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Couldnt that be changed into: "'''that long'''." |
Couldnt that be changed into: "'''that long'''." |
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| + | no offense, but the latter half of the chapter feels like reading from machine translation. |
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| + | Maybe you need to make it more smooth? [[User:Xenocross|Xenocross]] 03:54, 19 March 2012 (CDT) |
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Revision as of 10:54, 19 March 2012
- it seems that he hasn’t lost consciousness that much period of time.
Couldnt that be changed into: "that long."
no offense, but the latter half of the chapter feels like reading from machine translation. Maybe you need to make it more smooth? Xenocross 03:54, 19 March 2012 (CDT)
