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PART 1 Content Discussion
The use of "horror" in "The «Linear» released by the rapier user was so perfect that there was no need for horror." seems out of place. I suggest that the sentence could be reworded to still keep a variation of the horror aspect as "The «Linear» released by the rapier user was so perfect that it was beyond scary."