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===Chapter One: The Saint===
 
===Chapter One: The Saint===
   
On the Bourdonné Street in the town below the Tristain castle, a magnificent parade was being held in commemoration of their victory. The parade was led by Princess Henrietta’s chariot, which was pulled along by the legendary beasts known as unicorns. Renowned nobles in their chariots followed after her. Around them, the magical defence squad served as their bodyguards.
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On the Bourdonné Street in the town below the Tristain castle, a magnificent parade was being held in commemoration of their victory. The parade was led by Princess Henrietta’s chariot, which was pulled along by the legendary beasts known as unicorns. Renown nobles in their chariots followed after her. Around them, the magical defence squad served as their bodyguards.
   
 
The narrow road was filled with spectators. People cheered as they watched from the windows and roofs of the buildings as the chariots passed by.
 
The narrow road was filled with spectators. People cheered as they watched from the windows and roofs of the buildings as the chariots passed by.
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“Long live Tristain!”
 
“Long live Tristain!”
   
The crowd was extremely enthusiastic. Princess Henrietta had led the Tristain forces to victory at the Plains of Tarbes the other day against the Albion forces who had broken their treaty. Princess Henrietta, who had defeated the enemy which outnumbered them, was praised as a ‘saint’ and was as popular as it was possible.
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The crowd was extremely enthusiastic. Princess Henrietta had led the Tristain forces to victory at the Plains of Tarbes the other day against the Albion forces who had broken their contract. Princess Henrietta, who had defeated the enemy which outnumbered them, was praised as a ‘saint’ and was as popular as could be.
   
After the parade was over, a coronation was awaiting Henrietta, in which she was to assume the throne. This was proposed by Cardinal Mazarini, with most of the court’s nobles and cabinet ministers agreeing.
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After the parade was over, a coronation was awaiting Henrietta, in which she was to assume the throne. This was proposed by Cardinal Marazinasa, with most of the court’s nobles and cabinet ministers agreeing.
   
 
The marriage of the prince of the neighboring country, Germania, with Henrietta was canceled, much to their disappointment. After all, they could not afford to be unyielding to a country that defeated the invading forces of Albion.
 
The marriage of the prince of the neighboring country, Germania, with Henrietta was canceled, much to their disappointment. After all, they could not afford to be unyielding to a country that defeated the invading forces of Albion.
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A party of the defeated Albion soldiers were watching the triumphant return in the corner of the plaza. They were the nobles of the Albion forces who were taken as prisoners. Even though they were prisoners, they were treated fairly well. Their wands were confiscated, but they were not tied up, and could freely stand. Guards were place around them, but none of them were thinking of escaping. When nobles are captured as prisoners, they undergo an oath. If they were to break that oath, then their honour and name would turn into ashes. For nobles, who valued honour very highly, it was the equivalent of death.
   
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Within that party of people, there was a scorched man with a bold face. It was Sir Bowood, who was the captain of the Lexington warship, which Louise sunk by engulfing in flames with her Void magic. He nudged at the noble beside him and spoke to him.
A party of the defeated Albion soldiers were watching the triumphant return in the corner of the plaza. They were the nobles of the Albion forces who were taken as prisoners. Even though they were prisoners, they were treated fairly well. Their wands were confiscated, but they were not tied up, and could freely stand. Guards were placed around them, but none of them were thinking of escaping. When nobles are captured as prisoners, they undergo an oath. If they were to break that oath, then their honour and name would turn into ashes. For nobles, who valued honour very highly, it was equivalent to death.
 
   
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“Look Horeisho, It’s the ‘saint’ who defeated us”
Within that party of people, there was a scorched man with a bold face. It was Sir Bowood, who was the captain of the Lexington warship, which Louise sunk by engulfing it in flames with her Void magic. He nudged at the noble beside him and spoke to him.
 
   
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The noble called Horeisho turned his fat figure and replied.
“Look Horatio, It’s the ‘saint’ who defeated us”
 
 
The noble called Horatio turned his fat figure and replied.
 
   
 
“Hm… There hasn’t been an enthronement of a princess in Halkeginia before. Even though they defeated us, the war still isn’t over. Furthermore, isn’t she a bit young?”
 
“Hm… There hasn’t been an enthronement of a princess in Halkeginia before. Even though they defeated us, the war still isn’t over. Furthermore, isn’t she a bit young?”
   
“Horatio, you should study some history. There’s been one instance in Gallia and two in Tristain where the princess has been enthroned.”
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“Horeisho, you should study some history. There’s been one instance in Garia and two in Tristain where the princess has been enthroned.”
   
Horatio scratched his head.
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Horeisho scratched his head.
   
“History you say? If so, we’re just a ribbon decorating the first page of Saint Henrietta’s brillant history. That light! Not only did it annihilate my ship but yours as well!”
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“History you say? If it do, we’re just a ribbon of decoration on the Saint Henrietta’s page of history. That light! Not only did it annihilate my ship but yours as well!”
   
 
Bowood nodded. That ball of light which shone above the Lexington expanded to a huge size in just a matter of seconds. Not only did it cause the fleet to be engulfed in flames but it also destroyed the ‘wind stones’ on board the ships, causing them to sink towards the ground.
 
Bowood nodded. That ball of light which shone above the Lexington expanded to a huge size in just a matter of seconds. Not only did it cause the fleet to be engulfed in flames but it also destroyed the ‘wind stones’ on board the ships, causing them to sink towards the ground.
   
What was even more surprising, was that the light did not kill a single person. The light destroyed the fleet, but had no effect on the people. They managed to glide down onto the ground with what little control they had left. The flames did injure many people but there were no casualties.
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What was even more surprising, was that the light did not kill a single person. The light destroyed the fleet, but had no effect on the people. They managed to glide down onto the ground with what little control they had left. The flames did injure many people but there no casualties.
   
 
“A miraculous light… I can’t believe it. I haven’t even heard or seen that kind of magic before. Our country has chosen a fearsome enemy.” Bowood whispered.
 
“A miraculous light… I can’t believe it. I haven’t even heard or seen that kind of magic before. Our country has chosen a fearsome enemy.” Bowood whispered.
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Raising his eyebrows the soldier approached Bowood.
 
Raising his eyebrows the soldier approached Bowood.
   
“Did you call for me, Your Excellency?"
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“Did you call for me, Your excellency?"
   
No matter if the person was an enemy or ally, nobles were to be treated with respect. The soldier waited for Bowood’s words in a polite manner.
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No matter if the person was an enemy or ally, nobles are treated with respect. The soldier waited for Bowood’s words in a polite manner.
   
 
“My subordinates aren’t locked up are they? Are they being fed properly?”
 
“My subordinates aren’t locked up are they? Are they being fed properly?”
   
“The soldiers who were captured are being gathered and are being invited into the Tristain forces. There is compulsory labour imposed on them but most of them should be aspiring to join our forces. After all, it was a big victory. Don’t worry about their stomachs, Tristain is not such a poor country as to be considering whether or not to give prisoners food.”
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“The soldiers who were captured are being gathered in one and are being invited into the Tristain forces. There is compulsory labour imposed on them but most of them should be aspiring to join our forces. After all, it was a big victory. Don’t worry about their stomaches, Tristain is not such a poor country as to be considering whether or not to give prisoners food.”
   
 
“Here’s a cup to celebrate the ‘saint’s’ victory.”
 
“Here’s a cup to celebrate the ‘saint’s’ victory.”
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The soldier laughed.
 
The soldier laughed.
   
“Allow me to offer a cup to Your Excellency’s health.”
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“Allow me to offer a cup to your excellency’s health.”
   
 
Feeling cheerful, Bowood whispered while he watched the soldier leave.
 
Feeling cheerful, Bowood whispered while he watched the soldier leave.
   
“If this annoying war ends and you go back home, what would you do, Horatio?”
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“If this annoying war ends and you go back home, what would you do, Horeisho?”
   
 
“I’m going to retire from the army. I wouldn’t even mind if I gave up my wand, after seeing that light.”
 
“I’m going to retire from the army. I wouldn’t even mind if I gave up my wand, after seeing that light.”
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“Why must I take the throne? Mother is here isn’t she?”
 
“Why must I take the throne? Mother is here isn’t she?”
   
“She won’t even respond if we call her ‘Your Majesty the Queen.’ She said that she is not a king, merely the king’s wife and your mother, and she would definitely not accept the crown.”
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“She won’t even respond if we call her ‘Your majesty the queen.’ She said that she is not a king, merely the king’s wife and your mother and would definitely not accept the crown.”
   
 
“Why did my mother refuse to accept?”
 
“Why did my mother refuse to accept?”
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“Don’t say such selfish things! Your coronation is something your mother has hoped for as well. Tristain cannot be a weak country right now. The nobles and citizens of Tristain, our allied countries as well, are hoping for you to take the throne.”
 
“Don’t say such selfish things! Your coronation is something your mother has hoped for as well. Tristain cannot be a weak country right now. The nobles and citizens of Tristain, our allied countries as well, are hoping for you to take the throne.”
   
Henrietta sighed again. She looked at the wind ruby on her left ring finger. It was the ring which Saito had brought back to her, a memento of Wales’. The victory that had ascended her to the throne… was in a sense Wales’ victory. The ring had given Henrietta courage to face the enemy.
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Henrietta sighed again. She looked at the wind ruby on her left ring finger. It was the ring which Saito had brought back to her, a memento of Wales’. The victory that ascended her to the throne… was in a sense Wales’ victory. The ring gave Henrietta courage to face the enemy.
   
''If mother left the throne empty because she was longing for father… then I want to do the same. I don’t want to become a queen.''
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If mother left the throne empty because she was longing for father… then I want to do the same. I don’t want to become a queen.
   
 
But she could hear the crowd’s cheers. As if admonishing, Mazarini quietly whispered.
 
But she could hear the crowd’s cheers. As if admonishing, Mazarini quietly whispered.
   
“The citizens are all hoping for the coronation. Your Excellency’s body is already something that is not yours.”
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“The citizens are all hoping for the coronation. Your excellency’s body, is already something that is not yours.”
   
 
With a cough, he continued.
 
With a cough, he continued.
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In an air of importance, Mazarini explained the procedures.
 
In an air of importance, Mazarini explained the procedures.
   
“…Then, when the ritual is finished, your excellency will approach the queen at the altar. You will state the written vow to the founders and the gods and your mother will place the crown on you. Then everyone in Halkeginia, including me, will be addressing you as ‘Your Majesty’.”
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“…Then, when the ritual is finished, your excellency will approach the queen at the altar. You will state the written vow to the founders and the gods and your mother will place the crown on you. Then everyone in Halkeginia, including me, will be addressing you as ‘your majesty’.”
   
 
A vow…
 
A vow…
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Pledging something that she didn’t really hold true in her heart… isn’t that blasphemy? Thought Henrietta.
 
Pledging something that she didn’t really hold true in her heart… isn’t that blasphemy? Thought Henrietta.
   
''I just can’t think of myself as queen. That victory… the victory at Tarbes that ascended me to the throne was not through my leadership, but by the abundant experience and wit of the generals and Mazarini. I was only leading, I didn’t do anything else. If Wales were alive right now, what would he say to me? Me, who’s been given the duty of rising to the apex of power…
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I just can’t think of myself as queen. That victory… the victory at Tarbes that ascended me to the throne was not through my leadership, but by the abundant experience and wit of the generals and Mazarini. I was only leading, I didn’t do anything else. If Wales were alive right now, what would he say to me? Me, who’s been given the duty of rising to the apex of power…
   
 
Wales.
 
Wales.
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The only person I have loved…
 
The only person I have loved…
   
Before that or even after that, the only time I have truly vowed with the words ringing true with my heart has been that one time in the Ragdorian Lake. The great victory and the brilliance of the coronation did not lighten Henrietta’s heart from such thoughts.''
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Before that or even after that, the only time I have truly vowed with the words ringing true with my heart has been that one time in the Ragdorian lake. The great victory and the brilliance of the coronation did not lighten Henrietta’s heart from such thoughts.
   
 
She blankly stared at the parchment in her hands.
 
She blankly stared at the parchment in her hands.
   
It was the report that had been delivered to Henrietta the other day. Recorded there was the interrogation of the prisoners done by a guard. There was something written about Saito’s Zero fighter shooting down the dragoons. A prisoner who had been a dragoon said that it flew with great agility and used powerful magic based attacks, shooting down his allies one by one. But, such a dragoon did not exist in the Tristain forces. Puzzled by this, the guard had investigated further in the matter. A report from the village of Tarbes continued. The ‘dragon’ the dragoon was using was in fact a magical item called the Dragon’s Raiment belonging to the Village of Tarbes. But it seems like it wasn’t a magical item, but instead an unknown machinery.
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It was the report that had been delivered to Henrietta the other day. Recorded there was the interrogation of the prisoners done by a guard. There was something written about Saito’s zero fighter shooting down the dragoons. A prisoner who had been a dragoon said that it flew with great agility and used powerful magic based attacks, shooting down his allies one by one. But, such a dragoon did not exist in the Tristain forces. Puzzled by this, the guard had investigated further in the matter. A report from the village of Tarbes continued. The ‘dragon’ the dragoon was using was in fact a magical item called the Dragon’s Raiment belonging to the Village of Tarbes. But it seems like it wasn’t a magical item, but instead an unknown machinery.
   
The one who was controlling it was the familiar of her friend, La Vallière. And… there was a slight hint of information regarding the light which destroyed the enemy fleet as well. That light had appeared near the flying machine. The guard had made quite a hypothesis, that La Vallière and her familiar were the source of that light. However, the guard seemed troubled whether to directly contact the two. The report ended with a request for further directions regarding the investigation.
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The one who was controlling it was the familiar of her friend, La Vallière. And… there was a slight hint of information regarding the light which destroyed the enemy fleet as well. That light, had appeared near the flying machine. The guard had made quite a hypothesis, that La Vallière and her familiar were the source of that light. However, the guard seemed troubled whether to directly contact the two. The report ended with a request for further directions regarding the investigation.
   
''The light which brought me victory.''
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The light which brought me victory.
   
 
The intense light that resembled the sun.
 
The intense light that resembled the sun.
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“Yeah! It does get quite cold when I open the windshield.”
 
“Yeah! It does get quite cold when I open the windshield.”
   
Saito wrapped it around his neck to try it on. It was the start of summer, but the skies were cold and all the more cold when the windshield was open. During takeoff and landing he needed to stretch his head outside of the windshield to check below him. It was different from the modern aeroplanes where they could do everything with the windshield closed.
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Saito wrapped it around his neck to try it on. It was the start of summer, but the skies were cold and all the more cold when the windshield was open. During takeoff and landing he needed to stretch his head outside of the windshield to check below him. It was different to the modern aeroplanes were they could do everything with the windshield closed.
   
 
On the white muffler, words were written with black knitting wool. At first they looked with letters from the alphabet but on closer inspection they were Halkeginian characters, quite different from the alphabet.
 
On the white muffler, words were written with black knitting wool. At first they looked with letters from the alphabet but on closer inspection they were Halkeginian characters, quite different from the alphabet.
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The two found themselves blushing. Siesta had hugged Saito and kissed him on the cheek during that time.
 
The two found themselves blushing. Siesta had hugged Saito and kissed him on the cheek during that time.
   
The village people came out of the forest soon after. Many of them had been intently watching Saito defeat the enemy dragoons with his Zero fighter. They had praised Saito and Louise as heroes for crushing the enemies. Celebrations were held for three days and three nights, and both of them received treatment as fine as royalty. They had also restored Siesta’s grandfather’s honour, as they proved the Zero fighter could really fly.
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The village people came out of the forest soon after. Many of them had been intently watching Saito defeat the enemy dragoons with his Zero fighter. They had praised Saito and Louise as heroes for crushing the enemies. Celebrations were held for three days and three nights, and both of them received treatment as fine as royalty. They had also restored Siesta’s grandfather’s honour, as they proved the zero fighter could really fly.
   
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During the feast, Siesta had diligently attended to Saito and had drawn closer to him. At this moment, her body was also leaning lightly against him.
 
   
Confused, Saito fiddled with the muffler around his neck.
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Saito nervously brushed his hand along the muffler around his neck. He noticed something odd.
 
"Uh?"
 
 
He noticed something.
 
   
 
“Siesta, the muffler is quite long…”
 
“Siesta, the muffler is quite long…”
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There was an incredible charm as Siesta looked into his eyes after saying that. It was as if she had the eyes of a loving puppy.
 
There was an incredible charm as Siesta looked into his eyes after saying that. It was as if she had the eyes of a loving puppy.
   
''A muffler made for two… what are you, the perfect maid? A maid like you would be sentenced to death in Japan, y-y-you…''
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A muffler made for two… what are you, the perfect maid? A maid like you would be sentenced to death in Japan, y-y-you…
   
 
Saito’s thoughts had started to not make sense. Siesta’s maid-like manner had landed a critical hit in his mind.
 
Saito’s thoughts had started to not make sense. Siesta’s maid-like manner had landed a critical hit in his mind.
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Saito would never forget her father’s face as he said that. It was more daunting than orcs, dragoons, even Louise’s magic that destroyed the enemy fleet.
 
Saito would never forget her father’s face as he said that. It was more daunting than orcs, dragoons, even Louise’s magic that destroyed the enemy fleet.
   
He couldn’t just carelessly make a move on Siesta. He was someone who had to return home after all… If he kissed her, then he would make Siesta sad. And if that happened, Siesta’s father would probably follow him to Earth and hunt him down. The terror that his face had emitted was menacing enough to stop him from laughing off the idea.
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He couldn’t just carelessly make a move on Siesta. He was someone who had to return home after all… If he kissed her, then he would make Siesta sad. And if that happened, Siesta’s father would probably go to Earth and hunt him down. The terror that his face had emitted, was menacing enough to stop him from laughing off the idea.
   
But, as Siesta’s lips approached even closer, his hesitation had started to feeble. Since Saito wasn’t moving any closer, it seemed Siesta was planning to close the distance between them herself. Grabbing Saito’s head, she daringly drew him in. Siesta was a girl who was unbelievably daring when she wanted to be. Saito couldn’t resist.
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But, as Siesta’s lips approached even closer, his hesitation had started to feeble. Since Saito wasn’t moving any closer, it seemed Siesta was planning to close the distance between them herself. Grabbing Saito’s head, she daringly drew him in. Siesta was a girl who was unbelievably daring when she was daring. Saito couldn’t resist.
   
''Ah, no…but if it’s only a kiss then…'' He thought as his body stiffened.
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Ah, no…but if it’s only a kiss then… He thought as his body stiffened.
   
 
And with loud thud, Saito fainted from a large rock thrown at his head.
 
And with loud thud, Saito fainted from a large rock thrown at his head.
   
About 15 metres behind the bench where Siesta and Saito were seated, there was a gaping hole in the ground. In it was a girl catching her breath. It was none other than Louise.
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About 15 metres behind the bench where Siesta and Saito were seated, was a gaping hole in the ground. In it, was a girl catching her breath. It was none other than Louise.
   
Louise stamped her feet. Beside her was the large mole that had dug the hole, Verdandi, and the intelligent sword, Derflinger. After making Guiche’s mole dig the hole, Louise had hid in it, popping her head up to quietly watch over Saito and Siesta. She had brought Derflinger along since she had some things she wanted to ask him.
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Louise stamped her feet. Beside her, was the large mole that had dug the hole, Belldandy and the intelligent sword, Delfinger. After making Guische’s mole dig the hole, Louise hid in it, popping her head up to quietly watch over Saito and Siesta. She had brought Delfinger along since she had things she wanted to ask him.
   
 
“What's with that familiar?!”
 
“What's with that familiar?!”
   
Grumbling, she hit the wall of the hole with her fist.
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Grumbling, as she hit the wall of the hole with her fist.
   
“Don’t die Saito!” could be heard from the bench as Siesta tended to Saito. Louise had thrown the rock that had hit Saito in the head. It was unforgivable to kiss another girl since he was her familiar.
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“Don’t die Saito!” could be heard from the bench, as Siesta tended to Saito. Louise had thrown the rock that hit Saito in the head. It was unforgivable to kiss another girl since he was her familiar.
   
 
“Hey, noble girl.” said Derflinger with an expressionless voice.
 
“Hey, noble girl.” said Derflinger with an expressionless voice.
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“What? Start remembering my name already.”
 
“What? Start remembering my name already.”
   
“Who cares about that? Moreover, has it become popular to dig holes to watch over familiars?”
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“Who cares about that? More over, has it become popular to dig holes to watch over familiars?”
   
 
“Why would it be popular?”
 
“Why would it be popular?”
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Louise’s voice had started to shake when she reached the word “flirting.” She was quite angry.
 
Louise’s voice had started to shake when she reached the word “flirting.” She was quite angry.
   
“I might even be the legendary ‘Void’ mage yet I can’t even find anyone to talk it over with. I was even going to find that useless, incompetent fool of a familiar of mine but he was off somewhere f-f-f-flir…”
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“I might even be the legendary ‘void’ mage yet I can’t even find anyone to talk it over with. I was even going to find that useless, incompetent fool of a familiar of mine but he was off somewhere f-f-f-flir…”
   
 
“F-f-f-flir-”
 
“F-f-f-flir-”
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“No. You’re wrong.”
 
“No. You’re wrong.”
   
As Louise turned her blushing face away, Derflinger imitated Louise’s tone of speech.
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As Louise turned her blushing face away, Delfinger imitated Louise’s tone of speech.
   
 
“Why would he not try to kiss me?”
 
“Why would he not try to kiss me?”
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“I was even pretending to be asleep. I’ll cry you know.”
 
“I was even pretending to be asleep. I’ll cry you know.”
   
“If you say that again, I will melt you with my ‘Void’ magic. I swear, I will melt you.”
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“If you say that again, I will melt you with my ‘void’ magic. I swear, I will melt you.”
   
Derflinger shook uncontrollably with laughter. Eyeing it with great distaste, Louise asked Derflinger.
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Delfinger shook uncontrollably with laughter. Eyeing it with great distaste, Louise asked Delfinger.
   
 
“Hey, I guess there’s no one else to ask but you. A fine noble like me, is asking a rusty sword like you a question, be grateful.”
 
“Hey, I guess there’s no one else to ask but you. A fine noble like me, is asking a rusty sword like you a question, be grateful.”
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“What?”
 
“What?”
   
Louise gave a slight cough. With a blushing face, she asked Derflinger in a tone of voice that desperately tried to savour any dignity she had.
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Louise gave a slight cough. With a blushing face, she asked Delfinger in a tone of voice that desperately tried to savour any dignity she had.
   
 
“State in which areas that maid is more attractive than me, in a concise and easily understandable way.”
 
“State in which areas that maid is more attractive than me, in a concise and easily understandable way.”
   
“What use is it asking?”
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“What use is it in asking?”
   
 
“That’s none of your business. Just answer the question.”
 
“That’s none of your business. Just answer the question.”
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“Right, now to melt you.”
 
“Right, now to melt you.”
   
Louise firmly held her wand while muttering an incantation. Derflinger quickly answered in a panic. He couldn’t possibly withstand an explosion of magical light.
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Louise firmly held her wand while muttering an incantation. Delfinger quickly answered in a panic. He couldn’t possibly withstand an explosion of magical light.
   
 
“O-Ok I understand! There’s no helping you is there?! Well firstly, that girl can cook.”
 
“O-Ok I understand! There’s no helping you is there?! Well firstly, that girl can cook.”
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“People grow you know.”
 
“People grow you know.”
   
Louise said as she stuck out her chest. A magnificently flat chest.
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Louise says as she stuck out her chest. A magnificently flat chest.
   
 
“How old are you?”
 
“How old are you?”
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“Wait! Stop! Hey! Guys naturally like girls with large breasts. He literally was off in fairyland when he had a bath with that girl.”
 
“Wait! Stop! Hey! Guys naturally like girls with large breasts. He literally was off in fairyland when he had a bath with that girl.”
   
Derflinger said, as fury started to fill Louise’s eyes.
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Delfinger said, as fury started to fill Louise’s eyes.
   
 
“What? What did you say just now?”
 
“What? What did you say just now?”
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“Eh? When they bathed together…”
 
“Eh? When they bathed together…”
   
Derflinger explained the incident where Saito and Siesta took a bath together.
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Delfinger explained the incident where Saito and Siesta took a bath together.
   
Louise had been deeply inhaling and exhaling. She was shaking uncontrollably with anger. Derflinger decided to keep quiet after being scared by her, something rare for a sword like him to feel.
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Louise had been deeply inhaling and exhaling. She was shaking uncontrollably with anger. Delfinger decided to keep quiet after being scared by her, something rare for a sword like him to feel.
   
Meanwhile the mole had popped its head up from the hole. It had seen the glad figure of its master who had been searching for it. Kneeling down, Guiche put his arms around his familiar and rubbed his cheek against it.
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Meanwhile the mole had popped its head up from the hole. It had seen the glad figure of its master who had been searching for it. Kneeling down, Guische put his arms around his familiar and rubbed his cheek against its.
   
“Ah! I was looking for you Verdandi! You cute hairy thing! What on Halkeginia have you been doing, digging a hole here like this? Hm? Eh, Louise?”
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“Ah! I was looking for you Belldandy! You cute hairy thing! What on Halkeginia have you been doing, digging a hole here like this? Hm? Eh, Louise?”
   
Guiche looked perplexed as he peered in the hole to find Louise.
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Guische looked perplexed as he peered in the hole to find Louise.
   
 
“Why are you in this hole?”
 
“Why are you in this hole?”
   
With a troubled expression, Verdandi looked at both Guiche and Louise. Guiche gave a slight nod and started to speak in a convinced manner.
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With a troubled expression, Belldandy looked at both Guische and Louise. Guische gave a slight nod and started to speak in a convinced manner.
   
“I understand Louise. You let Verdandi dig the hole, so that you could go looking for earthworms? In the mood for concocting beauty serums I see. And your familiar seems to be occupied with that maid from the dining hall as well…”
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“I understand Louise. You let Belldandy dig the hole, so that you could go looking for earthworms? In the mood for concocting beauty serums I see. And your familiar seems to be occupied with that maid from the dining hall as well…”
   
Guiche said, as he glanced over at the scene of Siesta nursing Saito. Just as usual, Saito was unconscious. Siesta was clinging to his chest and making a big fuss.
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Guische said, as he glanced over at the scene of Seista nursing Saito. Just as usual, Saito was unconscious. Seista would cling to his chest and make a big fuss.
   
 
“Ahaha! You’ll have to work hard on your beauty to win back that familiar of yours! Being taken by a peasant girl…your honour will surely be ruined!”
 
“Ahaha! You’ll have to work hard on your beauty to win back that familiar of yours! Being taken by a peasant girl…your honour will surely be ruined!”
   
"Crap." Derflinger muttered.
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"Crap." Delfinger muttered.
   
Louise grabbed onto Guiche’s ankles and pulled him into the hole. In a mere two seconds she finished him off. The mole worryingly prodded its nose against Guiche’s unconscious face. Clenching her fists, she muttered in a low voice.
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Louise grabbed onto Guische’s ankles and pulled him into the hole. In a mere two seconds she finisheed him off. The mole worryingly prodded its nose against Guische’s unconscious face. Clenching her fists, she muttered in a low voice.
   
 
“Next up is him.”
 
“Next up is him.”
   
“Seems like this ‘zero' is a hundred times more scary than the previous ones.” Derflinger said to himself.
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“Seems like this ‘zero' is a hundred times more scary than the previous ones.” Delfinger said to himself.
   
   
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Rubbing his sore head, Saito returned back to Louise’s room, to find Louise simply sitting cross-legged on the bed staring at the window.
 
Rubbing his sore head, Saito returned back to Louise’s room to find Louise simply sitting cross-legged on the bed staring at the window.
 
   
 
The room was dim. It was already evening but Louise hadn’t turned any lights on. Saito felt a slight shiver down his spine from the ominous atmosphere.
 
The room was dim. It was already evening but Louise hadn’t turned any lights on. Saito felt a slight shiver down his spine from the ominous atmosphere.
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“You dog.”
 
“You dog.”
   
"Ah, back to dog~", muttered Saito as he slowly backed towards the door. Don’t curse the gods, as they say. Heck, Louise was scarier than a god. Was it because of the Founder or the Void magic, he didn’t know, but it was Louise – who had annihilated all the enemy ships with a single spell.
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Ah, back to dog~, muttered Saito as he slowly backed towards the door. Don’t curse the gods, as they say. Heck, Louise was scarier than god. Was it because of the founder or the void magic, he didn’t know, but it was Louise – who had annihilated all the enemy ships with a single spell.
   
 
Louise gave a flick of her wand when Saito tried to open the door.
 
Louise gave a flick of her wand when Saito tried to open the door.
   
"Huh?" When he tried to turn the knob it wouldn’t turn.
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Huh? When he tried to turn the knob it wouldn’t turn.
   
 
“Strange, huh… seems like I can do common magic with ease now.” Louise said with her back still turned towards him.
 
“Strange, huh… seems like I can do common magic with ease now.” Louise said with her back still turned towards him.
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Saito was now desperately trying to turn the door knob, but it wouldn’t budge.
 
Saito was now desperately trying to turn the door knob, but it wouldn’t budge.
   
“It’s useless. I cast a ‘Lock’ spell on it. By the way dog, your master has been very uneasy. I might even be the one chosen to bear the void magic, but I can’t even find anyone to talk over something with. No one knows that I can use void magic at the moment. It seems like my explosion spell has just been treated as a miracle by the people…. But I think the castle will know soon enough. Then what will become of me? In such a dire moment, my ungracious fool of a familiar decides to go on a date with a maid.”
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“It’s useless. I cast a ‘Lock’ spell on it. By the way dog, your master has been very uneasy. I might even be the one chosen to bear the void magic, but I can’t even find anyone to talk over something with. No one knows that I can use void magic at the moment. It seems like my explosion spell has just been treated as a miracle by the people…. But I think the castle will know soon enough. Then what will become of me? In such a dire moment, my ungracious fool of familiar decides to go on a date with a maid.”
   
''And you even k-k-kissed me'' – Louise was about to say before she quickly shut her mouth. Taking a deep breath she chose her next words.
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And you even k-k-kissed me – Louise was about to say before she quickly shut her mouth. Taking a deep breath she chose her next words.
   
 
Saito’s face had grown pale already as he continued trying to turn the knob. No matter how hard he tried to turn it, the knob wouldn’t turn. The ‘Lock’ spell was very strong.
 
Saito’s face had grown pale already as he continued trying to turn the knob. No matter how hard he tried to turn it, the knob wouldn’t turn. The ‘Lock’ spell was very strong.
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Louise started trembling.
 
Louise started trembling.
   
''You even k-k-k-k-kissed me. A bath. A bath with the maid.''
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You even k-k-k-k-kissed me. A bath. A bath with the maid.
   
 
Something was flying towards the window. It was a pelican.
 
Something was flying towards the window. It was a pelican.
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“Ah. That was quick.”
 
“Ah. That was quick.”
   
Louise untied the package at the pelican’s feet, placed it on the bed and put some gold coins in its beak. Seems like pelicans are used as the equivalent of home delivery services in this world.
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Louise untied the package at the pelican’s feet, placed it on the bed and put some gold coins in its beak. Seems like pelicans are used as the equivalent of home delivery services in Saito’s world.
   
 
“W-What did you buy?”
 
“W-What did you buy?”
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“I’ve come to realise that dogs just don’t learn when you use a whip.”
 
“I’ve come to realise that dogs just don’t learn when you use a whip.”
   
Saito’s face stiffened as he madly tried to turn the door knob.
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Saito’s face stiffens as he madly tried to turn the door knob.
   
 
“H-Help! Help!”
 
“H-Help! Help!”
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Louise pressed a foot down on to Saito’s neck.
 
Louise pressed a foot down on to Saito’s neck.
   
“Listen up dog. It seems like what you’re lacking is dignity. Always wagging your tail here and there – which is why I’ve bought this.”
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“Listen up dog. It seems like what you’re lacking is dignity. Always waging your tail here and there – which is why I’ve bought this.”
   
 
Louise started to tie something that seemed like leather ropes on his body. And with a clink, the lock on his chest was locked. It was some kind of body suspender.
 
Louise started to tie something that seemed like leather ropes on his body. And with a clink, the lock on his chest was locked. It was some kind of body suspender.
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“Vasra.”
 
“Vasra.”
   
With a gasp of pain, Saito fell down onto the ground.
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With a gasp of pain, Saito falls down onto the ground.
   
 
“It’s got water and wind spells on it. At the master’s signal, it will start giving out electric shocks.” Explained Louise, but Saito was already unconscious from the shock.
 
“It’s got water and wind spells on it. At the master’s signal, it will start giving out electric shocks.” Explained Louise, but Saito was already unconscious from the shock.
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“You’re a hundred years too early to bathe with a girl!”
 
“You’re a hundred years too early to bathe with a girl!”
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