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Kirche and Tabitha were walking lazily when they arrived at Colbert’s laboratory, which was located next to the Tower of Flame. In there, Colbert was working very hard in order to finish the final war adjustments of the Zero Fighter.
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Kirche and Tabitha were walking lazily when they arrived at Colbert’s laboratory, that was located next to the Tower of Flame. In there Colbert was working very hard in order to finish the final war adjustments of the Zero Fighter.
   
 
Even though most of the male teachers had departed… Colbert was in his usual “my pace” mood. As soon as the winds of war started blowing, he immersed himself in his studies.
 
Even though most of the male teachers had departed… Colbert was in his usual “my pace” mood. As soon as the winds of war started blowing, he immersed himself in his studies.
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“Oh, Miss. Miss Zerbst. You should take my lectures on Fire Manipulation from time to time.”
 
“Oh, Miss. Miss Zerbst. You should take my lectures on Fire Manipulation from time to time.”
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Colbert said as if he were still in class.
 
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Colbert said as if he was in class.<!--(someone retranslate please)-->
   
 
“Yes.”
 
“Yes.”
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“What’s wrong? Miss…”
 
“What’s wrong? Miss…”
   
“Sir, You didn’t volunteer to join the Queen’s army, did you?"
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“Mister, You didn’t volunteer to join the Queen’s army, did you?"
   
 
Even though most of the academy’s men joined the war, is what she meant by that.
 
Even though most of the academy’s men joined the war, is what she meant by that.
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Colbert turned his face away from Kirche. Kirche snorted with a face full of disdain. “So unmanly”, she thought. She could see nothing but a person that had run away from the war. She couldn’t forgive this teacher who, even though he was one of the proud “Flame Users,” calmly declared that he hated war.
 
Colbert turned his face away from Kirche. Kirche snorted with a face full of disdain. “So unmanly”, she thought. She could see nothing but a person that had run away from the war. She couldn’t forgive this teacher who, even though he was one of the proud “Flame Users,” calmly declared that he hated war.
   
“As a person that also uses Fire, I’m embarrassed.”
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“As a person that also uses Fire, I’m embarassed.”
   
 
Colbert was facing down for a while, but then he looked up again.
 
Colbert was facing down for a while, but then he looked up again.

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