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===Chapter Four: The Visit of the Priest ===
 
===Chapter Four: The Visit of the Priest ===
   
One week after the day Saito woke up…
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One week before the day Saito woke up…
   
 
One wind dragon landed on the courtyard of the Tristain Academy of Magic.
 
One wind dragon landed on the courtyard of the Tristain Academy of Magic.
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One girl muttered.
 
One girl muttered.
   
Eyes with different right and left colors were called ‘Moon eyes’, following the two moons of Tristain. In the provinces, where the superstitions were strong, it was believed that such person was evil and was despised by everyone.
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Eyes with different right and left colors were called ‘Moon eyes’, following the two moons of Tristain. In the provinces, where the superstitions are strong, it is believed that such person is evil and is despised by everyone.
   
 
However… they still absent-mindedly watched the beautiful boy get off the dragon.
 
However… they still absent-mindedly watched the beautiful boy get off the dragon.
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“I don’t remember asking for your opinion.”
 
“I don’t remember asking for your opinion.”
   
Pelisson’s brow slightly paled. Once understanding that Julio didn’t have a wand, he pulled out a long, thin wand. It was a brand-new one, one that young knight’s received when joining the army.
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Pelisson’s brow slightly paled. Once understanding that Julio didn’t have a wand, he pulled out a long, thin wand. It was a brand-new one, one that young knight’s receive when joining the army.
   
 
“Judging from your words a little while ago, you seem to also have participated in the Albion campaign, Priest.”
 
“Judging from your words a little while ago, you seem to also have participated in the Albion campaign, Priest.”
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Louise started hitting Saito’s chest with her small fists.
 
Louise started hitting Saito’s chest with her small fists.
   
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Interested, Saito proved.
Saito scratched his nose, seemingly in confusion, as he replied,
 
   
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“Well, I am not dead, right?”
"Because, I can't really send you to your death, can I?"
 
   
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“Such ingratitude towards me, abandoning me…”
"Someone as ungrateful as me, isn't it better to leave me alone......"
 
   
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“That’s not why.”
"Of course I can't do that." Said Saito.
 
   
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Saito said.
"Why?" Asked Louise.
 
   
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“Then why?”
"Because I love you."
 
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Louise asked.
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“Because I love you.”
   
 
Being told so straightforwardly, Louise’s cheeks blushed.
 
Being told so straightforwardly, Louise’s cheeks blushed.
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Saito brought his face closer. Though she resisted, she closed her eyes.
 
Saito brought his face closer. Though she resisted, she closed her eyes.
   
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“Awah, awah, awah…” Louise haloed, while Saito kissed the scruff of her neck.
"Wah, Ah..." While Louise was still making meaningless moans, Saito kissed her neck, making her body feel heavy as though as she had dropped into a cluster of clouds.
 
   
 
“Fuah, fuah, fuah…” noise escaped through closed lips.
 
“Fuah, fuah, fuah…” noise escaped through closed lips.
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“S-say something. Hey.”
 
“S-say something. Hey.”
   
She continued to urge him, yet there was still no answer.
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She continued to urge him, yet there is still no answer.
   
 
Because Saito didn’t say anything, Louise became insecure.
 
Because Saito didn’t say anything, Louise became insecure.
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“I, I see.”
 
“I, I see.”
   
“Therefore… since Saito is alive I will not be able to complete the spell.”
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“Therefore… since Saito is alive I will not be able to be complete the spell.”
   
 
Guiche hastily said.
 
Guiche hastily said.
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“Louise…” Montmorency muttered.
 
“Louise…” Montmorency muttered.
   
Many summons could be seen within the gate. By that time, the selected beast or spirit would pass through the shinning gates. They could pass through only on their own free will.
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Many summons could be seen within the gate. By this time, the selected beast or spirit would pass through the shinning gates. They could pass through only on their own free will.
   
Before that could happen…
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Before that happens…
   
 
“Close the gate!”
 
“Close the gate!”

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