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“Fiancée?”
 
“Fiancée?”
   
“This majestic looking noble is Louise' fiancée???”
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“This majestic looking noble is Louise' fiancé???”
   
 
“Wardes-sama...” Louise spoke in a trembling voice after standing up.
 
“Wardes-sama...” Louise spoke in a trembling voice after standing up.
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Even with the dagger pointed on her face, Fouquet showed no fear. With a slight movement, she reached for a wand.
 
Even with the dagger pointed on her face, Fouquet showed no fear. With a slight movement, she reached for a wand.
   
In an instant, she chanted her incantations. With that, the dagger that the man held turned into earth and settled onto the table.
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In a instant, she chanted her incantations. With that, the dagger that the man held turned into earth and settled onto the table.
   
 
“She's.. she's a noble!”
 
“She's.. she's a noble!”
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The marriage that was decided by her parents.
 
The marriage that was decided by her parents.
   
The betrothal that was decided since youth. The one that she would be married to. Her fiancée.
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The betrothal that was decided since youth. The one that she would be married to. Her fiancé.
   
 
At that time, she still did not fully understand what was going on. She only knew that, so long as she was with the man she had admired, she would be happy.
 
At that time, she still did not fully understand what was going on. She only knew that, so long as she was with the man she had admired, she would be happy.
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Even though she did not dislike him and she did admire him when she was young, that was all in the past.
 
Even though she did not dislike him and she did admire him when she was young, that was all in the past.
   
Suddenly faced with a fiancée and probably marriage, she did not know what to do. Furthermore, they had been apart for so many years, she did not really know whether she still had any feelings for him.
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Suddenly faced with a fiancé and probably marriage, she did not know what to do. Furthermore, they had been apart for so many years, she did not really know whether she still had any feelings for him.
   
 
Louise turned her head and looked behind.
 
Louise turned her head and looked behind.
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“We have already been on these horses for nearly a whole day, doesn't he get tired? Are those griffin knights monsters?” Guiche, who was also lifelessly slouching on the horse, asked.
 
“We have already been on these horses for nearly a whole day, doesn't he get tired? Are those griffin knights monsters?” Guiche, who was also lifelessly slouching on the horse, asked.
   
“Who knows?” Saito replied lethargically. He felt embittered each time Wardes touched Louise. He touched her again...this time hugging her by the shoulder... ''What is that guy up to... Even though you're Louise's fiancée, even though I have no right to stop you, you should have at least done it somewhere else where I could not see...''
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“Who knows?” Saito replied lethargically. He felt embittered each time Wardes touched Louise. He touched her again...this time hugging her by the shoulder... ''What is that guy up to... Even though you're Louise's fiancé, even though I have no right to stop you, you should have at least done it somewhere else where I could not see...''
   
 
Each time Saito thought of that, he became more tired and his heart became heavier.
 
Each time Saito thought of that, he became more tired and his heart became heavier.
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“I'm all right...” replied Saito.
 
“I'm all right...” replied Saito.
   
''Damn it! Louise's fiancée just saved my life.'' That sense of dismal kept expanding, causing Saito to feel inferior. He unsheathed Derflinger. The runes on his left hand started glowing again, reliving him of the exhaustion that he had been suffering.
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''Damn it! Louise's fiancé just saved my life.'' That sense of dismal kept expanding, causing Saito to feel inferior. He unsheathed Derflinger. The runes on his left hand started glowing again, reliving him of the exhaustion that he had been suffering.
 
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She then looked at Saito. He looked listless and was talking to his sword rather dejectedly.
 
She then looked at Saito. He looked listless and was talking to his sword rather dejectedly.
   
''Eh? Is he looking like that because I made advances on Louise's fiancée?'' As she thought about that, Saito suddenly looked cuter. Looking at Saito, she ran towards him and hugged him immediately.
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''Eh? Is he looking like that because I made advances on Louise's fiancé?'' As she thought about that, Saito suddenly looked cuter. Looking at Saito, she ran towards him and hugged him immediately.
   
 
“Actually, I'm here because I'm worried for my beloved!”
 
“Actually, I'm here because I'm worried for my beloved!”
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==Translator's Notes and References==
 
==Translator's Notes and References==
 
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