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Erm, yeah I removed the clear nonsense added by 201. whatever. Now you have taken it back to Bakafish's first update - he had done a second with a few more line in. When I put in "vandalism" I mean fixing it, not carrying it out - please compare versions. - [[User:81.101.40.82|81.101.40.82]] 16:46, 14 January 2007 (PST)
  
Erm, yeah I removed the clear nonsense added by 201. whatever. Now you have taken it back to Bakafish's first update - he had done a second with a few more line in. When I put in "vandalism" I mean fixing it, not carrying it out - please compare versions. - [[User:81.101.40.82|81.101.40.82]] 16:46, 14 January 2007 (PST)
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== Cat scene ==
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:I brushed away the claws my sister was playing with and picked myself up. Then I lifted Shamisen from my sister's wrist and shifted him down off my bed. Being the bothersome cat he is, he hmphed <!-- hmphed, is that a word? --> and jumped right back onto my bed.
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:So then I changed, my sister standing by the side there pinching Shamisen's furry cheeks. He immediately resisted and started to scamper away with a 'pata pata', <!-- Sound effects. >.> --> only to have two hands latch onto his tail. So, he let out a 'ぐふにゃあ' <!-- Gufunyaa or guhnyaa --> and promptly escaped by running out of my room, my sister following him. Since they started this noise right in the morning, I was awake in no time at all.
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:As I walked out of my room and started to wash my face, I saw my sister crooning 'Kitty scarf~' <!-- Neko Mafura~a. ^_^ --> while letting Shamisen sit on the back of her neck. Shamisen was hanging on to my sister's woolen sweater, trying to defy her as best he could. Accordingly, I decided to ignore them calmly.
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I suggest the following:
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I brushed away the claws my sister was playing with and picked myself up. Then I lifted Shamisen from my sister's wrist and shifted him down off my bed. Being the bothersome cat he is, he 'hmphed' and jumped right back onto my bed.
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So then I changed, my sister standing by the side there pinching Shamisen's furry cheeks. He immediately resisted and started to scamper away with a 'pata pata', only to have two hands latch onto his tail. So, he let out a complaining 'gnnyaa!' and promptly escaped by running out of my room, my sister in pursuit. Since they started this noise first thing in the morning, I was awake in no time at all.
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As I walked out of my room and started to wash my face, I saw my sister crooning 'Kitty scarf~' while draping Shamisen on the back of her neck. Shamisen was hanging on to my sister's woolen sweater, trying to defy her as best he could. Accordingly, I decided to ignore them calmly.
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--[[User:Nutcase|Nutcase]] 06:02, 13 February 2007 (PST)

Revision as of 16:02, 13 February 2007

Erm, yeah I removed the clear nonsense added by 201. whatever. Now you have taken it back to Bakafish's first update - he had done a second with a few more line in. When I put in "vandalism" I mean fixing it, not carrying it out - please compare versions. - 81.101.40.82 16:46, 14 January 2007 (PST)

Cat scene

I brushed away the claws my sister was playing with and picked myself up. Then I lifted Shamisen from my sister's wrist and shifted him down off my bed. Being the bothersome cat he is, he hmphed and jumped right back onto my bed.
So then I changed, my sister standing by the side there pinching Shamisen's furry cheeks. He immediately resisted and started to scamper away with a 'pata pata', only to have two hands latch onto his tail. So, he let out a 'ぐふにゃあ' and promptly escaped by running out of my room, my sister following him. Since they started this noise right in the morning, I was awake in no time at all.
As I walked out of my room and started to wash my face, I saw my sister crooning 'Kitty scarf~' while letting Shamisen sit on the back of her neck. Shamisen was hanging on to my sister's woolen sweater, trying to defy her as best he could. Accordingly, I decided to ignore them calmly.


I suggest the following:

I brushed away the claws my sister was playing with and picked myself up. Then I lifted Shamisen from my sister's wrist and shifted him down off my bed. Being the bothersome cat he is, he 'hmphed' and jumped right back onto my bed.

So then I changed, my sister standing by the side there pinching Shamisen's furry cheeks. He immediately resisted and started to scamper away with a 'pata pata', only to have two hands latch onto his tail. So, he let out a complaining 'gnnyaa!' and promptly escaped by running out of my room, my sister in pursuit. Since they started this noise first thing in the morning, I was awake in no time at all.

As I walked out of my room and started to wash my face, I saw my sister crooning 'Kitty scarf~' while draping Shamisen on the back of her neck. Shamisen was hanging on to my sister's woolen sweater, trying to defy her as best he could. Accordingly, I decided to ignore them calmly.

--Nutcase 06:02, 13 February 2007 (PST)

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