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''There is no way I can borrow even a little bit of money from this admirable girl who has scrimped and saved like this.''
 
''There is no way I can borrow even a little bit of money from this admirable girl who has scrimped and saved like this.''
   
“I can't borrow money from you, Siesta!”
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“I can't borrow money from Siesta-san!”
   
 
“Why? As long as it's for Saito-san, money isn't important to me!” When she finished speaking, the girl lowered her shoulders.
 
“Why? As long as it's for Saito-san, money isn't important to me!” When she finished speaking, the girl lowered her shoulders.
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Siesta moved her lips upwards, finally nibbling Saito’s ear.
 
Siesta moved her lips upwards, finally nibbling Saito’s ear.
   
While feeling as if his brain was about to melt, the air seemed to grow cold and as a shivering sensation went down his spine. He shakily squeaked, "Si-Si-Siesta..."
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While feeling as if his brain was about to melt, the air seemed to grow cold and as a shivering sensation went down his spine. He shakily squeaked, "Si-Si-Siesta-san..."
   
 
In the instant he said that, something blew the top of the carriage away.
 
In the instant he said that, something blew the top of the carriage away.

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