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As a result, merchants and travelers armed themselves to the teeth and hired bodyguards when time came to cross the border.
 
As a result, merchants and travelers armed themselves to the teeth and hired bodyguards when time came to cross the border.
   
Although times were tough, monks were not commonly robbed. One reason may be that harming a monk would be asking for divine retribution, evoking the contempt of the Gods but the main reason was that there was no profit to be made from robbing one.
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Although times were tough, monks were not commonly robbed. One reason may be that harming a monk would be asking for divine retribution, evoking the contempt of the Gods; but the main reason was that there was no profit to be made from robbing one.
   
 
Today, however, the feral wolves seemed especially hungry.
 
Today, however, the feral wolves seemed especially hungry.
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The leading monk held his breath upon hearing this.
 
The leading monk held his breath upon hearing this.
   
“Stop. If you want money I’ll give it to you.”
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“Stop; if you want money I’ll give it to you.”
   
 
He subsequently reached within his robes, fished out a small pouch and threw it onto the ground. A bandit pounced on it, and immediately let out a cry.
 
He subsequently reached within his robes, fished out a small pouch and threw it onto the ground. A bandit pounced on it, and immediately let out a cry.
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The monks tried to move forward, but the brigands again blocked the way.
 
The monks tried to move forward, but the brigands again blocked the way.
   
“Don’t worry. Us brothers are indeed hard-working, and our style is to grab everything we can get a hold of. Leave us your horses and the woman too.”
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“Don’t worry. Us brothers are indeed hard-working, and our style is to grab everything we can get a hold of. Leave us your horses, and the woman too.”
   
 
“I refuse.”
 
“I refuse.”
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The bandit walked towards whom he suspected was the nun.
 
The bandit walked towards whom he suspected was the nun.
   
“Let me see what kind of goods do you really have?”
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“Let me see; what kind of goods do you really have?”
   
 
Just as he attempted to place his hand on the woman, the monk leader gravely warned the bandit.
 
Just as he attempted to place his hand on the woman, the monk leader gravely warned the bandit.
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As he was speaking, the bandit pulled the cloak off the nun entirely.
 
As he was speaking, the bandit pulled the cloak off the nun entirely.
   
“...Huh?”
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. . . Huh?”
   
 
When he saw what had previously been hidden under the cloak, the man’s thoughts numbed.
 
When he saw what had previously been hidden under the cloak, the man’s thoughts numbed.
   
''Long ears... not a human trait. Oh, right, this characteristic belongs to a certain race...''
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''Long ears . . . not a human trait. Oh, right, this characteristic belongs to a certain race . . .''
   
 
''What is it?''
 
''What is it?''
   
''Supposedly, they’re a people both strong and beautiful...''
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''Supposedly, they’re a people both strong and beautiful . . .''
   
 
It’s a pity that man couldn't come to a final conclusion because a branch flew noiselessly into his chest.
 
It’s a pity that man couldn't come to a final conclusion because a branch flew noiselessly into his chest.
   
“They’re elves!” The member with the pike cried out.
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“They’re elves!” the member with the pike cried out.
   
The monk leader... Ali, repeated the incantation.
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The monk leader . . . Ali, repeated the incantation.
   
 
“Oh forest branches, become arrows sharp, enemies will cry, through their bodies fly.” [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Talk:Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume18_Epilogue#2].
 
“Oh forest branches, become arrows sharp, enemies will cry, through their bodies fly.” [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Talk:Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume18_Epilogue#2].
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Responding to the spell, a nearby branch snapped off like a toothpick and became a high speed arrow aimed at the bandit who just shouted. The arrow flew into his mouth and emerged from the base of his skull (cervical vertebrae, back neck area).
 
Responding to the spell, a nearby branch snapped off like a toothpick and became a high speed arrow aimed at the bandit who just shouted. The arrow flew into his mouth and emerged from the base of his skull (cervical vertebrae, back neck area).
   
The two brigands who held fire guns... aimed at the elves and pulled their triggers.
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The two brigands who held fire guns . . . aimed at the elves and pulled their triggers.
   
 
Defending both sides Luctiana, the gracefully postured elf, had long been preparing a spell.
 
Defending both sides Luctiana, the gracefully postured elf, had long been preparing a spell.
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In contrast, Luctiana looked like she could care less.
 
In contrast, Luctiana looked like she could care less.
   
“Wha? If we have questions, no matter what we go and ask them. That’s our duty as scholars.”
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“Wha? If we have questions, no matter what we go and ask them; that’s our duty as scholars.”
   
 
“Really! Even if someone happens to be a savage murderer, taking his life doesn’t make me feel warm and fuzzy inside.”
 
“Really! Even if someone happens to be a savage murderer, taking his life doesn’t make me feel warm and fuzzy inside.”
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“For goodness’ sake, you have to. If we’d traveled by sea, we really wouldn’t have had so much trouble, right? I’m not saying land travel is time-consuming, but it’s still very dangerous!”
 
“For goodness’ sake, you have to. If we’d traveled by sea, we really wouldn’t have had so much trouble, right? I’m not saying land travel is time-consuming, but it’s still very dangerous!”
   
“Well, think, if we came by sea, there wouldn’t be anything to sightsee along the way. A trip where we constantly stare at the unchanging water surface. I can only imagine the insufferable horror. A big ocean is even more boring than a desert.”
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“Well, think: if we came by sea, there wouldn’t be anything to sightsee along the way. A trip where we constantly stare at the unchanging water surface; I can only imagine the insufferable horror. A big ocean is even more boring than a desert.”
   
 
Luctiana spoke without reservation, and a male elf next to her laughed.
 
Luctiana spoke without reservation, and a male elf next to her laughed.
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Ali now finished with his bitter words, Luctiana once again yelled excitedly,
 
Ali now finished with his bitter words, Luctiana once again yelled excitedly,
   
“Awesome! This lady can boss you around! Glorious people of the desert, we are the noble, chosen race responsible for protecting the world. Onwards! Objective, Kingdom of Tristainia, Des, Des, Des...”
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“Awesome! This lady can boss you around! Glorious people of the desert, we are the noble, chosen race responsible for protecting the world. Onwards! Objective: Kingdom of Tristainia, Des, Des, Des . . .”
   
 
The name was on the tip of her tongue.
 
The name was on the tip of her tongue.
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Ali rushed to inform her.
 
Ali rushed to inform her.
   
“Seriously... the names these barbarians come up with are real tongue twisters. Doesn’t matter if they’re names of a person or a place.”
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“Seriously . . . the names these barbarians come up with are real tongue twisters; doesn’t matter if they’re names of a person or a place.”
   
 
“Aren’t you a scholar?” Ali couldn’t help but ask.
 
“Aren’t you a scholar?” Ali couldn’t help but ask.
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