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| − | The third sentence/line is a bit awkward. Considering how the sentence flows, perhaps it is "Anxiety and expectations filled and took over the heart". |
+ | The third sentence/line is a bit awkward. Considering how the sentence flows, perhaps it is "Anxiety and expectations filled and took over the heart".--[[User:Vu.P|Vu.P]] ([[User talk:Vu.P|talk]]) 20:37, 30 March 2013 (CDT) |
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| + | Ok thx you can edit anytime you want btw. :D |
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| + | --[[user:Magykalman|Magykalman]] |
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Edit Suggestions[edit]
The third sentence/line is a bit awkward. Considering how the sentence flows, perhaps it is "Anxiety and expectations filled and took over the heart".--Vu.P (talk) 20:37, 30 March 2013 (CDT)
Ok thx you can edit anytime you want btw. :D --Magykalman
