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“Id hurds! Yan! Au! Funya! Ahh! Id hurds!”
 
“Id hurds! Yan! Au! Funya! Ahh! Id hurds!”
   
The prideful and haughty Louise getting her face pulled in such a manner, was unable to raise a single complaint. If Saito had been able to see this scene, his eyes would have most likely popped out in shock.
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The prideful and haughty Louise getting her face pulled in such a manner, unable to raise a single complaint. If Saito were able to see this scene, his eyes would most likely pop out in shock.
   
The one pulling Louise’s cheeks like that was… a beautiful blond woman. She was about twenty-five years old. Her face vaguely resembled Louise’s. If Louise cooled down her hot blood and grew up a bit, would she look like that as well? In short, she was a beautiful woman.
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The one pulling Louise’s cheeks like that was… a beautiful blond woman. She was about twenty-five years old. Her face vaguely resembled Louise’s. If she cooled down her hot blood and grew up a bit, would she look like that as well? In short, she was a beautiful woman.
   
“Little Louise. My talk hasn’t finished yet, has it?
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“Little Louise. My talk hasn’t finished yet, has it?
   
 
“Auu..., I’b sowwy..., Abe-saba, I’b sowwy...”
 
“Auu..., I’b sowwy..., Abe-saba, I’b sowwy...”
   
As her cheeks were being stretched, Louise shouted with a teary voice. There were a total of four absolute existences in Louise’s life. Henrietta, her parents and this bossy old sister, Eléonore. Eleven years older than Louise, the eldest daughter of the La Vallière house was known to be the best researcher in the Royal Magic Research Institute, "Academia."
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As her cheeks were being stretched, Louise shouted with a teary voice. There were a total of four absolute existences in Louise’s life. Henrietta, her parents and this bossy old sister, Eléonore. Eleven years older than Louise, the eldest daughter of the La Vallière house is known to be the best researcher in the Royal Magic Research Institute, "Academia."
   
 
“Even though it is a long-awaited conversation with me, why do you restlessly keep looking somewhere else? Moreover, you blew up the attendants’ carriage roof!”
 
“Even though it is a long-awaited conversation with me, why do you restlessly keep looking somewhere else? Moreover, you blew up the attendants’ carriage roof!”
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“B-But… Whatever you say, being taken by the academy’s maid is…”
 
“B-But… Whatever you say, being taken by the academy’s maid is…”
   
“Shrimp. Are you listening? The La Vallière house is not simply a Tristainian noble family, it is ''our'' noble family. Even you should understand that, right?”
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“Shrimp. Listening? The La Vallière house is not simply a Tristain noble family, it is ''our'' noble family. Even you should understand that, right?”
   
 
“Yes, Onee-sama.”
 
“Yes, Onee-sama.”

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