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The feast continued for three hours… and ended because King Joseph of Gallia suddenly decided to retire. After only making noises of eating and drinking, he yawned, and said "I am sleepy" and stood up, leaving in a hurry.
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The feast continued for three hours… and ended because of King Joseph of Gallia suddenly decided to retire. After only making noises of eating and drinking, he yawned, and said "I am sleepy" and stood up, leaving in a hurry.
   
 
As for the conference itself - nothing was done. Whenever the King of Gallia opened his mouth, he did nothing but recommend cooking to kings, who sat in a row, and toasting, repeatedly.
 
As for the conference itself - nothing was done. Whenever the King of Gallia opened his mouth, he did nothing but recommend cooking to kings, who sat in a row, and toasting, repeatedly.
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“Hey?”
 
“Hey?”
   
"How was that?" Saito asked Derflinger for his opinion.
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Saito asked Derflinger.
   
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“Haah haah. Is it all right? Hah, I am only swinging the sword. As such, I only train physical strength, not skill.”
"That looks okay, not so bad, I think. Hmm, you have been swinging your blade for such a long time that your muscles have grown a bit, and you retained some muscle memory, eh?
 
   
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“Indeed. However, there is no sparring partner…”
"Really? However, I was really useless against those mercenaries......"
 
   
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“Aarah. What if there were an expert? You lose even against kids who can swing a sword only a little.”
"Of course. Those guys are professional, you know? How could they have lost to some brat who had just played with a sword?"
 
   
"Don't say it that bluntly, please?"
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“Don’t say it so bluntly.”
   
Saito shot a spiteful glare at Derflinger.
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Saito glared at Derflinger.
   
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“Besides, they are short. It’s no good defeating short partners.”
"Besides, partner, weren't you so scared that your whole body was shaking? How could anyone lose to someone whose body is shaking."
 
   
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“Damn…”
"Damn it......"
 
   
 
“Even though it’s not enough, swing the sword. Right now, partner is not Gandálfr anymore…”
 
“Even though it’s not enough, swing the sword. Right now, partner is not Gandálfr anymore…”
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He said slightly surprised.
 
He said slightly surprised.
   
Compared with the time in Japan, he was considerably stronger. If it were the old days, it would be impossible for him to run such distances while swinging a sword. Derflinger was not light at all; it was a large sword. His old self would not have been able to swing it around at all.
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Compared with the time in Japan, he was considerably stronger. If it were the old days, it would be impossible for him to run such distances while swinging a sword. Derflinger was not light at all; it was a large sword. His old self would not been able to swing it around at all.
   
 
“Therefore, it is good for you to practice hard. However, I am saying it clearly, as an experienced veteran in combat – you are still an amateur, don’t get cocky."
 
“Therefore, it is good for you to practice hard. However, I am saying it clearly, as an experienced veteran in combat – you are still an amateur, don’t get cocky."
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"I understand. Because I am close to your age, you are interested, right?”
 
"I understand. Because I am close to your age, you are interested, right?”
   
Tiffania nodded silently. Tiffania grew up in a limited space and had not spoken to the teens of a similar age.
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Tiffania nodded silently. Tiffania grew up in a limited space and has not spoken to the teens of a similar age.
   
 
“…But, I wonder.”
 
“…But, I wonder.”
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“But… you really don’t want to inform them?”
 
“But… you really don’t want to inform them?”
   
Saito nodded with a serious look as well. This morning, Tiffania asked if he didn’t want to inform his family that he is all right. He said to Tiffania that though he wanted to return back to that place, no one cared if he was alive or not…
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Saito nodded with a serious look as well. This morning, Tiffania asked if he didn’t want to inform his family that he is all right. He said to Tiffania that though he wanted to return back to that place, no one cared if he is alive or not…
   
 
“Your family who was left in Tristain does not worry?”
 
“Your family who was left in Tristain does not worry?”
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Agnes, who took off her black mantle and sat on the chair in a green tunic, amazed, watched Saito.
 
Agnes, who took off her black mantle and sat on the chair in a green tunic, amazed, watched Saito.
   
“I was going to enter the forest through the road, and search for you in all the villages that I walked past. Look, I came fully prepared for this. Since I was going to conduct a search operation in such a huge forest, I prepared at least two weeks of rations ..... along with items that could keep dew away as I stayed overnight. I've even brought along boots for me to change. And then I found you eating lunch in the first village I reach...... Seriously, what an anticlimactic ending.
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“I entered the forest from the highway, where I was checking village to village. Look, I was prepared for this. For the two weeks we searched through the bigger part of the forest… sleeping with a dew. Had to change shoes. And then I stopped at the first village's garden for lunch. So anticlimactic.
   
 
Agnes pointed at the stuffed rucksack and said.
 
Agnes pointed at the stuffed rucksack and said.
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That night...
 
That night...
   
Saito, laying on the bed, stared at the ceiling, unable to fall asleep. He heard creaky sounds coming from the corridor. Then, someone knocked against the door.
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Saito, laying on the bed, staring at the ceiling, unable to fall asleep. He heard creaky sounds coming from the corridor. Then, someone knocked against the door.
   
 
“Agnes-san?”
 
“Agnes-san?”
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Saito nodded. If you swing a sword at Gandálfr’s speed, there is no need to avoid enemy attacks.
 
Saito nodded. If you swing a sword at Gandálfr’s speed, there is no need to avoid enemy attacks.
   
“It works if it is a surprise attack. However, if the enemy anticipates it, you will never hit.”
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“It works if it is a surprise attack. However, if the enemy anticipates it, then you will never hit.”
   
 
“Yes.”
 
“Yes.”
   
“Alright, halt your own attacks and wait for the chance to attack the opponent. Use your eyes to seize the opportunity.
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“Alright, halt your own attacks and wait for the chance to attack the opponent. Use your eyes to seize the opportunity.
   
“If there is no opening… then what do I do?
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“If there is no opening… then what do I do?
   
 
“Create it.”
 
“Create it.”

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