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“So you don’t expect to live together with me?”
 
“So you don’t expect to live together with me?”
   
“I never said that! But if I have to do everything ''you'' want in order to live together, then that’s not going to work.”
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“I never said that! But if I have to do everything ''you'' want in order to live together, then that’s very unusual.”
   
 
“If you plan to live with me, then it is good to be a noble! If you don’t want it like this, then the partner I danced with at the ball sure fooled me!”
 
“If you plan to live with me, then it is good to be a noble! If you don’t want it like this, then the partner I danced with at the ball sure fooled me!”
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After some time, both people were openly drinking wine. Siesta laid her stomach on the table and began to fall asleep. Saito went to a room to get blankets to cover her.
 
After some time, both people were openly drinking wine. Siesta laid her stomach on the table and began to fall asleep. Saito went to a room to get blankets to cover her.
   
He was thinking about how it was time to cool down and checked out Louise's room, but the door was still locked like before.
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He was thinking about how it was time to cool down and looked at the room, but the door was still locked like before.
   
 
Waiting for his head to gradually calm down, Saito started to ponder: ''Just now it seems like I was a bit impatient.'' Then he also thought, ''Since she already decided to live with me, compared to the household I came from, she attaches more importance to her own ideas,'' and so on. Saito previously wished Louise had answered Eleonore like this:
 
Waiting for his head to gradually calm down, Saito started to ponder: ''Just now it seems like I was a bit impatient.'' Then he also thought, ''Since she already decided to live with me, compared to the household I came from, she attaches more importance to her own ideas,'' and so on. Saito previously wished Louise had answered Eleonore like this:

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