Editing Zero no Tsukaima:Volume2 Chapter5

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Saito with his sword in one hand, another clutching the window frames. At the same time Kirche, with her legs around his shoulders, clung closely to him as if getting some weird piggyback ride.
 
Saito with his sword in one hand, another clutching the window frames. At the same time Kirche, with her legs around his shoulders, clung closely to him as if getting some weird piggyback ride.
   
Without question - this looked suspicious, but pretty amazing too.
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Without a question - this looked suspicious, but pretty amazing too.
   
 
“Can’t understand it even after you see it? This is a date.”
 
“Can’t understand it even after you see it? This is a date.”
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Kirche replied triumphantly.
 
Kirche replied triumphantly.
   
In an instant Louise’s foot flew in their direction. Kirche ducked then climbed on to the wall, so the shorter girl’s foot instead connected straight with Saito’s face, sending him flying.
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In an instant Louise’s foot flew in their direction, Kirche ducked then climbed on to the wall, so the shorter girl’s foot connected straight with Saito’s face, sending him flying.
   
 
Luckily Saito had the sword in his hand, and thrust it into the wall to stop his falling. Then he howled in rage:
 
Luckily Saito had the sword in his hand, and thrust it into the wall to stop his falling. Then he howled in rage:
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“WOAH!” Saito shouted. Louise turned her head around, and to her surprise, something appeared that swallowed the moon, and it was nowhere to be seen.
 
“WOAH!” Saito shouted. Louise turned her head around, and to her surprise, something appeared that swallowed the moon, and it was nowhere to be seen.
   
Beneath the moon’s shadow, there appeared to be a giant. When they looked at it closely, the huge shadow turned out to be a golem made of stone. The person controlling the golem turned out to be…
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Beneath the moon’s shadow, there appeared to be a giant. If we looked at it closely, the huge shadow turned out to be a golem made of stone. The person controlling the golem turned out to be…
   
 
“Fouquet!” Saito and Louise shouted in unison. The figure above them sat on the golem’s shoulder, cheerfully answered, “Oh, it is such an honor to be remembered!”
 
“Fouquet!” Saito and Louise shouted in unison. The figure above them sat on the golem’s shoulder, cheerfully answered, “Oh, it is such an honor to be remembered!”

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