's first? Or do you wish to fight me together? Whatever you want!"
 
"Tristain? Good, dogs of Romalia, show me everything you've got! Knight of the Gallian Flower Beds <!--yes, this sounds ridiculous. I'm sorry I can't think of a better word!-->, Piero '''Flanders (弗蘭馬玖•頓•索瓦鬆)'''' awaits you here! Who's first? Or do you wish to fight me together? Whatever you want!"
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"Hey! Everybody! Listen up, this guy seems to be the rumored 'Albion's Hero'!"
 
"Hey! Everybody! Listen up, this guy seems to be the rumored 'Albion's Hero'!"
   
Deafening cheers sounded from the Gallian army. Looked like Saito was pretty famous even on enemy ground. Whichever side the cheers came from, they were probably out of respect towards a hero.
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Deafening cheers sounded from the Gallian army. Looks like Saito is pretty famous even on enemy ground. Whichever side the cheers came from, they were probably out of respect towards a hero.
   
 
"To be able to cross swords with you, it is my honor. Please!"
 
"To be able to cross swords with you, it is my honor. Please!"
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The smile of Duke Socaron's face vanished, as if saying he had not given all he's got in the previous battles.
 
The smile of Duke Socaron's face vanished, as if saying he had not given all he's got in the previous battles.
   
Saito voiced thoughts of despair in his brain. Gallia really is as incredible as people say, having such chivalrous knights. They would have to face an army containing even more of those knights.
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Saito voiced thoughts of despair in his brain. Gallia really is as incredible as people say, having such
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chivalrous knights. They will have to face an army containing even more of these knights.
   
 
Saito unsheathed Derflinger. Simultaneously, the Romalian soldiers roared deafening cheers again.
 
Saito unsheathed Derflinger. Simultaneously, the Romalian soldiers roared deafening cheers again.
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Duke Socaron quickly finished his chant, forming blades of winds flying straight at Saito.
 
Duke Socaron quickly finished his chant, forming blades of winds flying straight at Saito.
   
Saito had long gotten used to a magician's battle, swiftly dodging it and charged into the enemy.
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Saito has long gotten used to a magician's battle, swiftly dodging it and charged into the enemy.
   
Duke Socaron was not slow either, beautifully levitating above the edge of Saito's sword and jumped behind him. Again, Saito continued to approach him under the non-stopping blades of wind. Even if his opponent was only a swordsman, Duke Socaron did not let down his guard or underestimate him. He knew that his opponent was not simple at all.
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Duke Socaron was not slow either, beautifully levitating above the edge of Saito's sword and jumped behind him. Again, Saito continued to approach him under the non-stopping blades of wind. Even if his opponent is only a swordsman, Duke Socaron did not let down his guard or underestimate him. He knows that his opponent is not simple at all.
   
 
"Can't believe this large body can be so agile!"
 
"Can't believe this large body can be so agile!"
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"Th-the gun hit the wand?"
 
"Th-the gun hit the wand?"
   
At that distance? A gun which had an accuracy like that, it was the first time Duke Socaron had ever heard or seen. Stunned to the core he unconsciously knelt down.
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At that distance? A gun which an accuracy like this, it was the first time Duke Socaron have ever heard or seen. Stunned to the core he unconsciously knelt down.
   
 
"....I'm sorry, but, you also used flying tools, so we're even."
 
"....I'm sorry, but, you also used flying tools, so we're even."
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Duke Socaron waved his hand to the people on the Gallia side.
 
Duke Socaron waved his hand to the people on the Gallia side.
   
Very soon, a dinghy full of bags was rowing towards that way. The dressed men coming ashore seemed to be servants, and made difficult effort in placing 3 large leather bags in front of Saito. After confirming the contents of the bags, Guiche released the ropes tying the duke up.
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Very soon, a dinghy full of bags was rowing towards this way. The dressed men coming ashore seemed to be servants, and made difficult effort in placing 3 large leather bags in front of Saito. After confirming the contents of the bags, Guiche released the ropes tying the duke up.
   
 
Duke Socaron boarded the dinghy filled with large bags just now, and rowed back to his side.
 
Duke Socaron boarded the dinghy filled with large bags just now, and rowed back to his side.
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"Hey hey, this can't end like this."
 
"Hey hey, this can't end like this."
   
Guiche pointed to the Gallian army across the river. Hot-headed commanders were crying out,
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Guiche pointed to the Gallian army across the river. Hot-headed commanders were crying out
   
 
"Take down that guy! Whoever it is! Taken him down and I'll pay him 3000 écu gold coins."
 
"Take down that guy! Whoever it is! Taken him down and I'll pay him 3000 écu gold coins."
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"Oh, Oh, duke, earl..., That's the Father of Marquis '''Honbaleui (康芭蕾)'''!....You, keep it up! I believe after tonight we can build a city!"
 
"Oh, Oh, duke, earl..., That's the Father of Marquis '''Honbaleui (康芭蕾)'''!....You, keep it up! I believe after tonight we can build a city!"
   
And so, Saito being forced and blinded by money and glory had countless fights with Gallian nobles.
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And so, Saito being forced and blinded by money and glory had countless fights with Gallian nobles.<!--This sentence doesn't sound right.(Passing Editor Comment)-->
   
The Ondine Water Spirit Knights began to gather around and did their own work.
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The Ondine Water Spirit Knights began to gather around and do their own work.
   
 
Reinard flicked away on his abacus, calculating ransom fees.
 
Reinard flicked away on his abacus, calculating ransom fees.
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Malicorne and Gimili were busy queuing up the competitors. Others started a gambling stall, using the dinghy to transport large amounts of money to and fro between the shores of Gallia and Romalia camp, displaying gleeful grins.
 
Malicorne and Gimili were busy queuing up the competitors. Others started a gambling stall, using the dinghy to transport large amounts of money to and fro between the shores of Gallia and Romalia camp, displaying gleeful grins.
 
 
It wasn't long before the bounty on Saito's head in the Gallian camp had already risen to 10,000 écus. Ten or more nobles had challenged Saito and came back in tatters.
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It wasn't long before the bounty on Saito's head in the Gallia camp has already risen to 10,000 écus. Ten or more nobles have challenged Saito and came back in tatters.
   
 
"Let me take a break...."
 
"Let me take a break...."
   
Saito huffed and puffed, already at his bodily limit. Although no one might know, there was a time limit for Saito to become Gandálfr.
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Saito huffed and puffed, already at his bodily limit. Although no one may know, there is a time limit for Saito to become Gandálfr.
   
Guiche yelled towards the Gallian camp:
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Guiche yelled towards the Gallia camp:
   
 
"Lunch break!"
 
"Lunch break!"
   
Delivering to the Romalian camp on a dinghy were a bountiful of delicacies and exquisite wine. A table was put up by the soldiers who suddenly changed into waiters. All of the teens couldn't be merrier, and in a crowd mixed with people from both armies, a happy lunch began.
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Delievering to the Romalian camp on a dinghy were a bountiful of delicacies and exquisite wine. A table was put up by the soldiers who suddenly changed into waiters. All of the teens couldn't be merrier, and in a crowd mixed with people from both armies, a happy lunch began.
   
 
Reinard told Saito with a serious face
 
Reinard told Saito with a serious face
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"Saito. Listen, just win two more times. This way, the 80 '''Alubon (阿魯鎊)''' (1 Alubon ) castle on Tristain's countryside will be ours!"
 
"Saito. Listen, just win two more times. This way, the 80 '''Alubon (阿魯鎊)''' (1 Alubon ) castle on Tristain's countryside will be ours!"
   
A faint dollar sign emerged from his eyes, Saito unwillingly sighed. His comrades in charge of the gambling stall begged.
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A faint dollar sign emerged from his eyes, Saito unwillingly sighed. His comrades in charge of the gambling stall begged
   
"Saito, please, don't lose, even if you die, you Must win, the odds are at 30 to 1, if you lose we'll go bankrupt."
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"Saito, please, don't lose, even if you die, you Must win, the odds are at 30 to 1, if you lose we'll go bankrupt"
   
The terribly excited boys cheerfully started singing Tristain's antics:
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The terribly excited boys cheerfully started sing Tristain's antics:
   
 
[Translator's Note: <Worst nightmare. The lyrics never rhyme if you translate directly. They already sound like crap in Chinese so..... I'll skip the lyrics]
 
[Translator's Note: <Worst nightmare. The lyrics never rhyme if you translate directly. They already sound like crap in Chinese so..... I'll skip the lyrics]
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"I quit."
 
"I quit."
   
Saito suddenly said, interrupting the plain, dull melody. The boys exchanged looks with each other,
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Saito suddenly said, interrupting the plain, dull melody. The boys exchanged looks with each other
   
 
"Huhhh???!"
 
"Huhhh???!"
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Saito slammed his hand down on the table.
 
Saito slammed his hand down on the table.
   
Saito only agreed to take up the challenge intending to lower Gallia's will to fight. What a joke, now they were even more eager to do so. Besides, there was no reason to make enemies at this kind of place, and less to say, popularity...although it was already a bit too late....
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Saito only agreed to take up the challenge intending to lower Gallia's will to fight. What a joke, now they are even more eager to do so. Besides, there was no reason to make enemies at this kind of place, and less to say, popularity...although it was already a bit too late....
   
 
"We are here to defeat Gallia's King and help Tabitha, not make a living."
 
"We are here to defeat Gallia's King and help Tabitha, not make a living."
   
"What would these fights be worth if they didn't make money."
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"What would these fights be worth if they didn't make money"
   
 
Guiche claimed. The others echoed with "Exactly exactly".
 
Guiche claimed. The others echoed with "Exactly exactly".
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Saito's shoulders unconsciously moved a little. It was not missed by Guiche.
 
Saito's shoulders unconsciously moved a little. It was not missed by Guiche.
   
"I understand, totally understand, you are a good honest person, but occasionally even you would like other girls."
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"I understand, totally understand, you are an good honest person, but occasionally even you would like other girls"
   
 
"Ack!"
 
"Ack!"
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"Uhh, I swear on it, under the name of "
 
"Uhh, I swear on it, under the name of "
   
Guiche grabbed Saito's hand tightly. Saito would have normally ignored it, but at this moment under the threat of Louise's jealousy, he painfully replied,
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Guiche grabbed Saito's hand tightly. Saito would have normally ignored it, but at this moment under the threat of Louise's jealousy, he painfully replied
   
 
".....I understand, then, just one more time. No matter what you say, I am already at my limit."
 
".....I understand, then, just one more time. No matter what you say, I am already at my limit."
   
The boys stuck out their thumb and exchanged looks, nodding their heads. Guiche stood up, faced the Gallian camps and yelled,
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The boys stuck out their thumb and exchanged looks, nodding their heads. Guiche stood up, faced the Gallian camps and yelled
   
 
"Heeyy! Gallian nobles, our hero says, he will only be taking one more fight. Send out your best, the higher status the better~~!"
 
"Heeyy! Gallian nobles, our hero says, he will only be taking one more fight. Send out your best, the higher status the better~~!"
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The organized Gallian nobles turned into instant chaos again, quarreling again with yells of "I'll do it, I'll do it".
 
The organized Gallian nobles turned into instant chaos again, quarreling again with yells of "I'll do it, I'll do it".
   
"You really are a celebrity now, Saito."
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"You really are a celebrity now, Saito"
   
 
".... Seriously, then the next match would be even more difficult, wouldn't it?"
 
".... Seriously, then the next match would be even more difficult, wouldn't it?"
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"Oh, looks like they have reached a decision."
 
"Oh, looks like they have reached a decision."
   
Standing out on the opposite shore, was a tall noble wearing a black mask, whole body covered in rough leather. If he weren't wearing a cape, one could barely recognize his status as a noble.
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Standing out on the opposite shore, is a tall noble wearing a black mask, a whole body covered in rough leather. If he weren't wearing a cape, one could barely recognize his status as a noble.
   
 
"What, don't just get anyone if you can't pay the ransom!"
 
"What, don't just get anyone if you can't pay the ransom!"
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"At least he's still wearing a cape."
 
"At least he's still wearing a cape."
   
"A poor noble, I guess."
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"A poor noble, I guess"
   
 
"-Sigh, just our luck, it's this kind of skillful but poor kind of person. They are hard to deal with."
 
"-Sigh, just our luck, it's this kind of skillful but poor kind of person. They are hard to deal with."
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"What? Are you here to show off?"
 
"What? Are you here to show off?"
   
Malicorne might have considered him as nothing, but Saito still prepared himself for anything, just in case. After "training" with hundreds of magicians, the true strength of that opponent could be spotted just by observing his stance.
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Malicorne may have considered him as nothing, but Saito still prepared himself for anything, just in case. After "training" with hundreds of magicians, the true strength of this opponent can be spotted just by observing his stance.
   
That guy was even more powerful than Duke Socaron. Out of all the matches so far, he was undoubtedly the strongest.
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This guy was even more powerful than Duke Socaron. Out of all the matches so far, he is undoubtedly the strongest.
   
 
Stress and tension filled Saito up completely, a drop of sweat trickled down his forehead.
 
Stress and tension filled Saito up completely, a drop of sweat trickled down his forehead.
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"Not coming? Then here I go."
 
"Not coming? Then here I go."
   
The man didn't bother to chant spells, lifting up his wand and charged at Saito. Looks like he wanted to fight Saito as a swordsman fair and square.
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The man didn't bother to chant spells, lifting up his wand and charged at Saito. Looks like he wants to fight Saito as a swordsman fair and square.
   
Like a sabre used by the army, one appeared from his wand in an instant, giving off a bright lime glow. It was the "blade" spell, something mages used to procure a sword from their wands when going through close combat. Of course, the feel and weight of that would be different from a real one.
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Like a sabre used by the army, one appeared from his wand in an instant, giving off a bright lime glow. It's the "blade" spell, something mages use to procure a sword from their wands when going through close combat. Of course, the feel and weight of that would be different from a real one.
   
 
Because of his mask, Saito was unable to determine if he was chanting or not, and suddenly came the "blade" spell.
 
Because of his mask, Saito was unable to determine if he was chanting or not, and suddenly came the "blade" spell.
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"Saito!"
 
"Saito!"
   
Being held down by a magician at swordsmanship, it was the first time for Saito. Looked like the opponent was quite confident at close battles.
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Being held down by a magician at swordsmanship, it's the first time for Saito. Looks like the opponent is quite confident at close battles.
   
Saito felt a wave of fear for a second. As figured, the world was large..... Stalling an army of 70,000 had made him think too highly of himself. In Gallia, Duke Socaron just now or the mysterious man in front of him at the moment had really.... made Saito feel ashamed at his confidence in himself.
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Saito felt a wave of fear for a second. As figured, the world is large..... Stalling an army of 70,000 had made him think too highly of himself. In Gallia, Duke Socaron just now or the mysterious man in front of him at the moment have really.... made Saito feel ashamed at his confidence in himself.
   
Anyhow, losing was not an option for Saito in this one on one fight. Saito caught his opponent's pressure and diverted it to the ground on one side, and raised his own sword.
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Anyhow, losing is not an option for Saito in this one to one fight. Saito caught his opponent's pressure and diverted it to the ground on one side, and raised his own sword.
   
 
Yet, by the time he had realized, the opponent has disappeared.
 
Yet, by the time he had realized, the opponent has disappeared.
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A sharp metal colliding sound pierced the air, Saito had again caught the opponent's slash, but was pushed backwards by the opponent's weight. The man did not miss this chance, continuing to push forward.
 
A sharp metal colliding sound pierced the air, Saito had again caught the opponent's slash, but was pushed backwards by the opponent's weight. The man did not miss this chance, continuing to push forward.
   
The man with a metal mask kept closing the gap between himself and Saito, almost touching each other's face. Apparently a mage, yet refusing to use magic, was he attempting to win through strength? What a weird man.
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The man with a metal mask kept closing the gap between himself and Saito, almost touching each other's face. Apparently a mage, yet refusing to use magic, is he attempting to win through strength? What a weird man.
   
In the standoff with that un-mage-like mage, Saito was overflowed with sweat full of anxiety and confusion plus fear...
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In the standoff with this un-mage-like mage, Saito was overflowed with sweat full of anxiety and confusion plus fear...
   
 
"Keep holding it at me like that!"
 
"Keep holding it at me like that!"
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As soon as he finished, Saito understood the situation.
 
As soon as he finished, Saito understood the situation.
   
He was a spy of Marquis Orleans planted in the Gallian army!
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He is a spy of Marquis Orleans planted in the Gallian army!
   
 
"....now, just in time for us to arrive."
 
"....now, just in time for us to arrive."
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The man distanced himself with a jump. Following his lead, Saito also jumped towards him, pretending to swing his sword with all his force.
 
The man distanced himself with a jump. Following his lead, Saito also jumped towards him, pretending to swing his sword with all his force.
   
The man also gave an imitation of catching the smash with effort, to the crowd's eyes, this looked very much like a standard fight to the death.
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The man also gave an imitation of catching the smash with effort, to the crowd's eyes, this looks very much like a standard fight to the death.
   
 
"....Inside the bag for ransom is a letter, please relay it."
 
"....Inside the bag for ransom is a letter, please relay it."
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"It's already done, just take it and leave."
 
"It's already done, just take it and leave."
   
The servant dropped the leather bag in front of Saito. After checking its interiors, Guiche exclaimed,
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The servant dropped the leather bag in front of Saito. After checking its interiors, Guiche exclaimed
   
 
"Hey hey, why are they all copper coins! How is this supposed to be ransom? You may not look very generous, but you are still a noble, carrying the title of one. How would someone as good as you be worth this much?"
 
"Hey hey, why are they all copper coins! How is this supposed to be ransom? You may not look very generous, but you are still a noble, carrying the title of one. How would someone as good as you be worth this much?"
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Using a telescope on top of a small hill somewhat south of Carcassonne to monitor the returning Ondine Knights on a dinghy, Kirche claimed, her side accompanied by Louis, Tabitha and Tiffania.
 
Using a telescope on top of a small hill somewhat south of Carcassonne to monitor the returning Ondine Knights on a dinghy, Kirche claimed, her side accompanied by Louis, Tabitha and Tiffania.
   
Those 4 had been observing them since the start.
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These 4 have been observing them from since the start.
   
 
"Louise, your knight really is something, as far as I can see he has already won against more than 10 people in a row, reaping lots and lots of money. You should occasionally let him buy you a dress or whatever."
 
"Louise, your knight really is something, as far as I can see he has already won against more than 10 people in a row, reaping lots and lots of money. You should occasionally let him buy you a dress or whatever."
   
Kirche advised Louise beside her, the latter turned her face away.
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Kirche advised Louise beside her, the latter turned her face away
   
 
"I don't want these things!"
 
"I don't want these things!"
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Kirche grabbed Louise and started her full body tickling attack.
 
Kirche grabbed Louise and started her full body tickling attack.
   
"Tiffania, Tabitha, hurry up and help."
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"Tiffania, Tabitha, hurry up and help"
   
 
After some considerations, Tiffania eventually joined in, thinking that Louise would feel better if she said it out.
 
After some considerations, Tiffania eventually joined in, thinking that Louise would feel better if she said it out.
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"Tabitha?"
 
"Tabitha?"
   
Kirche was still for a moment, then returned to reality and started seriously tickling Louise. If Tabitha's strange attitude was due to Louise's familiar...., more the reason she should spit everything related out.
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Kirche was still for a moment, then returned to reality and started seriously tickling Louise. If Tabitha's strange attitude is due to Louise's familiar...., more the reason she should spit everything related out.
   
Kirche's tickling techniques were godlike, after continuous invasions into Louise's most sensitive body part, she finally gave in and begged,
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Kirche's tickling techniques were godlike, after continuous invasions into Louise's most sensitive body part, she finally gave in and begged
   
 
"I'll talk, I'll talk!"
 
"I'll talk, I'll talk!"
   
After hearing what Louise had to offer, Kirche burst out with giggles.
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After hearing what Louise had to offer, Kirche bursted out with giggles.
   
 
"What's so funny!"
 
"What's so funny!"
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"It's even worse than what he did in reality! Doesn't this imply he was dreaming about other girls while with me?"
 
"It's even worse than what he did in reality! Doesn't this imply he was dreaming about other girls while with me?"
   
"I say, Louise,"
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"I say, Louise"
   
 
"What"
 
"What"
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"Then change them into actions."
 
"Then change them into actions."
   
Louise replied "Uhh" thinking thoughtfully for quite some time, before pouting. Seeing Louise like that, Kirche started to notice Tabitha.
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Louise replied "Uhh" thoughtfully for quite some time before pouting. Seeing Louise like that, Kirche started to notice Tabitha.
   
 
''If, my assumptions are right...., whose side should I support? Isn't that obvious, although I must say sorry to Louise, Tabitha is my closest friend. But then again, other than Saito, Louise has no one in her eyes, if he was really taken away, giving up her life isn't exactly impossible in her case, and I bet no one would want to see that.''
 
''If, my assumptions are right...., whose side should I support? Isn't that obvious, although I must say sorry to Louise, Tabitha is my closest friend. But then again, other than Saito, Louise has no one in her eyes, if he was really taken away, giving up her life isn't exactly impossible in her case, and I bet no one would want to see that.''
   
''This is one tricky case'', Seldom doing so, Kirche joined her hands and started getting frustrated.
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''This is one tricky case'', Seldomly doing so, Kirche joined her hands and started getting frustrated.
   
 
"This-and-this-and-that, that guy...... always makes these kind of dreams, he must be hoping to, with girls other than me,.... do that, that kind of things."
 
"This-and-this-and-that, that guy...... always makes these kind of dreams, he must be hoping to, with girls other than me,.... do that, that kind of things."
   
Continuing in that direction, Louise began to get all fired up, squeezing her small fists and biting her lips. Looking at Louise acting this way, Kirche was reminded of what she used to be, mad in love...., heartbroken when breaking up....
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Continuing in this direction, Louise began to get all fired up, squeezing her small fists and biting her lips. Looking at Louise acting this way, Kirche was reminded of what she used to be, mad in love...., heartbroken when breaking up....
   
 
"Louise."
 
"Louise."
   
"Must have also done that kind of thing to Her Highness. As a woman even I am awed by Tiffania's gorgeousness, who knows he did something similarly to her as well. You better start speaking honestly, how many times have you used those pair of large breasts to appear in that dog's dreams, it must have been a superb, incredible night for him....."
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"Must have also done that kind of thing to Her Highness, who knew that similarly as a woman even I am awed by gorgeous Tiffania's what was also there as well, you better start speaking honestly how many times have you used those pair of large breasts to appear in that dog's dreams, it must have been a superb, incredible night for him....."
   
 
"Louise!"
 
"Louise!"
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From a pasture extending from the river of Lelion to the streets of Carcassone, one must go through a steep valley of length around 100 mails.
 
From a pasture extending from the river of Lelion to the streets of Carcassone, one must go through a steep valley of length around 100 mails.
   
Using magic or Sylphid, she could have went over that in one leap, but indulged in her own thoughts, she decided to take a walk, climbing the twisting roads constructed on the cliff.
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Using magic or Sylphid, she could have went over this in one leap, but indulged in her own thoughts, she decided to take a walk, climbing the twisting roads constructed on the cliff.
   
 
While climbing step by step on the limestone staircase, Sylphid was circling above, lightly poking at Tabitha's hair, her eyes as if talking "why don't you use me".
 
While climbing step by step on the limestone staircase, Sylphid was circling above, lightly poking at Tabitha's hair, her eyes as if talking "why don't you use me".
   
Ignored by Tabitha completely, Sylphid flew around again above her for a few circles, then mumbled,
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Ignored by Tabitha completely, Sylphid flew around again above her for a few circles, then mumbled
   
 
"Climbing stairs so long will tire you to death sooner or later, ride on Sylphid and you can fly over it in a second."
 
"Climbing stairs so long will tire you to death sooner or later, ride on Sylphid and you can fly over it in a second."
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Yet still, Tabitha gave no reaction at all, silently walking step by step on her way.
 
Yet still, Tabitha gave no reaction at all, silently walking step by step on her way.
   
Spotting a man waiting in the resting spot halfway of the stairs, Sylphid immediately flew away, it couldn't let anyone see itself speaking.
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Spotting a man waiting in the resting spot halfway of the stairs, Sylphid immediately flew away, it can't let anyone see itself speaking.
   
Standing on the flight of stairs around the corner, was a Romalian priest, Pope Vittorio's familiar, Julio of Vindálfr.
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Standing on the flight of stairs around the corner, is a Romalian priest, Pope Vittorio's familiar, Julio of Vindálfr.
   
 
"Oho, Tabitha."
 
"Oho, Tabitha."
   
Two eyes glittering of different colors, Julio greeted Tabitha. Looked like he knew Tabitha would pass this area and was waiting for a long time.
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Two eyes glittering of different colors, Julio greeted towards Tabitha. Looks like he knew Tabitha would pass this area and was waiting long ago.
   
Any normal female would have long been mesmerized by that handsome face and eyes sealing up a lake of intriguing secrets. That, however, had no effect on Tabitha. Without giving any kind of a response, she passed by him.
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Any normal female would have long been mesmerized by this handsome face and eyes sealing up a lake of intriguing secrets. This, however, had no effect on Tabitha. With giving any kind of a response, she passed by him.
   
 
"My apologies, there was a mistake in addressing, Princess Charlotte your highness."
 
"My apologies, there was a mistake in addressing, Princess Charlotte your highness."
   
Tabitha stayed still and turned her head around,
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Tabitha stayed still and turned her head around
   
 
"You know?"
 
"You know?"
   
"Uh, in this grand land of Halkeginia, there is nothing we Romalia don't know of."
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"Uh, this grand land of Halkeginia, there is nothing we Romalia does not know of."
   
 
"Nor is there any conspiracy you can't do?"
 
"Nor is there any conspiracy you can't do?"
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"Treason of the Southern lords, if it wasn't prepared a few months ago, an invasion of this speed would be impossible to realize."
 
"Treason of the Southern lords, if it wasn't prepared a few months ago, an invasion of this speed would be impossible to realize."
   
"The wise eye spots these things, you are absolutely correct, then, the following content I am about to suggest, I suppose you already have guessed as well."
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"The wise eye spots these things, you are absolutely correct, then, the following content I am about to suggest, I suppose you already guessed as well."
   
Tabitha's eyes suddenly gave a tiny glint of light.
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Tabitha's eyes suddenly emerged a tiny glow of light.
   
 
"If you think all is under your control, it will be the biggest mistake you've ever made."
 
"If you think all is under your control, it will be the biggest mistake you've ever made."
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"Because it's personal."
 
"Because it's personal."
   
Julio sent Tabitha's shadow off with a warm smile. In an environment that made one irresistible to hum a song, he scratched his head.
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Julio sent Tabitha's shadow off with a warm smile, in an environment that makes one irresistible to hum a song, he scratched his head.
   
To finish the Crusade, King Joseph must be defeated as he could never be an ally, and to do that, it was inevitable to ask for "the destined one's" help, the one supposed to be the next King, orphaned offspring of King Orleans....
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To finish the Crusade, King Joseph must be defeated as he can never be an ally, and to do that, it is inevitable to ask for "the destined one's" help, the one supposed to be the next King, orphaned offspring of King Orleans....
   
If she was willing to reclaim the title as King, standing at Romalia's front lines, there would be nothing more effective than having "the destined one". If so, even the Southern Gallian lords, superficially joining their army yet unwilling to fight at all, might really start to put an effort into it. The ones currently still struggling to make a clear choice and observing from one side would likely join the Romalians, plus another rebellion within the enemy's army was something of high possibility as well.....
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If she is willing to reclaim the title as King, standing at Romalia's front lines, there would be nothing more effective than having "the destined one". If so, even the Southern Gallian lords, superficially joining our army yet unwilling to fight at all, may really start to put an effort into it. The ones currently still struggling to make a clear choice and observing from one side would likely join the Romalians, plus another rebellion within the enemy's army is something of high possibility as well.....
   
Right here facing each other at Carcassonne, would be the best stage to unveil "the destined one".
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Right here facing each other at Carcassonne, will be the best stage to unveil "the destined one".
   
 
Yet unfortunately, Tabitha had no intention to help them at all.
 
Yet unfortunately, Tabitha had no intention to help them at all.

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