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Here's my comments: |
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| − | - page numbers |
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| − | - quote page should be after table of contents |
+ | - quote page should be after table of contents<br/> |
| − | - Chapter 7 does not have headers |
+ | - Chapter 7 does not have headers<br/> |
| − | - the text for Chapters 5,6,7,8,9,10,11 and epilogue used older versions of the text (they're not yet proofread) |
+ | - the text for Chapters 5,6,7,8,9,10,11 and epilogue used older versions of the text (they're not yet proofread)<br/> |
Uhmm... I don't know if it's intentional, but why is it that your name in the credits page has a smaller font size? :O |
Uhmm... I don't know if it's intentional, but why is it that your name in the credits page has a smaller font size? :O |
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Revision as of 09:25, 28 August 2012
Congratulations on the completion of volume 4 ^^.
Now that I go and see the whole volume, I notice something in the Illustration Page: that grape illustration called page 155, shouldn't it be an illustration that is put at the end of the chapter "Grapes" -On Duty-? Why is it the next illustration of "Land of Acknowledgement"?
And this volume has some in-between illustrations in the chapter "Solo" and chapter "The Country Tower". I think we should know where exactly they are put in the original novel, so that we can decide the order of the chapters' content and the illustrations.
BloodyKitty (talk) 11:35, 26 August 2012 (CDT)
User753, as usual, the full text page is much appreciated... :D
Thank you, BloodyKitty. Ah, that's right.... 0_0 The 'grapes' should obviously be after the chapter 'grapes'. I was careless again... hehe I'll make the necessary changes. Thanks for pointing that out! ^_^
Yeah, I think I'll insert some hidden comments in the chapters to point out where the pictures should go.
Sorry for the late reply.
Thank you for the help BloodyKitty-san.
And thank you for the pointer Ella-san, it's really helpful.
Btw, about reference #9;regarding 'hovee', I just realized that it's a nickname for 'hovercraft'. Mind if I change the pdf version footnote regarding that?
... Pdf version... Oh, I almost forgot. The pdf will be uploaded as soon as the rechecking and bookmarking finished.-/-User753-Talk- 00:09, 28 August 2012 (CDT)
Don't worry about it, no one's in a rush :) Yes, it is short for hovercraft or hover vehicle. You can change it ^_^ Thank you! I'll be looking forward to it... XD
Ella.servantes (talk) 00:43, 28 August 2012 (CDT)
Thank you for the wait. Here's the link, please check it.-/-User753-Talk- 01:34, 28 August 2012 (CDT)
Fast... 0_0
Here's my comments:
- page numbers
- quote page should be after table of contents
- Chapter 7 does not have headers
- the text for Chapters 5,6,7,8,9,10,11 and epilogue used older versions of the text (they're not yet proofread)
Uhmm... I don't know if it's intentional, but why is it that your name in the credits page has a smaller font size? :O
Ella.servantes (talk) 02:24, 28 August 2012 (CDT)
