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Painfully trampling on Saito, whose head covered in cold sweat, Louise said,
 
Painfully trampling on Saito, whose head covered in cold sweat, Louise said,
   
“Well, that's because, you groped those things! I will never forgive this for as long as I live! Alright then, she isn't the only secret you have right? You and that girl, what else are you hiding from me? Talk. What were you doing with her chest? Was it fun? Tell me – I won’t get mad. I will kill you though.”
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“Then it wasn’t you groping her. I won’t permit you to live. You can't embrace an elf secretly. What did you and that girl do? Talk. What were you doing with her chest? Was it fun? Tell me – I won’t get mad. I will kill you though.”
   
 
Finally, Saito fainted in agony from Louise’s kick. Without changing her expression, Louise turned to Derflinger.
 
Finally, Saito fainted in agony from Louise’s kick. Without changing her expression, Louise turned to Derflinger.
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By the time Tiffania finished explaining to Louise, lunch had already passed.
 
By the time Tiffania finished explaining to Louise, lunch had already passed.
   
Tiffania said she wanted to talk about it at night, but, because of Louise’s constant pressing, she gave in.
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Tiffania said she wanted to talk about it when at night, but, because of Louise’s constant pressing, she gave in.
   
Hesitantly, Tiffania spoke, though it was not easy for her to do that.
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Hesitant, Tiffania spoke, though it was not easy for her to do that.
   
 
Her elf mother was a concubine of an archduke, Albion's King’s younger brother. Her father was the controller of the Royal Treasury, responsible for managing the Royal Family’s treasures. One day, she found a ring in the Royal Family Treasury, which fit with the music box she found before, yet, nobody could hear the melody but her.
 
Her elf mother was a concubine of an archduke, Albion's King’s younger brother. Her father was the controller of the Royal Treasury, responsible for managing the Royal Family’s treasures. One day, she found a ring in the Royal Family Treasury, which fit with the music box she found before, yet, nobody could hear the melody but her.
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Louise placed her hand on her chin, in a deep musing.
 
Louise placed her hand on her chin, in a deep musing.
   
“I see. So, when Saito’s Void familiar contract wore out… there was no way for me to find him.”
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“I see. So, when Saito’s Void familiar contract wore out… there was no way to for me to find him.”
   
 
Saito asked,
 
Saito asked,
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Yet, Louise made a sulky, "Hmph!" and started to walk away from Saito.
 
Yet, Louise made a sulky, "Hmph!" and started to walk away from Saito.
   
Seemed like she was offended by something.
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Seems like she was offended by something.
   
 
Saito halted and looked back at the Westwood Village where he spent nearly two months. Almost completely hidden by the trees, the tiny house of Tiffania could be seen.
 
Saito halted and looked back at the Westwood Village where he spent nearly two months. Almost completely hidden by the trees, the tiny house of Tiffania could be seen.
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''When you look at me… it’s hard to call me charming.''
 
''When you look at me… it’s hard to call me charming.''
   
''He’s not obedient at all.''
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''He’s not obedient to the bag of bones.''
   
 
''He’s only obedient to the girls like Siesta.''
 
''He’s only obedient to the girls like Siesta.''

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