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===Chapter Six: The Nations Conference ===
 
===Chapter Six: The Nations Conference ===
   
It was just the second moon of January since the end of the war… On the first week of the moon of Haegl, on Freyja's week, one by one, nobles from all countries gathered up in Albion’s capital Londinium.
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It was just the second moon of January since the end of the war… On the first week of the moon of Hagar, on Freyja's week, one by one, nobles from all countries gathered up in Albion’s capital Londonium.
   
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Londonium.
Londinium.
 
   
 
Compared to all other cities of Halkeginia, it had a new atmosphere around it. The central portion of the town was skillfully built from stone, which continued to build up due to constant ruling.
 
Compared to all other cities of Halkeginia, it had a new atmosphere around it. The central portion of the town was skillfully built from stone, which continued to build up due to constant ruling.
   
One hundred years ago, Londinium was hit with a conflagration, and because the town was built of wood, it almost burned down completely. By order of Albion’s king at the time, the construction of wooden buildings had been forbidden in Londinium ever since.
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One hundred years ago, Londonium was hit with a conflagration, and because the town was built of wood, it almost burned down completely. By order of Albion’s king at the time, the construction of wooden buildings had been forbidden in Londonium ever since.
   
 
This order was also meant to increase Albion's air power, which would roar over Halkeginia, as it protected the timber resources Albion needed. It had a powerful fleet established with abundant timber, and looked down on all Halkeginia from above the clouds…
 
This order was also meant to increase Albion's air power, which would roar over Halkeginia, as it protected the timber resources Albion needed. It had a powerful fleet established with abundant timber, and looked down on all Halkeginia from above the clouds…
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At present – Albion was like a chicken placed on the table. Wings and nails were taken off and put on the plate – burnt poultry. Halkeginia’s most powerful figures were staring at the meat like starving wolves.
 
At present – Albion was like a chicken placed on the table. Wings and nails were taken off and put on the plate – burnt poultry. Halkeginia’s most powerful figures were staring at the meat like starving wolves.
   
The Havilland palace of Londinium was filled with people like in a party.
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The Havilland palace of Londonium was filled with people like in a party.
   
 
Gallia, Germania, Romalia… the kings and emperors of each country came on their will with many vassals and waiters just to fight over their share of this poultry.
 
Gallia, Germania, Romalia… the kings and emperors of each country came on their will with many vassals and waiters just to fight over their share of this poultry.
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The nose of Albrecht the III turned pale.
 
The nose of Albrecht the III turned pale.
   
He looked gratefully at Romalia’s ambassador, who sat in front of Henrietta. Romalia, who had a small militia participation, had very little say in this conference.
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He looked gratefully at the Romalia’s ambassador, who sat in front of Henrietta. Romalia, who had a small militia participation, had very little say in this conference.
   
 
Therefore, only the ambassador was attending.
 
Therefore, only the ambassador was attending.
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Joseph noticed Albrecht the III and tapped his shoulder.
 
Joseph noticed Albrecht the III and tapped his shoulder.
   
“Dear Emperor, Your Excellency! I am sorry for not attending the coronation! Are your relatives doing fine? I mean the ones to whom you lent your castle, so that you may hold that crown.”
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“Dear Emperor, Your Excellency! I am sorry for not attending the coronation! Are your relatives doing fine? I mean the ones that you lent your castle, so that you may hold that crown.”
   
 
Albrecht the III turned pale. This castle ‘lending’ - scathing sarcasm. Joseph was making fun of Albrecht the III, who imprisoned his rivals in the castle's tower.
 
Albrecht the III turned pale. This castle ‘lending’ - scathing sarcasm. Joseph was making fun of Albrecht the III, who imprisoned his rivals in the castle's tower.
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The Void’s familiar.
 
The Void’s familiar.
   
Legendary Gandálfr…
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Legendary Gandalfr…
   
 
''Some time ago, when my mind was blinded, when I turned my wand to Louise… He stopped my spell,'' Henrietta recalled.
 
''Some time ago, when my mind was blinded, when I turned my wand to Louise… He stopped my spell,'' Henrietta recalled.
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“I see.” Henrietta nodded.
 
“I see.” Henrietta nodded.
   
Following Henrietta, Agnes came to Albion. The Saxe-Gotha revolters from the Tristain army… suddenly, as if waking from a dream, launched an attack on their former allies of the Albion's army.
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Following Henrietta, Agnes came to Albion. The South Gotha revolters from the Tristain army… suddenly, as if waking from a dream, launched an attack on their former allies of the Albion's army.
   
 
All soldiers and officers answered the same upon explaining the temporary revolt – “I thought it was necessary to do so.” Was it the cause of some sort of magic – no one knew. It was strange that tens of thousands of officers and experienced men sudden abandoned the victory; still, the cannon ball was shot out and no one could return it. Agnes, following Henrietta’s orders, investigated it for a long time.
 
All soldiers and officers answered the same upon explaining the temporary revolt – “I thought it was necessary to do so.” Was it the cause of some sort of magic – no one knew. It was strange that tens of thousands of officers and experienced men sudden abandoned the victory; still, the cannon ball was shot out and no one could return it. Agnes, following Henrietta’s orders, investigated it for a long time.
   
“We thought that the water of Saxe-Gotha might be the cause, and let mages to examine it. Yet, no matter how long we examined it – it was still common, normal water. Though nobles pointed out the possibility of Ancient Magic… there is no evidence. We are in a deadlock.”
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“We thought that the water of South Gotha might be the cause, and let mages to examine it. Yet, no matter how long we examined it – it was still common, normal water. Though noble’s pointed out the possibility of Ancient Magic… there is no evidence. We are in a deadlock.”
   
 
“I see… Though a mysterious event, you should not give up the hunt for the truth. There are no limits.”
 
“I see… Though a mysterious event, you should not give up the hunt for the truth. There are no limits.”
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“Miss Vallière’s boy familiar?”
 
“Miss Vallière’s boy familiar?”
   
“Correct. He saved the Allied Forces… and the mother country. By all means, it is necessary to confirm if he is alive or dead. The point where he fought against the Albion army in the Saxe-Gotha area… I hear that it is in the northeast of Rosais.”
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“Correct. He saved the Allied Forces… and the mother country. By all means, it is necessary to confirm if he is alive or dead. The point where he fought against the Albion army in the South Gotha area… I hear that it is in the northeast of Rosais.”
   
 
“Certainly.”
 
“Certainly.”
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Watching the liquid sway inside, Henrietta slowly traced her lips with a finger.
 
Watching the liquid sway inside, Henrietta slowly traced her lips with a finger.
   
The lips, as if by some spell, felt like they were on fire… Henrietta’s cheeks blushed slightly.
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The lips, as if by some spell, felt like it was on fire… Henrietta’s cheeks blushed slightly.
 
   
   
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"Damn it......"
 
"Damn it......"
   
“Even though it’s not enough, swing the sword. Right now, partner is not Gandálfr anymore…”
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“Even though it’s not enough, swing the sword. Right now, partner is not Gandalfr anymore…”
   
 
“I know.”
 
“I know.”
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“Aah, partner, you should practice with a sword at least…”
 
“Aah, partner, you should practice with a sword at least…”
   
Derflinger muttered hurt.
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Derflinger mutters hurt.
   
 
“Mo, I know that myself! But I can’t do that unflaggingly.”
 
“Mo, I know that myself! But I can’t do that unflaggingly.”
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When he said so, Gim glared at Saito.
 
When he said so, Gim glared at Saito.
   
“Tiffa-neechan belongs just to me!”
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“Tiffa-neechan belongs just for me!”
   
 
“Yes?”
 
“Yes?”
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After all, maybe he should tell the truth?
 
After all, maybe he should tell the truth?
   
''That there is a Void user besides Tiffania; to whom I was a familiar.''
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That there is a Void user besides Tiffania; to whom I was a familiar.
   
''Though, that might worry her…''
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Though, that might worry her…
   
He felt someone's presence. ''Did Tiffania return already? That was very fast. Though I wanted some time to prepare my mind for this moment, there is no other way.''
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He felt someone's presence. Did Tiffania return already? That was very fast. Though I wanted some time to prepare my mind for this moment, there is no other way.
   
 
Saito said in a constrained voice.
 
Saito said in a constrained voice.
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Once she said so, tears started flowing from Saito's eyes. Feelings that had been restrained till now broke free, and Saito cried raggedly. Tiffania stood up and hugged Saito’s head close to her.
 
Once she said so, tears started flowing from Saito's eyes. Feelings that had been restrained till now broke free, and Saito cried raggedly. Tiffania stood up and hugged Saito’s head close to her.
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“I'm sorry, I'm sorry. Don’t cry, don’t cry.”
 
“I'm sorry, I'm sorry. Don’t cry, don’t cry.”
   
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“Get up. I won’t repeat myself three times.”
 
“Get up. I won’t repeat myself three times.”
   
In the darkness, he recognized Agnes' face. He also noticed that the pointed sword was Derflinger.
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In the darkness, he recognized Agnes's face. He also noticed that the pointed sword was Derflinger. ”It’s great, partner!”
 
”It’s great, partner!”
 
   
 
“Ah?”
 
“Ah?”
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“It’s because our swordsmanship is not the same. Do you understand at least that?”
 
“It’s because our swordsmanship is not the same. Do you understand at least that?”
   
Saito nodded. If you swing a sword at Gandálfr’s speed, there is no need to avoid enemy attacks.
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Saito nodded. If you swing a sword at Gandalfr’s speed, there is no need to avoid enemy attacks.
   
 
“It works if it is a surprise attack. However, if the enemy anticipates it, you will never hit.”
 
“It works if it is a surprise attack. However, if the enemy anticipates it, you will never hit.”

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