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“Maybe…” |
“Maybe…” |
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− | + | Derflingr, who was leaning against the sofa, said in a somewhat painful voice. Agnes looked up at Derflingr surprised. |
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“Why so gloomy. Isn’t your partner coming back?” |
“Why so gloomy. Isn’t your partner coming back?” |
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− | Not answering Agnes’ question, |
+ | Not answering Agnes’ question, Derflingr remained silent. |
Once the spell ended, Louise brought her lips to Saito’s. |
Once the spell ended, Louise brought her lips to Saito’s. |
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Saito showed Louise his left hand’s top. |
Saito showed Louise his left hand’s top. |
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− | + | Gandalfr's runes were firmly carved. |
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Louise gently traced each rune with her finger. ''This character string… is a bond between me and Saito.'' While caressing them… the amount of time when they were separated, the despair she felt, she was overflowed by the feelings. |
Louise gently traced each rune with her finger. ''This character string… is a bond between me and Saito.'' While caressing them… the amount of time when they were separated, the despair she felt, she was overflowed by the feelings. |
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“Your left hand… don’t stress it too much… I can’t help but worry.” |
“Your left hand… don’t stress it too much… I can’t help but worry.” |
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− | + | Derflingr muttered so silently that no one heard. |
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The awkward atmosphere hung around for a while… |
The awkward atmosphere hung around for a while… |
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…And left as fast as Tiffania left the room. |
…And left as fast as Tiffania left the room. |
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− | When |
+ | When Derflingr tried to say something, he was gripped by Agnes. |
“All right, you also have to go.” |
“All right, you also have to go.” |
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''That’s right, this is what I really wanted to do from the beginning.'' |
''That’s right, this is what I really wanted to do from the beginning.'' |
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− | ''Since I was not Louise’s |
+ | ''Since I was not Louise’s Gandalfr, though I wanted to protect her… I misunderstood. I thought that not being a Gandalfr, I couldn't protect her.'' |
''But, I was wrong.'' |
''But, I was wrong.'' |
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Louise, who finished crying some time ago and now had red and puffy eyes, was silent. |
Louise, who finished crying some time ago and now had red and puffy eyes, was silent. |
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− | When he laid her down in bed, she |
+ | When he laid her down in bed, she lied down obediently. Yet, she gripped onto Saito’s sleeve and did not let it go. And pulled it down while biting her lips. So, Saito had to lie down next to her. Louise immediately placed her head gently on his shoulder. |
He could smell the nostalgic aroma of Louise’s hair. |
He could smell the nostalgic aroma of Louise’s hair. |
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“You put your tongue in that maid’s mouth, didn’t you?” |
“You put your tongue in that maid’s mouth, didn’t you?” |
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− | + | It wasn’t really me putting it in, but Siesta… |
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But saying that makes no difference, at least when your opponent is Louise. |
But saying that makes no difference, at least when your opponent is Louise. |
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− | + | Yada, he will be punched! Or maybe kicked! |
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Guard! Guard guard! |
Guard! Guard guard! |
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+ | <center>* * *</center> |
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Sounds of harp continued. |
Sounds of harp continued. |
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− | + | …This Tiffania, just who is she? |
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She looked like she was hiding something deep inside. |
She looked like she was hiding something deep inside. |
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Even though dawn started to break… Tiffania's playing continued. |
Even though dawn started to break… Tiffania's playing continued. |
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− | The serenade of dreaming lovers echoed throughout the forest near |
+ | The serenade of dreaming lovers echoed throughout the forest near South Gotha, soothing its listeners and healing their hearts. |