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“What's with that familiar?!”
 
“What's with that familiar?!”
   
Grumbling, she hit the wall of the hole with her fist.
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Grumbling, as she hit the wall of the hole with her fist.
   
“Don’t die Saito!” could be heard from the bench as Siesta tended to Saito. Louise had thrown the rock that had hit Saito in the head. It was unforgivable to kiss another girl since he was her familiar.
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“Don’t die Saito!” could be heard from the bench, as Siesta tended to Saito. Louise had thrown the rock that hit Saito in the head. It was unforgivable to kiss another girl since he was her familiar.
   
 
“Hey, noble girl.” said Derflinger with an expressionless voice.
 
“Hey, noble girl.” said Derflinger with an expressionless voice.

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