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Aishmail looked around the Council room filled by 50-odd Council members for help. One of the people who had been murmuring their assent just now kept nodding his head while saying "Yes, yes". A sizable amount of people, lead by Aishmail, raised their hands.
 
Aishmail looked around the Council room filled by 50-odd Council members for help. One of the people who had been murmuring their assent just now kept nodding his head while saying "Yes, yes". A sizable amount of people, lead by Aishmail, raised their hands.
   
So it was them again. Bidashal felt a pain in his temple. A party of zealots had appeared in the stagnating and decaying country. Narcissistic monsters who held fast to their beliefs, rejecting any foreign thoughts and approaches.
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So it was them again; Bidashal felt a pain in his temple. A party of zealots had appeared in the stagnating and decaying country. Narcissistic monsters who held fast to their beliefs, rejecting any foreign thoughts and approaches.
   
 
The "Steel-Blooded Party", he spat in his mind as he remembered their name.
 
The "Steel-Blooded Party", he spat in his mind as he remembered their name.
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Bidashal said firmly,
 
Bidashal said firmly,
   
"Even so, yes, it's exactly as Sir Aishmail has said. As the Chairman of the Barbarian Countermeasures Committee, I do bear the responsibility of managing the barbarians within the vicinity of our borders and the responsibility for supervising my niece, Luctiana, is also on my shoulders. Furthermore, the one who educated her was me. Any blame to be made can only be directed to me."
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"Even so, yes, it's exactly as Sir Aishmail has said. As the Chairman of the Barbarian Countermeasures Committee, I do bear the responsibility of managing the barbarians within the vicinity of our borders; and the responsibility for supervising my niece, Luctiana, is also on my shoulders. Furthermore, the one who educated her was me. Any blame to be made can only be directed to me."
   
 
Aishmail revealed a malevolent smile, as if he saw a weakened prey.
 
Aishmail revealed a malevolent smile, as if he saw a weakened prey.
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"To be honest, my thoughts aren't really so organized now, I don't know. It's just that, there are many things I would have liked to tell her, and if she were to die before I could tell them to her, my anger would have nowhere to go, I don't even know what will happen then."
 
"To be honest, my thoughts aren't really so organized now, I don't know. It's just that, there are many things I would have liked to tell her, and if she were to die before I could tell them to her, my anger would have nowhere to go, I don't even know what will happen then."
   
Maybe he was itching to rush all the way to the 'dragon's nest'. He equipped his entire set of battle armor just for that. If he could reach her before the Navy... However, he had not thought about what should he do after he had saved her, naturally.
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Maybe; he was itching to rush all the way to the 'dragon's nest'. He equipped his entire set of battle armor just for that. If he could reach her before the Navy... However, he had not thought about what should he do after he had saved her, naturally.
   
 
Bidashal laughed.
 
Bidashal laughed.
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A few elves carried fish loaded in large barrels up a tall stepped stool, and poured the fish into the dragon whale's open mouth.
 
A few elves carried fish loaded in large barrels up a tall stepped stool, and poured the fish into the dragon whale's open mouth.
   
The stool was wheeled, so it took skill to carry the heavy barrels up the stool without it flipping over. They did not use magic for this. For in the Navy, they were trained under the belief that 'magic was something to be used in battle, not just for any trivial matter.'
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The stool was wheeled, so it took skill to carry the heavy barrels up the stool without it flipping over. They did not use magic for this; for in the Navy, they were trained under the belief that "magic was something to be used in battle, not just for any trivial matter."
   
 
One of the Marines got nervous and made a mistake as he was operating the stepped stool, knocking over the barrel. Fresh fish, reared from the fisheries nearby, flailed vigorously in the harbor.
 
One of the Marines got nervous and made a mistake as he was operating the stepped stool, knocking over the barrel. Fresh fish, reared from the fisheries nearby, flailed vigorously in the harbor.
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The girl officer strutted towards him. Placing her hands on her waist, she raised her head to look at the Marine who was a head taller than her.
 
The girl officer strutted towards him. Placing her hands on her waist, she raised her head to look at the Marine who was a head taller than her.
   
"This happened because you were lax! If you even had an ounce of pride in you as the <ruby> people of the desert<rt> Elves </rt> </ruby>, you wouldn't have made such a trivial mistake!"
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"This happened because you were lax! If you even had an ounce of pride in you as the <ruby> people of the desert <rt> Elves </rt> </ruby>, you wouldn't have made such a trivial mistake!"
   
 
"I'll be careful in the future!"
 
"I'll be careful in the future!"
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"If you don't say it, I'll treat it as an act of disrespect towards a superior and punish you accordingly right here."
 
"If you don't say it, I'll treat it as an act of disrespect towards a superior and punish you accordingly right here."
   
Fatima placed her hand on the saber by her waist. The Marine remembered that she was a member of the 'Steel-Blooded Party'. Knowing that she was not bluffing about it, he spoke reluctantly.
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Fatima placed her hand on the saber by her waist. The Marine remembered that she was a member of the "Steel-Blooded Party". Knowing that she was not bluffing about it, he spoke reluctantly.
   
 
"No...I just thought that, the Major did not have any real battlefield experience."
 
"No...I just thought that, the Major did not have any real battlefield experience."
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"Sir Aishmail called for you."
 
"Sir Aishmail called for you."
   
Fatima's facial expression glowed. And just like that, she ran back with the messenger. The Marines sighed as they watched her leave.
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Fatima's facial expression glowed; and just like that, she ran back with the messenger. The Marines sighed as they watched her leave.
   
 
"The Navy of the past had lesser communication problems like this..."
 
"The Navy of the past had lesser communication problems like this..."
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"Thank you very much!"
 
"Thank you very much!"
   
"Well then, the order that the Council gave to the Navy is to, 'Immediately go to the dragon's nest and capture the Devils and traitor'... However, for someone with the pride and awareness of the <ruby> people of the desert<rt> Elves </rt> </ruby> like you, you should understand what I want to say."
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"Well then, the order that the Council gave to the Navy is to, 'Immediately go to the dragon's nest and capture the Devils and traitor'... However, for someone with the pride and awareness of the <ruby> people of the desert <rt> Elves </rt> </ruby> like you, you should understand what I want to say."
   
 
"Yes."
 
"Yes."
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"I will give the both of them the gift of death."
 
"I will give the both of them the gift of death."
   
"You're completely correct. We, the <ruby> people of the desert<rt> Elves </rt> </ruby>, as united as steel, will continue to exterminate the devil. We will kill them every time they revive, no matter how many times that will be. This is the meaning of the 'Noble Will'."
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"You're completely correct. We, the <ruby> people of the desert <rt> Elves </rt> </ruby>, as united as steel, will continue to exterminate the devil. We will kill them every time they revive, no matter how many times that will be. This is the meaning of the 'Noble Will'."
   
 
"However... I'm afraid that I lack enough firepower to complete the task if I were to only mobilize my troops."
 
"However... I'm afraid that I lack enough firepower to complete the task if I were to only mobilize my troops."
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