Editing Zero no Tsukaima:Volume20 Chapter1

Jump to navigation Jump to search

Warning: You are not logged in. Your IP address will be publicly visible if you make any edits. If you log in or create an account, your edits will be attributed to your username, along with other benefits.

The edit can be undone. Please check the comparison below to verify that this is what you want to do, and then save the changes below to finish undoing the edit.

Latest revision Your text
Line 2: Line 2:
 
After escaping from Adyl, the capital of Nephthys, Saito and the others continued on with their journey in a small boat towed by a dolphin.
 
After escaping from Adyl, the capital of Nephthys, Saito and the others continued on with their journey in a small boat towed by a dolphin.
   
Saito and Tiffania, who were imprisoned by the elves, were nearly forced to drink a mind impairment medicine. Fortunately, Luctiana saved them in the nick of time. Along the way Luctiana's fiancee, Ari, attacked them. But thanks to a revived Derflinger they managed to escape.
+
Saito and Tiffania, who were imprisoned by the elves, were nearly forced to drink a mind impairment medicine. Fortunately, Luctiana saved them in the nick of time. Along the way Luctiana's fiancee, Ari, attacked them; but thanks to a revived Derflinger they managed to escape.
   
 
In the small boat Saito began talking about a lot of things with Derflinger, whose consciousness had transferred into Saito's favorite katana.
 
In the small boat Saito began talking about a lot of things with Derflinger, whose consciousness had transferred into Saito's favorite katana.
Line 8: Line 8:
 
They talked about everything since the time they fought the Elemental Siblings, and the night after Derflinger got destroyed.
 
They talked about everything since the time they fought the Elemental Siblings, and the night after Derflinger got destroyed.
   
Surprisingly, Derflinger knew all about this. And whenever it was brought up, he would just reply with "At that time...". But if it was related to the elves, Derflinger would remain silent.
+
Surprisingly, Derflinger knew all about this. And whenever it was brought up, he would just reply with 'At that time...'. But if it was related to the elves, Derflinger would remain silent.
   
 
——Sasha, who was his Gandálfr, had killed her master Brimir.
 
——Sasha, who was his Gandálfr, had killed her master Brimir.
   
After abruptly having said that, no matter how Saito tried, Derflinger, who had 'restored his consciousness', refused to elaborate on what happened.
+
After abruptly having said that, no matter how Saito tried, Derflinger, who had "restored his consciousness", refused to elaborate on what happened.
   
 
Instead, he kept on beating around the bush as if he was escaping from some great sadness.
 
Instead, he kept on beating around the bush as if he was escaping from some great sadness.
Line 26: Line 26:
 
"What will happen to us after this?" said Tiffania, who was wearing loose Elven clothing, in a low voice.
 
"What will happen to us after this?" said Tiffania, who was wearing loose Elven clothing, in a low voice.
   
"First, we have to find the Holy Land and confirm what we're supposed to find there. Then we'll report all that information back to Louise." Said Saito while looking at Luctiana.
+
"First, we have to find the Holy Land and confirm what we're supposed to find there. Then we'll report all that information back to Louise," said Saito while looking at Luctiana.
   
 
"Even though I feel bad about doing this to her... I feel that this is what we should be doing."
 
"Even though I feel bad about doing this to her... I feel that this is what we should be doing."
Line 118: Line 118:
 
"You... You said that before, right? Really?"
 
"You... You said that before, right? Really?"
   
"Yes... At first, I thought that it was because my brain was in a mess. But after thinking about it calmly, the answer is still the same. Although my heart would thump wildly, I don't feel disgusted."
+
"Yes... At first, I thought that it was because my brain was in a mess; but after thinking about it calmly, the answer is still the same. Although my heart would thump wildly, I don't feel disgusted."
   
 
Because Tiffania said this kind of thing right beside Saito, he also felt his mind gradually boiling.
 
Because Tiffania said this kind of thing right beside Saito, he also felt his mind gradually boiling.
Line 150: Line 150:
 
"But it's impossible for Louise to accept this; and Saito, you also don't like me, right? Then what should I do with my feelings then?
 
"But it's impossible for Louise to accept this; and Saito, you also don't like me, right? Then what should I do with my feelings then?
   
Seeing Tiffania being like that, Saito felt conflicted. It's not that he didn't like Tiffania. There was no other girl in this world as attractive as her. But he still couldn't acknowledge this feeling because he had already promised that he would never do anything that would make Louise sad. Saito thought about that time with Henrietta, and mentally shook his head.
+
Seeing Tiffania being like that, Saito felt conflicted. It's not that he didn't like Tiffania; there was no other girl in this world as attractive as her. But he still couldn't acknowledge this feeling because he had already promised that he would never do anything that would make Louise sad. Saito thought about that time with Henrietta, and mentally shook his head.
   
However, it would be a lie to say he didn't like Tiffania. After all, like means like. Tiffania was just that attractive, and there was an irresistible, instinctive feeling within him towards her. Something felt wrong about denying that feeling.
+
However, it would be a lie to say he didn't like Tiffania. After all, like means like. Tiffania was just that attractive, and there was an irresistible, instinctive feeling within him towards her; something felt wrong about denying that feeling.
   
 
If that was the case, there was only one way left. He had to make Tiffania lose all her feelings towards him. He must make her feel that Hiraga Saito actually was an incorrigible bastard.
 
If that was the case, there was only one way left. He had to make Tiffania lose all her feelings towards him. He must make her feel that Hiraga Saito actually was an incorrigible bastard.
Line 186: Line 186:
 
"Tiffa."
 
"Tiffa."
   
Saito had tears in his eyes, staring at Tiffania. On one hand, he was touched by Tiffania's strong will, so he felt that harboring evil thoughts about Tiffania's chest was shameful. At the same time, he instinctively retorted that her chest was simply too incredible, so it was not his fault. In the end he realized that he was simply too shameful to come up with this warped reasoning.
+
Saito had tears in his eyes, staring at Tiffania. On one hand, he was touched by Tiffania's strong will, so he felt that harboring evil thoughts about Tiffania's chest was shameful; at the same time, he instinctively retorted that her chest was simply too incredible, so it was not his fault. In the end he realized that he was simply too shameful to come up with this warped reasoning.
   
 
When he came to his senses, he was already holding Tiffania's hand.
 
When he came to his senses, he was already holding Tiffania's hand.
Line 266: Line 266:
 
"It's extremely huge, and there's four or five blue, sparkling eyes."
 
"It's extremely huge, and there's four or five blue, sparkling eyes."
   
"Mr. Sword, please don't say anymore..." She pouted, showing a troubled expression.
+
"Mr. Sword, please don't say anymore..." she pouted, showing a troubled expression.
   
 
"And it has ten times more tentacles than an octopus. It'd reach out and grab you in an instant."
 
"And it has ten times more tentacles than an octopus. It'd reach out and grab you in an instant."
Line 340: Line 340:
 
The sea was peaceful, the surface sparkled brilliantly like a mirror reflecting the scorching sunlight.
 
The sea was peaceful, the surface sparkled brilliantly like a mirror reflecting the scorching sunlight.
   
"There was once a huge volcanic island which went dormant around this area. That means we are now above the vent."
+
"There was once a huge volcanic island which went dormant around this area; that means we are now above the vent."
   
 
"Oh, no wonder the ocean is so calm." Saito said.
 
"Oh, no wonder the ocean is so calm." Saito said.
Line 478: Line 478:
   
 
<noinclude>
 
<noinclude>
{| style="margin: 1em 1em 1em 0; background: #f9f9f9; border: 1px #aaaaaa solid; padding: 0.2em; border-collapse: collapse;" border="1" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="5"
+
{| border="1" cellpadding="5" cellspacing="0" style="margin: 1em 1em 1em 0; background: #f9f9f9; border: 1px #aaaaaa solid; padding: 0.2em; border-collapse: collapse;"
 
|-
 
|-
 
| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume20_Illustrations|Back to Illustrations]]
 
| [[Zero_no_Tsukaima:Volume20_Illustrations|Back to Illustrations]]

Please note that all contributions to Baka-Tsuki are considered to be released under the TLG Translation Common Agreement v.0.4.1 (see Baka-Tsuki:Copyrights for details). If you do not want your writing to be edited mercilessly and redistributed at will, then do not submit it here.
You are also promising us that you wrote this yourself, or copied it from a public domain or similar free resource. Do not submit copyrighted work without permission!

To protect the wiki against automated edit spam, we kindly ask you to solve the following CAPTCHA:

Cancel Editing help (opens in new window)