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"What did you say?!"
 
"What did you say?!"
 
   
   
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A rumbling sound, like the sound that the earth makes, rang through the sky.
 
A rumbling sound, like the sound that the earth makes, rang through the sky.
   
The "Holy Land", packed with the landed army, was sizzling as if like a frying pan.
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The "Holy Land", packed with the landed army, was as if sizzling like a frying pan.
   
Because the "Holy Land", that was originally floating in the air, was now slowly falling.
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Because the "Holy Land" that was originally floating in the air was now slowly falling.
   
 
Dragon knights and magicians could still fly in the air, but there wasn't another way for the common soldiers. The soldiers charged towards the ships in a panic.
 
Dragon knights and magicians could still fly in the air, but there wasn't another way for the common soldiers. The soldiers charged towards the ships in a panic.
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The girl that told Saito that she loved him....
 
The girl that told Saito that she loved him....
   
''Drip, Drip'' the tears that couldn't stop, wet Louise's cheeks.
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*Drip, Drip*, the tears that couldn't stop, wet Louise's cheeks.
   
 
The rune on his left hand weakened and gradually disappeared.
 
The rune on his left hand weakened and gradually disappeared.
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Saito reached out his hand, touching the gradually cooling cheeks of Louise.
 
Saito reached out his hand, touching the gradually cooling cheeks of Louise.
   
"Louise, when I was beaten by Guiche, you took care of me for three days and three nights. After that, not only did you go with me to buy a sword, you also faced Fouquet's golem with Kirche, Tabitha and I... Also, the Ball of Frigg, was the first time you danced with me. To now, I still remember feeling my heart race seeing you wearing your formal dress."
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"Louise, when I was beaten by Guiche, you took care of me for three days and three nights. After that, not only did you go with me to buy a sword, you also faced Fouquet's golem with Kirche, Tabitha and I... Also, the Ball of Frigg, was the first time you danced with me. To now, I still remember the feeling of my heart race seeing you wearing your formal dress."
   
 
Saito gently combed Louise's hair with trembling fingers.
 
Saito gently combed Louise's hair with trembling fingers.
   
"After that, I fought against Wardes in Albion, we worked together at the 'Charming Fairies' Inn, and experienced many adventures. You remember when we returned to your home, didn't you tell me that there was a necessity for the reward of my loyalty? At that time, I thought that you finally agreed with me. I was so very happy...."
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"After that, I fought against Wardes in Albion, we worked together at the 'Charming Fairies' Inn, and experienced many adventures. You remember when we returned to your home, didn't you tell me that there was a neccessity for the reward of my loyalty? At that time, I thought that you finally agreed with me. I was so very happy...."
   
 
The memories he made with Louise flashed through Saito's mind without stopping.
 
The memories he made with Louise flashed through Saito's mind without stopping.
   
A wedding ceremony held in Albion, going to the Sleipnir Dance, and the adventure with everyone to save Tabitha. The date in Romalia, reuniting with Louise when she wiped her memory, and living steadily in Des Ornières. ''The time you saw me kiss the princess, causing you to leave home....''
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A wedding ceremony held in Albion, going to the Sleipnir Dance, and the adventure with everyone to save Tabitha. The date in Romalia, reuniting with Louise when she wiped her memory, and living steadily in Des Ornières. (The time you saw me kiss the princess, causing you to leave home)....
   
 
There were happy things, fun things, sad things, and difficult things... full of memories.
 
There were happy things, fun things, sad things, and difficult things... full of memories.
   
''When I was in Tokyo, I never thought about my life goals. I lived the boring life of going to school and eating....''
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(When I was in Tokyo, I never thought about my life goals. I lived the boring life of going to school and eating....)
   
 
Saito tightly embraced Louise's remains.
 
Saito tightly embraced Louise's remains.
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"Derf----!"
 
"Derf----!"
   
At that moment, the light shrouding Louise and Derflinger's blade in radiance instantly shattered.
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At that moment, the light shrouding Louise and Derflinger's blade in radiance shattered instantly.
 
   
   
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Saito is shouting my name.
 
Saito is shouting my name.
   
"What? What's going on?"
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What? What's going on?"
   
 
This confused Louise. Because didn't she just die?
 
This confused Louise. Because didn't she just die?
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"You?"
 
"You?"
   
"W-what did you do!"
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"W-what did you do[[User:Bygghandel|Bygghandel]] ([[User talk:Bygghandel|talk]])!"
   
 
Louise kicked Saito in the crotch hard.
 
Louise kicked Saito in the crotch hard.
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In fact, even Saito wanted to cry.
 
In fact, even Saito wanted to cry.
   
But instead of sorrow, Saito thought that they were to happily thank Derflinger.
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But instead of sorrow, Saito thinked that they were to happily thank Derflinger.
   
''Thank you... Thank you for resurrecting my most beloved person, Louise.''
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(Thank you... Thank you for resurrecting my most beloved person, Louise.)
   
 
After the two mourned Derflinger for a while... the ground suddenly swayed.
 
After the two mourned Derflinger for a while... the ground suddenly swayed.
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Leading Louise by hand, Saito broke into a run.
 
Leading Louise by hand, Saito broke into a run.
 
   
   
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"Thank you, Saito."
 
"Thank you, Saito."
   
Louise's body was weak and she sat on the ground. Her feet had already reached their limit, and it seemed like Saito had no power to continue running. Although the "Lífþrasir" rune had disappeared, it still was very admirable for him to have run to there with his abused body.
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Louise's body was week and she sat on the ground. Her feet had already reached their limit, and it seemed like Saito had no power to continue running. Although the "Lífþrasir" rune had disappeared, it stillwas very admirable for him to have run to there with his abused body.
   
 
The rock continued to fall, and the two of them were stranded on a small rock that had separated from the bigger rock.
 
The rock continued to fall, and the two of them were stranded on a small rock that had separated from the bigger rock.
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"...I don't know. But maybe there is value in trying."
 
"...I don't know. But maybe there is value in trying."
   
After answering with a serious expression, Louise pulled out her wand from her cloak.
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After answering with a seriou expression, Louise pulled out her wand from her cloak.
   
 
From the the size of the light ball, it wouldn't have the original power of "Life".
 
From the the size of the light ball, it wouldn't have the original power of "Life".

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