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Just when Saito thought that ... Saito briefly felt as if something pricked him in his chest. There was a moment when he thought "hee? That's impossible. The princess was sad, I just served to give her some comfort..."
 
Just when Saito thought that ... Saito briefly felt as if something pricked him in his chest. There was a moment when he thought "hee? That's impossible. The princess was sad, I just served to give her some comfort..."
   
But this anxiety that pricked like a thorn, that feeling of unease, remained in Saito's chest.
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But this anxiety that pricked like a thorn, that feelings of unease, remained in Saito's chest.
   
 
What's happening to me? What is it that is worrying me? Then Saito shook his head.
 
What's happening to me? What is it that is worrying me? Then Saito shook his head.

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