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Was it because of the reaction of the end of the war which had prolonged for 8 months? Be it in the streets or the Royal Palace, a somewhat gentle atmosphere was hanging in the air. The sentinels who were standing guard at the gate of the Royal Palace unintentionally yawned. The officers who should find fault with them were also gazing absent-mindedly at the sky, showing relieved expressions.
 
Was it because of the reaction of the end of the war which had prolonged for 8 months? Be it in the streets or the Royal Palace, a somewhat gentle atmosphere was hanging in the air. The sentinels who were standing guard at the gate of the Royal Palace unintentionally yawned. The officers who should find fault with them were also gazing absent-mindedly at the sky, showing relieved expressions.
   
People walking down the streets brimmed with liveliness. Although Tarbes had burned down completely, most of the territory of Tristain was not involved in the war. The atmosphere due to the war was improving, various things started to overflow into the streets. As if to enjoy the transient festivity, merchants in the streets shouted at the top of their voice, and all the customers fished for and bought goods from Albion or other imported items.
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People walking down the streets brimmed with liveliness. Although Tarbes had burned down completely, most of the territory of Tristain was not involved in the war. The atmosphere due to the war was improving, various things started to overflow into the streets. As if to enjoy the transient festive, merchants in the streets shouted at the top of their voice, and all the customers fished for and bought goods from Albion or other imported items.
   
 
On Bourdonné Street, which was crowded with people walking about, a pure white carriage sped past.
 
On Bourdonné Street, which was crowded with people walking about, a pure white carriage sped past.
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Her face left the window... The curtains were closed, and Henrietta mumbled to Mazarin beside her,
 
Her face left the window... The curtains were closed, and Henrietta mumbled to Mazarin beside her,
   
“Isn't this just like... a cheap play sold to flatter the people?”
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“Isn't this is just like... a cheap play sold to flatter the people?”
   
 
“Is this not good? No one is going to lose from it, after all.”
 
“Is this not good? No one is going to lose from it, after all.”
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Her heart gradually could not stand all the affairs and the pressure, and started shrieking. ''I want to take a break somewhere'', even if she thought that, living as a queen, that could not be done.
 
Her heart gradually could not stand all the affairs and the pressure, and started shrieking. ''I want to take a break somewhere'', even if she thought that, living as a queen, that could not be done.
   
During the war, she was sustained by the word "revenge." But it had ended... and what left was a large hole in her schedule, but stress was simply stress, and couldn't be used to fill in that large hole of hers.
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During the war, she was sustained by the word "revenge." But it had ended... and what was left was only time with a gaping wide hole. Pressures were merely pressures, it could only be buried with time, nothing else.
   
 
At any rate, Henrietta was completely exhausted.
 
At any rate, Henrietta was completely exhausted.
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Although it was an "escort," it contained a substantially formal factor. In short, it was the debut of the newly established knight corps.
 
Although it was an "escort," it contained a substantially formal factor. In short, it was the debut of the newly established knight corps.
   
They rendezvoused with Henrietta's troop at the gate of Tristania, according to the plan they developed some time ago, and marched to the palace together.
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At the gate of Tristain, they combined with the Henrietta's troops, according to the plan they developed some time ago, and marched to the palace together.
   
 
In accordance with the hierarchy of the Royal Palace, that array of troops was at the end of the queen's troupe, but the group members were full of vigor.
 
In accordance with the hierarchy of the Royal Palace, that array of troops was at the end of the queen's troupe, but the group members were full of vigor.
   
At the head of the line was Guiche, the commanding officer. Saito's horse followed behind, keeping a distance the length of a horse's head.
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At the head of the line was Guiche, the commanding officer. Saito's horse followed the line a horse's head from the front.
   
 
“Ah... But this is... huh...”
 
“Ah... But this is... huh...”
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At which someone "uhuh-ed" in approval.
 
At which someone "uhuh-ed" in approval.
   
“That's right! I heard that he took down a city and got promoted as the commanding officer of the knight corps as a reward!”
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“That's right! The one who achieved the huge feat of capturing some city, the commanding officer of the knight corps who is being inaugurated!”
   
 
Cheers rose from everywhere, subsequently Guiche's name was called out repeatedly.
 
Cheers rose from everywhere, subsequently Guiche's name was called out repeatedly.
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Guiche whispered, as if he understood.
 
Guiche whispered, as if he understood.
   
After closing the window, Henrietta stared at the back of her hand that she had allowed Saito to kiss just now, and heaved a depressed sigh. She then turned to look at Mazarin beside her. Maybe riding in the carriage was too tiring, as he started nodding off to sleep. Henrietta's teacher was not young anymore. Henrietta stretched out her hands to adjust the round hat of the aging prime minister.
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Henrietta, who closed the window, stared at the back of her hand at which she had allowed Saito to kiss just a second ago, and at that moment, heaved a sigh. Looking at Mazarin who was taken aback, as if she was tired sitting inside the carriage, starting to twitch. Henrietta's teacher was no longer matching. Henrietta had fixed the aging prime minister's round hat.
   
 
''I have to be more firm. Firmer, firmer.''
 
''I have to be more firm. Firmer, firmer.''
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The Imperial Guard corps which had been established by Henrietta not long ago was having a friendly chat at a corner of the palace. Having just completed their debut, they were going to return to the Academy after that. Because they were required to undergo a year's training period before taking up any formal duty in the Royal Palace, they were not going to linger in the palace.
 
The Imperial Guard corps which had been established by Henrietta not long ago was having a friendly chat at a corner of the palace. Having just completed their debut, they were going to return to the Academy after that. Because they were required to undergo a year's training period before taking up any formal duty in the Royal Palace, they were not going to linger in the palace.
   
Among the knight corps, she discovered the black hair of Saito, whom she permitted a kiss at her hand. Even though she had the sudden urge to go to his side, Henrietta changed her mind.
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Among the knight corps, she discovered the black hair of Saito, whom she permitted a kiss at her hand. She was driven by the unexpected approach of that urge, but she changed her mind.
   
 
Cabinet ministers and servants welcomed Henrietta who had arrived.
 
Cabinet ministers and servants welcomed Henrietta who had arrived.
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Without losing the dignity of a queen, she displayed a smiling face, and thanked their efforts.
 
Without losing the dignity of a queen, she displayed a smiling face, and thanked their efforts.
   
Henrietta walked alongside her ministers down the corridor, while telling them her decision for each matter. Even as she was walking, work befell on her continuously. That was because Henrietta must fulfill her duties as the Queen.
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While Henrietta walked down the corridor of the palace in which her ministers were standing in a line; she gave each one her approval. In the middle of walking up, duties befell upon her. No matter how pressuring her work as a queen was, Henrietta had come to her duties, if not accustomed to them.
   
As they were walking, one of the court ladies approached her.
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She approached one of the court ladies.
   
 
“A visitor is waiting.”
 
“A visitor is waiting.”
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“Visitor? Any visitor, no, be it an emperor or the Pope, invite them to the waiting room.”
 
“Visitor? Any visitor, no, be it an emperor or the Pope, invite them to the waiting room.”
   
The court lady whispered something in Henrietta's ears. Hearing that name, Henrietta displayed a smile of relief.
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At Henrietta's ears, the court lady whispered something. Hearing that name, Henrietta displayed a smile of relief.
   
   
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Leaving those words, the Finance Minister withdrew.
 
Leaving those words, the Finance Minister withdrew.
   
Henrietta gazed at the Ruby of Wind which had returned to her hand once again. From those eyes, a tear drop trailed down her cheek. This tear seemed to come suddenly of its own accord, Henrietta still had a dazed expression.
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Henrietta gazed at the Ruby of Wind which had returned to her hand once again. From those eyes, a tear drop trailed down her cheek. From that moment when it was going to appear, Henrietta displayed a befuddled look.
   
 
After realizing that she was overflowing with tears, Henrietta hid her face with both her hands.
 
After realizing that she was overflowing with tears, Henrietta hid her face with both her hands.
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Louise's face became serious, and placed her hand at Henrietta's shoulder.
 
Louise's face became serious, and placed her hand at Henrietta's shoulder.
   
“Princess-sama, you are getting tired. Why don't you take a day off and rest?
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“Princess-sama, you are getting tired. Just once more, if you could relaxingly rest...
   
“Thank you. The one who would call me to 'rest' is only you. But, I cannot do that. If I were to rest for a day, it is just as if some part of the country has stopped.”
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“Thank you. The one who would call me to 'rest' is only you alone. But, I cannot do that. If I were to rest for a day, it is just as if some part of the country has stopped.”
   
 
Henrietta said, while patting Louise's hair.
 
Henrietta said, while patting Louise's hair.
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“You make me envious, Louise.”
 
“You make me envious, Louise.”
   
"What is your majesty talking about? Princess-sama, don't you have everything that I don't?"
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“What are you talking about? Princess-sama, don't you own everything else I don't possess?
   
"I believe that ...... actually not having anything is much more blissful than having everything. That's what I really feel, when I look at this ring."
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“It is for sure that someone who doesn't have anything is a few times happier than those who owned everything. Looking at this ring, I really think so.
   
 
Henrietta gazed at the 'Wind Ruby' in her hand and said. For a short while, she gazed at it...
 
Henrietta gazed at the 'Wind Ruby' in her hand and said. For a short while, she gazed at it...
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“I haven't listened to the reason you came here for.”
 
“I haven't listened to the reason you came here for.”
   
Louise looked hesitatingly as if it became difficult for her to speak, before displaying a resolute expression.
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Louise looked hesitating as if it became difficult for her to speak, before displaying a resolute expression.
   
 
“Um... It's about Saito.”
 
“Um... It's about Saito.”
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“It is me.”
 
“It is me.”
   
It was the voice of the secretary who managed Henrietta's schedule. "Please enter," she prompted. A lady in her thirties with her hair tied into a bun and glasses on her face entered the room.
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It was the voice of the secretary who manages Henrietta's schedule. "Please enter," she prompted. A lady in her thirties with her hair tied into a bun and glasses on her face entered the room.
   
 
“I would like to have the privilege of confirming your majesty's plans for the next two weeks...”
 
“I would like to have the privilege of confirming your majesty's plans for the next two weeks...”
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Henrietta asked, in a tone as if feeling relieved. A resting day was more valuable than gold,
 
Henrietta asked, in a tone as if feeling relieved. A resting day was more valuable than gold,
   
“Yes. Because it is just the welcome party of the new students at the Academy of Magic. Mr Osman, who had invited your majesty to this ball, probably has confused this school activity with that of nation's activity.”
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“Yes. Because it is just the welcome party of the new students at the Academy of Magic. Besides, your visitor had invited your majesty... Mr. Osman had probably misunderstood between the affairs of the Academy and those of the country.”
   
 
A ball in the Academy of Magic...
 
A ball in the Academy of Magic...
   
Moreover, the Ball of Sleipnir was not an ordinary ball. Participants would masquerade as others. Further still, it was not to disguise by means of a mask and costumes.
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Moreover, the Ball of Sleipnir was not an ordinary ball. Participants would masquerade as others. Further still, it was not disguise by means of a mask and costumes.
   
 
Henrietta lifted her face.
 
Henrietta lifted her face.
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==Translator's Notes and References==
 
==Translator's Notes and References==
 
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