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“How many shells shall we fire? For the top nobles, eleven is required.”
 
“How many shells shall we fire? For the top nobles, eleven is required.”
   
The number of shells to be fired depended upon the person’s rank and social status.
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The number of shells to be fired was depended upon the person’s rank and social status.
   
 
“Seven will do,” ordered La Ramée watching with a grin on his face like a stubborn child.
 
“Seven will do,” ordered La Ramée watching with a grin on his face like a stubborn child.
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“So they’ve finally realized.” Said Wardes, who was standing next to Bowood, as he leisurely watched the Tristain fleet. Wardes also believed the commander in chief, Johnston, didn't deserve the title and would be unable to do anything. Wardes was in effect, the commanding officer.
 
“So they’ve finally realized.” Said Wardes, who was standing next to Bowood, as he leisurely watched the Tristain fleet. Wardes also believed the commander in chief, Johnston, didn't deserve the title and would be unable to do anything. Wardes was in effect, the commanding officer.
   
“Seems like it, Viscount. However, it seems we will win soon enough.”
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“Seems like it, viscount. However, it seems we will win soon enough.”
   
 
The Albion fleet, which had superior mobility, had already taken action to suppress the full on charge of the Tristain fleet.
 
The Albion fleet, which had superior mobility, had already taken action to suppress the full on charge of the Tristain fleet.
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In the garden of her parents' house, Siesta hugged her young siblings, watching the skies with an uneasy face. An explosion had been heard not long before in the direction of La Rochelle. Surprised, she went out to the garden and saw the dreadful scene in the sky. Numerous ships were on fire and sinking, crashing onto the mountain’s surface and dropping into the middle of the forest.
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In the garden of her parent’s house, Siesta hugged her young siblings, watching the skies with an uneasy face. An explosion had been heard not long before in the direction of La Rochelle. Surprised, she went out to the garden and saw the dreadful scene in the sky. Numerous ships were on fire and sinking, crashing onto the mountain’s surface and dropping into the middle of the forest.
   
The village was in a state of confusion. A short while later, a large ship had descended from the sky. The ship, so large that it could be easily mistaken for a cloud, dropped its anchor on the field in the village.
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The village was in a state of confusion. A short while later, a large ship had descended from the sky. The ship, so large that it could be easily mistaken for a cloud, dropped it’s anchor on the field in the village.
   
 
Numerous dragons flew out of it.
 
Numerous dragons flew out of it.
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“That’s not possible. We have a non-aggression treaty with Albion. The lord proclaimed it recently.”
 
“That’s not possible. We have a non-aggression treaty with Albion. The lord proclaimed it recently.”
   
“Then why is the sky full of sinking ships?”
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“Then why was the sky full of sinking ships?”
   
 
The dragons flying above the ship headed towards the village. Her father grasped his wife and stepped away from the window. With loud cries, the dragons descended upon the village and set the houses on fire.
 
The dragons flying above the ship headed towards the village. Her father grasped his wife and stepped away from the window. With loud cries, the dragons descended upon the village and set the houses on fire.

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