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If the enemy hides in the darkness… consign him to the darkness.
 
If the enemy hides in the darkness… consign him to the darkness.
   
However, this spell kills everyone nearby. Therefore, Colbert did not use it until they had moved to the center of the plaza. 
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However, this spell kills everyone nearby. Therefore, Colbert did not use it until they moved to the center of the plaza. 
   
 
Colbert turned around and, while holding his mouth, approached the lying Menvil.
 
Colbert turned around and, while holding his mouth, approached the lying Menvil.
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A black shadow jumped into the way.
 
A black shadow jumped into the way.
   
He blocked the arrows from reaching Agnes with his own body. He uttered a spell and a snake of flame flew out the wand’s tip burning up the wand that the other mage was using.
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He blocked the arrows from reaching Agnes with his own body. He uttered a spell and a snake of flame flew out the wand’s tip burning up the wand that the other mage used.
   
 
Agnes stared in blank surprise at Colbert.
 
Agnes stared in blank surprise at Colbert.
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During that time…
 
During that time…
   
Agnes recovered and pointed her sword at Colbert.
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Agnes who recovered herself pointed the sword at Colbert.
   
 
Shocked, students stared at Agnes.
 
Shocked, students stared at Agnes.
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“Idiot… That is a lie.”
 
“Idiot… That is a lie.”
   
“…Ha ha, afterwards, I learned about that too. In short, it was the ‘New Religion Hunt.’ I am tormented by guilt every day. It was… like Menvil said. Women, children - I burned them all. It was not permitted. But the memory still haunts me. I left the army. I swore… never to use Fire for destruction again.”
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“…Ha ha, afterwards, I learned about that too. In short it was the ‘New Religion Hunt.’ I am tormented by the guilt every day. It was… like Menvil said. Women, children - I burned them all. It was not permitted. But the memory still haunts me. I left the army. I swore… not to use Fire for destruction again.”
   
 
“…but those feelings didn’t stop your hand?”
 
“…but those feelings didn’t stop your hand?”
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Colbert shook his head.
 
Colbert shook his head.
   
After that… he slowly shut his eyes. Though Montmorency desperately kept uttering an incantation… her willpower was drained with time - she fainted and toppled to the ground. For the spell of "Recovery" to heal such a serious injury, special medicine was necessary… but at this moment there was none.
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After that… he slowly shut his eyes. Though Montmorency desperately kept uttering an incantation… her willpower was drained with time - she fainted and toppled to the ground. For the spell of "Recovery" to heal such a serious injury, it needed special medicine… but now and here there was none.
   
 
Therefore, though willpower tried to replace the specific medicine… it had its limits.
 
Therefore, though willpower tried to replace the specific medicine… it had its limits.

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