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''I don’t understand why, but I constantly feel this is wrong. If it was a crow or owl type of familiar it wouldn’t be so troublesome. If no one takes care of this idiot from another world, what will happen to him?''
 
''I don’t understand why, but I constantly feel this is wrong. If it was a crow or owl type of familiar it wouldn’t be so troublesome. If no one takes care of this idiot from another world, what will happen to him?''
   
Kirche or… Saito didn’t know that Louise knew the maid from the kitchen who often fed him… They will take care of him right?
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Kirche or… Saito doesn’t know Louise knows, the maid from the kitchen who often fed him… They will take care of him right?
   
''I don’t understand why but this is extremely annoying''. Louise thought, just like a small girl she wanted to have Saito all to herself. ''Although Saito is an idiot and often makes me mad, I don’t want him to become someone else’s property. He is mine.''
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''I don’t understand why but this is extremely annoying''. Louise thought, just a like small girl she wanted to have Saito all to herself. ''Although Saito is an idiot, and often makes me mad, but I don’t want him to become someone else’s property. He is mine.''
   
 
Louise raised her head.
 
Louise raised her head.
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''Why, even though Wardes is so gentle, handsome and strong, even though I longed for him for such a long time.... Yet, I am not even happy when I am being proposed to.''
 
''Why, even though Wardes is so gentle, handsome and strong, even though I longed for him for such a long time.... Yet, I am not even happy when I am being proposed to.''
   
Someone else had already caught her heart. But Louise's mind refused to think about the one that caught it.
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Someone else already caught her heart. But Louise's mind refused to think about the one that caught it.
   
   
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“Can’t understand it even after you see it? This is a date.”
 
“Can’t understand it even after you see it? This is a date.”
   
Saito tried to say something, but his lips were covered by Kirche’s hands, making him look puzzled. Louise’s shoulders started to quake in fury.
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Saito tried to say something, but his lips were covered by Kirche’s hands, making him look puzzled. Louise’s shoulders start to quake in fury.
   
 
“Go, go, go, go have romance somewhere else. You, you, you two stray dogs!”
 
“Go, go, go, go have romance somewhere else. You, you, you two stray dogs!”
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“Good morning, familiar.”
 
“Good morning, familiar.”
   
Louise’s fiancé calling him like this made Saito angry
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With Louise’s fiancé calling him like this made Saito angry
   
 
Saito replied, “Morning, but the departure date is tomorrow right? Do you have anything important to say this morning? I've been riding a horse all day yesterday, I still want to sleep.”
 
Saito replied, “Morning, but the departure date is tomorrow right? Do you have anything important to say this morning? I've been riding a horse all day yesterday, I still want to sleep.”
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“Exactly.”
 
“Exactly.”
   
Wardes and Saito smiled together. Taking one look at the still sleeping Guiche, the Japanese boy thought ''I am not sure just how strong Wardes is anyway, but I have beaten Guiche already and captured Fouquet. He is the Captain of the Magic Knights, and looks like he has some abilities too. But I shouldn’t be so far behind.''
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Wardes and Saito smiled together. Taking one look at the still sleeping Guiche, the Japanese boy thought ''I am not sure just how strong Wardes is anyway, but I have beaten Guiche already and captured Fouquet. Although he is the Captain of the Magic Knights, and looks like he has some abilities too. But I shouldn’t be so far behind.''
   
 
''Let's show Louise’s fiancé what Gandálfr is capable of'' Saito thought.
 
''Let's show Louise’s fiancé what Gandálfr is capable of'' Saito thought.
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Saito did not reply, only stared at Wardes.
 
Saito did not reply, only stared at Wardes.
   
“What? Really?” <!--(an exact Chinese translation don’t fit here, since this phrase is often used as sort of a whine when someone is denied of something, especially by children --- Perhaps something like "Hey...listen to me.." might be better? ~Dan)-->
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“What? Really?” <!--(an exact Chinese translation don’t fit here, since this phase is often used as sort of a whine when someone is denied of something, especially by children --- Perhaps something like "Hey...listen to me.." might be better? ~Dan)-->
   
 
“Since the witness is here, let us begin."
 
“Since the witness is here, let us begin."
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“…Just because you lost does not mean you should cry, that is unbecoming.”
 
“…Just because you lost does not mean you should cry, that is unbecoming.”
   
The boy in response wiped his face, not wanting Louise to see his tears.
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The boy in response wiped his face, no wanting Louise to see his tears.
   
 
“That's not right.”
 
“That's not right.”
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Saito thought really deeply, “Then why is it really this way?”
 
Saito thought really deeply, “Then why is it really this way?”
   
He finally understood why he had been staring at the moon every night until tonight, yet never thinking about going home.
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He finally understood, why he had been staring at the moon every night until tonight, yet never thinking about going home.
   
 
But, he really hated wanting to admit this reason.
 
But, he really hated wanting to admit this reason.

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